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Our Story Part II Hannah's Diary
I have posted this story before, but I had to redo it with a new coverpage & not to mention my other game corrupted and I had to start over again. Luckily I have a great computer guy who found my saved files so I was able to keep some of my sims. I edited the story a little I hope you guys enjoy. I've finished this series so I'll post the other two stories I never posted
Enough rambling from me, please enjoy and comment. Thanks.
I have posted this story before, but I had to redo it with a new coverpage & not to mention my other game corrupted and I had to start over again. Luckily I have a great computer guy who found my saved files so I was able to keep some of my sims. I edited the story a little I hope you guys enjoy. I've finished this series so I'll post the other two stories I never posted
Enough rambling from me, please enjoy and comment. Thanks. Dear Diary, This is us at our birthday party, Haley grows up first. Then it's my turn. I'm starting to believe that I'll always be last to do everything. I've always thought that I'm fine just the way I am, but I don't know about that anymore. Diary, just give me time to explain what I mean. This is Haley all grown up. She's really beautiful. Everybody notices, especially boys. Unfortunately for them she only has eyes for Aiden Jamison. They've been in love since diapers, no matter what they say. They've already been out on several dates and I haven't even been on one. I don't want you to think I'm jealous of my sister because I'm not. I love my sister (I'm very happy for her), I just haven't been feeling like myself. I'm trying to rationalize my thoughts. Well, this is me all grown up. Everything in my life was going along perfectly. Haley and I both got the greatest birthday gifts you can imagine. Our parents are wonderful. So I was overjoyed at the great gifts we got. Seriously Diary, we came home from school and my mom had redecorated our rooms. It was amazing that it fit our individual personality. I mean Haley's room was the right amount of girl and mine was the right amount of me. She even got me a brand new easel, camera and you were laying on my desk. Again, I keep repeating everything was going along great. This is my room, a great haven to avoid "The Beast" (I'll explain more about that later). Notice the pic of me and my sis. This is Haley's new room. This is the perfect room for her. This is what my dad came home with for Haley. I mean she had been going on and on about how she wanted a little sports car. My dad is the Chief of Staff at Veronaville General Hospital, so she knew we could afford it (not to mention my mom owns a luxury car dealership). So of course they got a great deal on this car,but it didn't take anything away from the gift. I guess what I'm really trying to say is this car is just so Haley. My dad came home with this for me. I'm sure you're thinking Diary, big deal it's a beetle. This is the perfect car for me. I didn't even ask but my dad just knew it would be perfect. I was feeling proud of my parents. I was excited about going to school the next day everything was just perfect (at least I thought it was). High school is a different world. The people you were friends with in elementary and middle school just aren't the same. This is our high school Will Wright Private Academy. This is where I first noticed the change. Let me tell you about a couple of the students and teachers. Then I'll tell you when I noticed a change even in myself. This is Abigail Grey. Next to my sister she is the most popular girl in school. She is co-captain of the cheerleader squad (Haley is captain). Growing up we were all good friends. She'd sleep over our house and vise versa. No I think she just exists to make my life miserable (maybe not on purpose, but miserable none the lease). Wait I think I'm getting ahead of myself. I'll explain everything in a minute. This is my Bio class and these are just some of the students. You know some of them are important and some of them are not. Another thing I've learned about high school some people become very insifnificant and disposable. I know that's mean but it is a harsh reality. This is Mrs. Ann Chambers, she's our Bio teacher. She's great, always willing to lend a hand or an ear. Which she has to me since I discovered "The Beast" (best known to you as hormones). This is music class, which I love because this is what I see. I get to stand across from Aaron and I can look all I want (that's not staring because I have to look at him). Isn't he handsome? OMG I can't believe I'm saying that. What am I turning into? This is my absolute favorite class and my fovorite teacher. This is Ms. Jones and this is art class. This is another place where I can go and escape my horrible reality. This is the only place where lately I can be me. I'm a track star, (I've made all state 2 years in a row) I'm positive I'll get a scholarship for running. When I'm running I can be anybody and do anything. I know what you're thinking I'm just being a stupid teenage girl and by now I'm probably rambling and yeah I probably am. Let me just tell you when it started. I have to tell somebody or should I say something. I think if I get it out it'll help me feel better. It started two days after our birthday. That's when Aiden and Aaron turned 16. That's when it all happened. I can't really explain it, but my mom told me it's called hormones (I now refer to it as "The Beast") and I've even studied it in Bio. I just didn't know the things it could do to you. I didn't realize the turmoil it would cause in my life. This was the scene when I arrived to school. I know you're thinking she's just chatting with him right. Well, you would be wrong I know Abigail very well and she is just putting her hooks into him (or is it claws). Anyway, this is what I saw. Well, then my stupid teenage raging hormones ("The Beast") kicked in. I didn't even know I liked Aaron like that. We were just playing tag and baseball the other day and we've lived across the street from us all my life. I didn't know I liked him until I saw him talking to her. Whenever I need time to think, I do the only thing to me that makes sense. I go to the track (I do my best thinking when I'm running). To my surprise (and joy) I wasn't going to be alone that evening. There he was, (going the wrong way on the track) but there he was. I was elated to see him and at the same time angry. I don't know what's wrong with me. Then he challenged me to a race. I contemplated it and then I asked him if he ate dinner yet. He told me not yet. I told him good because he can prepare to eat my dust. (I thought it was pretty clever, he just laughed). I WON! I WON! He then gave me a hug to congratulate me. I wanted to turn back flips all over the track. My stomach was doing that thing that I'd