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Welcome back to Hearts Can Change Hands.
It is the final part.
I hope you will like it.
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Welcome back to Hearts Can Change Hands.
It is the final part.
I hope you will like it.
Please rate and comment.
Sarah:" Hi dad!"
Ed:" Sarah!"
Sarah:" I'm sorry I haven't called."
Ed:" It's okay. You're planning weddings."
Sarah:" Yeah..I wanted to know what you think about the wedding stuff?"
Ed:" I'm happy when you're happy and you're happy!"
Sarah:" I am. I can't belive I'm getting married in a week."
Ed:" You've been engaged over a month. Are you going shoping with Mirinda today?"
Sarah:" Yes, I'll better get resdy. Bye dad!"
Ed:" Bye!"
We arrived at Evies shop around two.
Mirinda:" Are you ready?"
Sarah:" As ready as I'll ever be.."
Mirinda:" What do you think about this one?"
Sarah:" I haven't talked to Kevin since I got engaged."
Mirinda:" Is this what's bothering you?"
Sarah:" Yes. I really want to see him before the wedding."
Mirinda:" Try this!"
I found the dress I was looking. It was the second one I tried that fit perfectly. Sarah:" Do you know where he is?"
Mirinda:" He moved away from collage into a flat. It's not far from your place."
Sarah:" I didn't know."
Mirinda:" I know he wanted to come and see you. He had something important that he wanted to tell you. I have got no idea what.."
Sarah:" I really really want to see him."
Mirinda:" Don't worry he will come before the wedding."
Sarah:" Good."
Mirinda:" We should have one last dinner as a family, the four of us, before we will get a bigger family."
Sarah:" Well..I'm free anytime."
Mirinda:" How about this saturday?"
Sarah:" Sounds good to me."
Mirinda:" I'll call you. See you!"
Sarah:" Bye!"
I went to my car and drove home, still thinking about Kevin. The next day..
Sarah:" Hi hon!"
Brad:" Hei - hei!"
Sarah:" When are you coming home?"
Brad:" I'll be home around 16:00. What did you do today?"
Sarah:" I went shopping with Mirinda and bought wedding dress. And now I'm going to clean the house."
Brad:" You don't have to clean alone! When I'm coming home, I'll clean with you!"
Sarah:" Okay. I'll see you then!"
Brad:" Bye sweetheart!"
Sarah:" Bye - bye!"
Just when I was cleaning the kitchen someone rang the doorbell. Sarah:" Kevin?!"
Kevin:" Come on, give me a hug!"
Sarah:" I'm so glad to see you!"
Kevin:" When I heared you got engaged - I packed my bags and came to tell you.."
Sarah:" To tell me?"
Kevin:" Don't marry him! Marry me - I love you! I've always loved you."
Sarah:" KEVIN! You're too late! I've moved on. I don't love you anymore. I'm getting married soon." Kevin:" Then take this! It's a wedding gift. I'm not coming to the wedding."
Sarah:" Thank you."
Kevin:" I'm sorry...I was a chiken. I should have told you a long time ago. I'm sorry!"
Sarah:" Don't apologize."
Kevin:" I need to leave! Bye!"
Sarah:" Bye."
He gave me this picture. He made it a long, long, long, long, long, long time ago. After the whole insitent I started to work out to clear my head.
I can't belive he told me loves me.
He loves me...
Brad:" Hei! Going to bed already?"
Sarah:" Hei. Yes."
Brad:" I saw that amazing picture in the living room. Who made it? It's absolutely amazing! I'm telling you whoever made it must be in love with you, because it's - WOW!"
Sarah:" It's really old."
Brad:" I'm telling you - that picture is.."
Sarah:" The soup is on the counter. And I'm going to our family dinner on saturday. I'm really tired. Good night!"
Brad:" Okay..Sleep tight!"
We both arrived at parent's place around noon.
Ed:" Hi honey!"
Mirinda:" It's so good to see you both!"
Kevin:" You too!"
Sarah:" Hi dad."
Mirinda:" C'mn..I made spaghetties."
The athmosphere was more then thick.
Ed:" Kevin, you really should come fishing with me someday."
Kevin:" I'd love to!"
Mirinda:" Kevin did you talk to Sarah?"
Sarah:" Yes, he did."
Mirinda:" What did you wanted to tell her?"
Ed:" What are we talking about?"
Kevin:" It was nothing. Didn't matter. It's too late."
Ed:" What are we talking about?"
Mirinda:" Don't ask me."
Sarah:" Thank you Mirinda for the nice dinner."
Ed:" You're not leaving? It might be your last meal with us as a Sarah Smith."
Kevin:" Maybe she will change her mind!"
Sarah:" I'm not leaving. I'm just full."
Mirinda:" I'm glad you liked it."
Ed:" What did you two talked about when you went shoping? Mirinda came home worried more then ever. She even mentioned that she dosen't want you to make a mistake!"
Mirinda:" ED! Maybe you will go fishing right now?"
Sarah:" We talked about catering. That's all.."
Ed:" Okay. C'mn Kevin! Let's go!"
Mirinda:" Thank you for helping me with the dishes."
Sarah:" No problem."
Mirinda:" Is there something bothering you?"
Sarah:" I'm not sure about this marriage."
Mirinda:" Everybody are nervous before their wedding."
Sarah:" I'm not sure I love Brad."
Mirinda:" I can't tell you who to pick! The only thing I can tell is - choose the one who makes you happy!"
Sarah:" Thank you! I'm going home then..I'll see you at the wedding!"
Mirinda:" We'll be there!"
Kevin:" I told her how I felt. She said it's too late."
Ed:" Nobody knows her better then I do. If she would want to be with Brad then she wouldn't be thinking about you the whole time..."
Kevin:" She's thinking about me?"
Ed:" Yes. I know she loves you. The problem is will she figure it out before it's too late?"
This is my wedding chapel. Sarah:" Oh..I'm so nervous."
Mirinda:" It's perfectly normal. Trust me!"
Sarah:" No, it's not normal. I can't stop thinking about Kevin."
Mirinda:" I wish he could have been here."
Sarah:" Yeah..Me too.."
Quests arrived..
They aplaused when I walked into the chapel.
the Priest:" Dearly beloved - we have gathered here to..... The Priest:" Do you, Sarah Smith, take this man to be your...."
Sarah whispering to Brad:" We need to talk."
Brad:" NOW?"
Sarah:" Now!"
Brad:" We'll be right back!"
Mirinda:" Do you think we should go to see what's going on?"
Ed:" I think you know what's going on.."
Mirinda & Ed together:" KEVIN!"
Mirinda:" I knew she loved him."
Ed:" I think everybody but themselves knew. Even Brad confessed to me, that he knows something is going on with the two of them.."
Mirinda:" I hope he will be okay."
Ed:" He will be.."
Sarah:" I'm sorry! I can't!"
Brad:" What are you talking about?"
Sarah:" I can't marry you! I'm so sorry!"
Brad:" WHAT? Why? Don't you love me?" Sarah:" No..."
Brad:" You can't be serious."
Sarah:" I'm sorry."
Brad:" You love..."
Sarah:" Kevin.."
Brad:" I'm sorry too..Go on then.."
I called the taxi...
I ran away from my own wedding to arrive at...
Kevin's apartment.
Kevin:" Who's there?"
Opening the door..
Kevin:" SAR! I thought - weddings..What's going on? Come in!"
Sarah:" I finally understood what I want..I want you! I love you! I couldn't marry him...I love you!" Sarah:" I love you with all my heart!"
Kevin:" I love you too!"
The end!

