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Part 2 of The Girl Next Door. This time it will be from Susan's point of view about the boy next door. I am just learning how to do the dialogue, so please bear with me.

Part 2 of The Girl Next Door. This time it will be from Susan's point of view about the boy next door. I am just learning how to do the dialogue, so please bear with me. As you may know from Guy (next door) my name is Susan and I just moved here with my cat Jazzy to Pleasantville. I bought this small house and I am excited to work on the yard and decorate. This is my Jazzy, I just love her to pieces. Today I invited Guy over for lunch. I served my famous fruit salad. "Hey, I really love your fruit salad. Can you show me how to make it sometime?" " It would be my pleasure. The recipe has been in my family for years." " It's a date. Speaking of dates, would you like to go dancing later." Of course I agreed, but first we stopped at Reds Dinner for a quick bite to eat ..... ......and some hand holding. Then it was off to the club, I can't remember the name....... Guy is a great dancer. We had so much......... .....fun, can't wait to go again. We had such a great time and just look at the roses Guy sent the next day. There was a mushy note as well. You know what they say about red roses. I have never been happier. Guy is such a wonderful man. He...... .....laughs at all my jokes. Slow dances with me in my living room. Knows how to give great massages. Does not drop me when I leap into his arms. He always knows the right thing to say. I can not stop thinking about him. I know he is the one because we just click. I hope that he feels the same way about me. Yeah, It's the first day of spring, Jazzy is happy too. I hope you enjoyed this installment. I am eager to get started on the next. Please leave a comment if you like. Also I am open to any suggestions.

The Girl Next Door Part 2

May 25, 2007 by leifofdel
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    9 Comment(s) posted so far

    On May 25, 2007 simsbabies wrote:

    it was gd cant wait for next part\:wub\:

    On May 26, 2007 chickaboom wrote:

    I loved it, I had to go back and read the first chapter to catch up. I liked this chapter too can't wait for the next chapter!\:rah\:

    On May 26, 2007 wrote:

    Very cute compliment to the first story. :-)

    On May 27, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Cute. I loved it. \:\)

    On May 27, 2007 photoman299 wrote:

    Good job\:rah\:

    On May 27, 2007 molli17 wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On May 28, 2007 heyunome11 wrote:

    Kinda short but sweet!\:\)

    On May 28, 2007 Iceanna wrote:

    Sweet story..\:\)

    On Mar 8, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:\)

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