only heard about, it was flipping for me. I keep wondering if he could feel it. Nah, I don't think he can, I hope he can't. We sat down and started talking. We talked about everything (except the way I feel about him). I was on the verge of telling him, when she showed up. It was Abigail. I hate to say it but she looked great and there I was standing there in my stinky old running clothes. I just said bye to both of them and went home feeling defeated. When I got home my mom was actually home (she works a lot trying to make sure her dealership is a success). We started talking. She asked me how my run was. I told her it was fine, but she saw right through my facade. Like I said before my mom is the greatest and acutally really cool (I know that's weird coming from a teenager). She is so easy to talk to. Everything just started pouring out of me. I told her the whole story. She patiently listened. She then told me wha I was going through was normal and all teenagers go through this phase. She then told me about this boy (who turned out to be my dad) who she had a crush on. She got out of the car and walked into her co-ed dorm and she saw him. He introduced himself and all she could say was uhhh. She said he kind of looked at her strange, laughed and went to his room. She said she couldn't do anything right when he was around (she told me she fell right in front of him, tripped over her own feet). She said she was sure he thought she was just a goofy freshman (he was a junior). Then her roomate Asia (Aaron and Aiden's mother) told her to just be herself and he'd see the great girl she was. She didn't believe her so she just stayed in her room (except when it was time for class). Then one day when she was running late for class she ran out the dorm and bumped right into HIM. She mumbled excuse me and kept going. Needless to say she was embarrassed and she said she waited until it was really late to go back to the dorm. She said when she walked through the door, she ran into him again. He told her we've gotta stop meeting like this. He then asked her out. They went out the day after finals and he told her how he'd liked her since the first day he saw her out the window of the dorm. That's why he wanted to be the first to meet her. Then Diary, she said something so profound. She told me she said all that to say that maybe Aaron like me already and he's just as nervous as I am. I told her I wish, but he's going out with Abigail and I'm too late. She said, "Never give up on love." Then she left me there to think. She said she and dad were going out and Haley and I were on our own tonight. So Haley decide we'd go to this great coffee shop where everybody hangs out. I told her I'd meet her there (because she was going shopping first). When I went to meet Haley at the coffee shop I saw them out on a date. I just left I couldn't stand to be there while they were there. I felt like I don't know my heart was breaking in a million pieces. It's "The Beast" that has me in turmoil. On one hand I didn't want to be angry or feel betrayed but I did. I was so mad at him and her, but then I thought he doesn't even know I like him. I don't think he even knows I'm alive. I mean of course he knows we grew up together, we live across the street from each other, we go to the same school and we're on the same track team. But he still doesn't know I exist. So I made some decisions today and I don't know if its the right thing to do. Diary, I am so sick of being known as one of "the guys." I'm tired of not being noticed so I decided maybe it's time for a change. I want what Haley has with Aiden. I knew what I had to do Diary. The change starts here at the beauty shop. I know what you're thinkin; you can't believe I'm changing my looks for a boy. Well, I've figured out it's not just about the boy. It's about me and how I've been feeling. It's "The Beast"; it's changing me making me different. So the change started at the beauty shop. I think I love it. My hair is all in curls and I've got on make-up. Surprisingly I love it, I love the way I look. I then moved on to the next phase. "The Beast" was pushing me on. I AM AT THE MALL; I don't go to the mall. I just tell my mom bring me back something decient. This "Beast" is something; it got me to the beauty shop, now the mall. I was scared Diary, I didn't know what it would bring next. Well, here is the finished product of the beauty shop and the mall. When I was coming home I guess Aaron saw me out the window or something because he called and said he was coming over with Aiden. He said he needed help with the Bio assignment. I didn't know what to expect him to think. I know it wasn't the outfit because I didn't put that on until I got in the house. When he got there I didn't see any homework in sight, he started flirting with me. "The Beast" died for a minute and I was acutally quite taken aback that because I change my look he took time to notice me now. I thought to myself did I really change for a guy, then I realized no I did it for me. I figured out I could still run track and be a girl. I finally understand that there is nothing wrong with embracing who I am and what I'm becoming. Funny thing after I rationalized it in my mind, he asked me on a date. Then "The Beast" reared its ugly head and I leaped into his arms. I conceded to the beast and it felt great. We went to Le Magnifique! Piano Bar (Bluewater Village). We talked and I had to ask him, because the Hannah in me came out. I had to ask him if he only noticed me now because I changed my appearance. Diary, he then told me the greatest news I've ever heard. He told me that he and Abigail (cringe) went to the coffee shop because he was trying to think of the perfect way to ask me out. He also said Haley was in on it and that's why she suggested we eat dinner there, but I didn't show up and he lost his courage again. Then he said, "By the way she's going out with Sam Donaldson (Quaterback). He also said Aiden pushed him all the way to my house, because he was so nervous. I wanted to turn flips. He told me how ever since his birthday his "Beast" (he actually called it hormones) had been raging as well. I can't wait until my mom comes home so I can tell her she was right (as usual, I don't know how parents do that). We actually had a dream date. Guess what Diary at the end of this fabulous date I got MY FIRST KISS. I'm on the moon right now. Nothing can bring me down. So thanks for letting me pour my heart out to you, but I gotta go. Aaron's on the phone for me. "HALEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH MY DIARY???? I CAN'T EVEN USE THE PHOW WITHOUT YOU GETTING IN MY STUFF!" "Hey Han, it's not my fault you left it out. It was very interesting." "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU! GET OUT OF MY ROOM!!!!!!!" Thanks for reading everybody and Thanks for all the great custom content.