Hearts can change hands - the conclusion

Aug 29, 2008 by katlin194
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    28 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 30, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    OOOOOh!!\:D This was great. Nice ending to. \:D \:D

    On Aug 30, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:

    Really nice ending\:wub\: \:D 5.0

    On Aug 30, 2008 katlin194 wrote:

    thanks!

    On Aug 30, 2008 whitmartinez wrote:

    \:wub\: \:rah\: Great ending to a great story. Hope you'll do some more sometime.

    On Aug 30, 2008 KDLANG0 wrote:

    Thank you! Iīve rated it with 5,0, hope thatīs ok with you?! \:D Love happy endings \:wub\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:

    i love your story\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 mooshier wrote:

    very cool story - kept me coming back - I'm a sucker for romance \:wub\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 maryash wrote:

    really great, very romantic\:wub\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 Dr-X56 wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: Awwwww!

    Happy endings..

    On Aug 30, 2008 misha1013 wrote:

    nice ending ....wish it didn't have to end there buit i love it...good job\:wub\: \:rah\: \:P \:cool\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    I loved it so much!! great happy ending!!\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    Great! I'm glad that Kevin and Sarah are happy now! \:D Only poor Brad is sad \:\( She should have told him before the wedding. Anyway, I like happy endings!\:rah\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 wrote:

    yet another brilliant chapter, sarah reminds me of rihanna, well done cant wait for the next part \:wub\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 FluffyAuntyDi wrote:

    very good\:wub\:

    On Aug 30, 2008 Christoph11 wrote:

    awww man! its over\:\(
    but great ending! i loved it! this would be a kickass movie!\:rah\:

    On Aug 31, 2008 tiffnechopstix92 wrote:

    I'll admit, I haven't read ANY of the Hearts Can Change Hands stories, but it caught my eye today, and I'm glad I read it. I'm not sure what exactly the whole story was about, but I loved the conclusion!! haha AND, you used my boutique - which made it extra special. Thanks and keep on writing. \:\) \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 31, 2008 QG wrote:

    lovely! it's pretty sad for brad tough....
    aawww, i have mixed feelings\:\( \:\) \:wub\:

    On Aug 31, 2008 nikki613 wrote:

    Cant believe its over \:\( But excellent job enyways! 5.0 \:rah\:

    On Aug 31, 2008 Ultra-Violet wrote:

    WOW that was such a happy ending\:D I love it.\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 31, 2008 Murphy75 wrote:

    CUte ending! I'm glad that they ended up together!\:wub\:

    On Aug 31, 2008 butteryy wrote:

    This was the perfect ending to an amazing story \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 1, 2008 mad4u19 wrote:

    I prefered brad\:\( \:mad\: but good story

    On Sep 1, 2008 babygurlbx92 wrote:

    \:wub\: \:rah\: \:cool\:

    On Sep 1, 2008 SuperStar94 wrote:

    Ahhhh. What a lovely ending \:wub\: Brilliant story! \:D

    On Sep 2, 2008 jayb04 wrote:

    Great ending to a great story!\:wub\:

    On Sep 5, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    The screenies rocked..the story was incredible and the end makes me want to know more about these chars

    On Sep 7, 2008 wrote:

    great ending! i love all your storys they are great!\:wub\:

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