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Hey, We're the Jamison Twins (Aiden in the front & Aaron in the back). We heard our friends Haley & Hannah told you guys their story. So we wanted to tell our story too. We hope you enjoy. (And for the record Haley & Hannah did not beat us at those video games, no matter what they say).

Hey, We're the Jamison Twins (Aiden in the front & Aaron in the back). We heard our friends Haley & Hannah told you guys their story. So we wanted to tell our story too. We hope you enjoy. (And for the record Haley & Hannah did not beat us at those video games, no matter what they say). We play little league baseball. We love it & it takes up a lot of our time. Hannah plays too, Haley is one of the cheerleaders. "Aiden looooooooooves Haley." "Shut-up Aaron I do not." "Aiden loves Haley, Aiden loves Haley." "Shut-up I'm gonna ...." "Hey, get off of me owww... why I outa" "Sorry back to the story. Okay, Mom we're not fighting anymore. Okay we said." Anyway, Dad loves to talk about the games over breakfast. Play by play. Sometimes it's great, but when we lose we have to talk about what we did wrong. "Well Aiden, you have to admit talking over breakfast is a lot better than Mom." Oh yeah we should mention that our Mom YELLS at the umps at every game. That's what else Dad is talking about. Mom almost got kicked out AGAIN. It is embarrassing we wish she'd miss a game but owning your own business you can close any time you want. Aiden gets up early to help Mom & watch her cook. He also goes to the bakery with her. Aaron doesn't care much for cooking he loves eating. Gee, Aiden what are you trying to do, make everybody think that's all I do. That is not all I do. Okay, I'll admit he is a very good artist. He's entering the art fair at school. I hope he wins first place. "What are you painting?" "It's a portrait." "Is it of me?" "No, it's of the most beautiful woman in the world." "Who is that? Doesn't look like much to me." "I'm still painting you dope, get out until I finish." "Oh it's Mom. Well you better win then." "Hannah might win, she's entering the contest too." "Hey, I have an idea. Let's invite them over and see what Hannah painted." "How about we just invite them over to play." "Okay, but I like my idea better." Once the girls got over there Aiden forgot all about that idea. He got so busy playing Cops and Robbers, & tag, then we played a little baseball. "Well, at least I was playing ..." "No you were so excited to see Haley, you practically attacked her to say hi." We were playing a ..." No you're in Looooo..." "Don't say it Aaron, just don't say it." They stayed for dinner and of course we talked about baseball. Hannah & Aaron won, so of course she talked about the game. "Hey you sound a little bitter to me." "You chose Hannah because you know she's the best player. Haley, doesn't even play baseball." "Hey not my fault you should teach her to play, Lover Boy." "Hey, stop hitting me, ooookay I'll stop with the jokes, looover oww!" Well, we gotta go, we're playing a game now. "No, Mom we're not fighting, we're playing a game." "You don't have to check on us. We're not fighting. See you guys next time." Thank you for reading please comment.
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Our Story (The Boys) Part One

Jun 2, 2012 by lia2223
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    24 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Sep 20, 2006 toripitt wrote:

    yay im tha 1st 2 comment gr8 story nxt chapter nxt character plz\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 20, 2006 vkd wrote:

    Cute! Funny, love your style! Great custom content too!

    On Sep 20, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:

    WOW! Really great story!

    On Sep 21, 2006 zlsuter wrote:

    great story\:rah\:

    On Sep 21, 2006 cringo wrote:

    lovley couldnt tell which was which lol out of haley or hannah read that too great
    cringo:P
    5,0

    On Sep 21, 2006 gulbet wrote:

    funny story\:D love the dining room table.

    On Sep 22, 2006 Anna^-^ wrote:

    Cool story, but was the mom fit or something? Cause she was way skinny in the 2nd to last photo. Anyway great again!\:P 4.0

    On Sep 24, 2006 MoriaG wrote:

    going good, now combine the 2 stories!!

    On Sep 25, 2006 Adira wrote:

    Good story. Liked it. Hope for more!

    On Sep 26, 2006 xoxopinkprincessxoxo wrote:

    i hated it!\:mad\:

    On Sep 26, 2006 wrote:

    Brilliant!\:D

    On Sep 27, 2006 DIDA wrote:

    Nice start.\:\)

    On Sep 27, 2006 Cerulean Talon wrote:

    Very cute! I enjoyed the whole story. It was very well planned and put together. \:rah\:

    On Dec 18, 2006 manuela55 wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Jan 10, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thsnks!!\:\)

    On Feb 19, 2007 wrote:

    Awww! i love the way its written, with the boys arguing and everything, god sounds soo much like my twin brothers! u nailed the characters! R u a writer? x\:P

    On Mar 20, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:

    I just LOVE the guys haircut!!! \:wub\: where did you get it?! [just tell me if its free! otherwise,it doesnt matter \:rah\:]
    I liked the story,as well!!! \:P it's very nice,and I like your writing style... 2girl-twins and 2twin-boys... it seems interesting!!! \:D \:cool\:

    \:\)

    On Mar 21, 2007 wrote:

    Cute \:\) Not sarcastic sute, great cute

    On Jul 1, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice story. Thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Jan 8, 2008 lordeverglot wrote:

    love it, its great! more stories about them and Haley.
    See Ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\:P

    On Jan 9, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:

    They're such boys \:D I especially enjoyed their little bickering... So cute and fun!

    On Jan 13, 2008 wrote:

    \:\)Cute but a littley bowring

    On Feb 29, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:

    It's a cute story....\:P

    On Jun 10, 2009 Redjackrose1984 wrote:

    Hannah looks so cute with her little hair cute. Both the girls and the boys room and so cool.

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