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34 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jan 7, 2008 donaldch wrote:
cool
On Jan 7, 2008 captainlicious wrote:
Such a nice story
On Jan 7, 2008 plushies_lovergg wrote:
Such a nice story! I can't wait for the next part. I love "the beast"
On Jan 7, 2008 jero22 wrote:
nice
On Jan 7, 2008 albaby wrote:
i like it. however, the thumbnails are pretty weird. they're oversized. but its ok, good story anyway.
On Jan 7, 2008 Platinumplaygurl82 wrote:
nice story.. beautiful sims
On Jan 7, 2008 +Deep_sin+ wrote:
Romantic ^)
On Jan 7, 2008 katlin194 wrote:
Beautiful pictures, nice story!
On Jan 7, 2008 spicylove wrote:
wonderful photos great story
On Jan 7, 2008 ThatGirl1 wrote:
wonderful story!!
On Jan 7, 2008 hanzo11 wrote:
that was awesome!!! Loved it! I'm called Hannah too! lol. How on earth did you make all the places? I would love to know! Sign my guestbook!
On Jan 7, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Jan 7, 2008 BoodaMae wrote:
Cute, cute, cute, cute, cute!
I LOVED it! Please keep going! 
On Jan 7, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
Good story, I actually like how you arranged it on here, so we just scroll down instead of flipping.
On Jan 7, 2008 babygurlbx92 wrote:
On Jan 8, 2008 itachigirl wrote:
yayness!!!!
On Jan 8, 2008 lordeverglot wrote:
love it love it!
This teenage stories are so interesting,well since i am 16 years old,right?
sweet sixteen!
p.s. cool story, keep the good work, please continue writting this story or something simmilar. see ya!
On Jan 8, 2008 wrote:
Awesome story!
it! cant wait to read the next one. you have some really nice stuff aswell. i love the bedroom!! 
On Jan 8, 2008 vicarious37 wrote:
I loved your story
It was very endearing. I hope you'll continue
On Jan 8, 2008 Selena13 wrote:
On Jan 8, 2008 ,xPheobe. wrote:
Great Story!
On Jan 8, 2008 wrote:
good story!
where did u get all those good clothes?
On Jan 9, 2008 mollymooh@insightbb.com wrote:
OMG where did you get Haley's hair in the first picture as a teen???
It's soooooooooooo cute.
-Nick J. is off the chain
p.s I like the story
On Jan 9, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:
On Jan 9, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:
Oh my, that's such a good presentation of a teenagemind! So realistic and I can really relate to the way you've protrayed Hannah, the insecurities and "the beast". Great job!
On Jan 9, 2008 seelindarun wrote:
OMG, what an adorable story!
I totally love the track you built! Not many sim girls are athletic, and this really added to Hannah's character without making her absolutely geeky. Even though it's about a teenage girl, really anybody could read it and understand her fears. Great job! 
On Jan 11, 2008 spicylove wrote:
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On Jan 13, 2008 SMB2121 wrote:
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On Jan 17, 2008 ksinclair878 wrote:
First: I loved the story. I'm glad you combined the twins. Second: Where did you get all the amazing custom content? Just tell me it was for FREE if not then I'm going to be a little angry. Anyway the most important thing was I loved the story. Keep it up!!!
On Jan 17, 2008 MinnieID wrote:
very very nice.
On Feb 29, 2008 civetinja wrote:
Thanks for sharing !
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On Apr 9, 2008 wrote:
This is a really cute story, I like the voice you use. She sounds smart but still like a teenager.