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It's been a while that I submited the last part,
I'm sorry it took a while I've been very busy remodeling in real life.
so I'll take ya a bit back

Tommy glazed out of the window...
Everything crossed his mind after he came to Riverview.
Thinking back about the man he had spoken to, sleeping on a bench near the cemetery. The story the lady told him at City Hall. What he just experienced..... Wait what had the lady at City Hall tell him, what was the lady’s name. He/she knew everything about the history of Dutch Hall. Fenny, Tammy, or was it Brenny. I need a phonebook, maybe they can help me. He thought........

Tommy looked up the adress in the phonebook

It's been a while that I submited the last part,
I'm sorry it took a while I've been very busy remodeling in real life.
so I'll take ya a bit back

Tommy glazed out of the window...
Everything crossed his mind after he came to Riverview.
Thinking back about the man he had spoken to, sleeping on a bench near the cemetery. The story the lady told him at City Hall. What he just experienced..... Wait what had the lady at City Hall tell him, what was the lady’s name. He/she knew everything about the history of Dutch Hall. Fenny, Tammy, or was it Brenny. I need a phonebook, maybe they can help me. He thought........

Tommy looked up the adress in the phonebook
 Tommy went over to the Brenny residence, The woman from City Hall told him that they might be able to help him. Tommy walked over to the front door and greeted Barb Brenny. After Tommy introduced himself, he began to tell Barb the story, about his mother and that he inherited Dutch Hall. He also told Barb about the kitchen and the incident on the roof early this morning.

Tommy told her, he had heard that she and Fred knew everything about Riverview.
Barb blushed… ‘Well, my sister and I do know indeed a lot about Riverview we write stories about the legends of the town’ she told Tommy.
 Barb told Tommy that she should inform her sister, and that she would call him later that day or the next morning.

An hour later Fred came home. Barb told her everything about Tommy. And that he had asked them for help. Fred told Barb hat she went out for a while to walk and figure out where to start the search.
Fred got curious and went over to Dutch Hall.
At night the house gave her even more shivers then it did during the day.
 Fred looked through the window into the entrance hall.
Oh my this house is really old.
She didn't see Tommy or anything else for that matter.
Tommy must be off to bed, she thought.
 Huh.... what is that? The hairs in the back of her neck went straight up, her jaw dropped. Fred stared at the purple glow. She automatically followed it through the dining room until it went into the kitchen... Fred was stunned, she couldn't believe what she saw. The legend is true… Dutch Hall is haunted by an unknown ghost!

Fred knew the story about a tragedy that struck a young family somewhere in the 1800. The legend tells: On a stormy night a lightning bolt struck Dutch Hall. Nobody knows what truly happened, but the next morning the house was empty and deserted. No one knows what happened to the young family. There were no remains found in the house or the perimeter. Some say the lightning hit the family, and the family vanished. Others say the family left early in the morning.

The barn next to the house burned down a year later. No one was in or near the house...
 Later that day Barb called Tommy to tell her that they would help him.
Barb asked Tommy to come by the house the next morning. She asked him to come to 14 Riverview Square.

The Next morning Tommy drove to 14 Riverview Square. It was one of the old townhouses in the centre of Riverview.

 Tommy knocked on the door. Fred opened the door asking how she could help the young man that was standing in front of her.

Tommy asked: ‘Is this 14 Riverview Square?’
‘Yes’ said Fred.
Tommy said: ‘I'm looking for Barb Brenny she asked me to come over to this address.’
‘Oh! That's my sister! I'm Fred Brenny! So you must be Tommy. Please come on in!’



 Tommy began to tell Fred the story of his mother and what happened at Dutch Hall since he arrived.
Fred told Tommy the legend of Dutch Hall and when she was done, Tommy asked what the name was of the family that had lived there, and who lived there after them.
Fred explained that the disappearance of the family had shocked the small town. The people where very superstitious back then. No one lived there ever since, and no one knows the name of the family that lived there. The people that lived back then took it to their graves. Dutch Hall has been empty ever since according to the legend, Fred said. ‘Barb and I will do a bit of research and will go from there. We will call you as soon as we have something to go on.’

Fred didn't tell Tommy that she came over last night and what she had seen trough the window. She would tell him later, there's no need to spook him any more after what he had been trough.
 Later that evening Fred and Barb talked about Dutch Hall and the legends of Riverview. Somehow it was all connected to each other. All they needed to do was to find out what the link was. They decided to go to Dutch Hall in the morning.

Barb called Tommy to tell him they would come over the next day.
 Before Fred went to bed she surfed the web for information and documents about Dutch Hall so they could review it when they went over to Tommy. The next morning Fred and Barb went over to Dutch Hall. As they arrived at the gate it swung wide open. They looked at each other... their look was enough for the sisters to understand each other. They past the gate and walked towards the front door Fred & Barb stood nailed to the ground when the reached the frontdoor th door slowly opend with a skreetching sound.

Tommy Fred yelled... her voice echoed trough the grand hall

I'm in the kitchen replied Tommy.. Fred tolled Barb and Tommy what she had found on the internet the night before...
The document with the name of the family had been sealed on orders of City Hall. Only the Commissions Board of Riverview can open these files.

‘And how are we going to get the Board to open the files?’ Tommy asked.

‘Well, I think I might know a way…’ Fred said. ‘I'll call you both later!’ she said.
Before Tommy or Barb could ask any further, she was gone.
 Fred stormed down the hill and back to the city.
Thoughts going through her mind..


Did Fred found a way???? Meanwhile back at Dutch Hall, Barb and Tommy searched for further information on the internet and in the old books....

They found tons of different versions about the house and the family who had lived there.

 While Tommy and Barb went on with their search, Tommy felt like they were being watched. He looked out the window but didn't see anything. He did notice however that it was getting dark.

He said to Barb: ‘It's getting late, let's continue tomorrow.’
Barb also looked out of the window, she felt something too.
‘You’re right, it's getting late. I'll see if Fred found something out. I'll call you later.’
 When Tommy and Barb walked down they heard something in the hallway. When they walked around the corner they froze… was this real what they saw? ... They just looked... They tried to move or speak but they were nailed to the floor. They couldn't move and they were speechless...

The Ghost vanished.....

House on the Hill The story (2)

Nov 12, 2009 by liberty
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    19 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 12, 2009 spitzmagic wrote:

    Congrats Mike your story is on the front page....\:rah\:  I loved it, spooky, I hope Fred is ok, nice screenies too...it's so cool seeing Barb and Fred there...\:rah\: bravo....\:rah\:

    On Nov 12, 2009 fredbrenny wrote:

    Yeay!!! Index page! Fred seems OK...Weird to see her back in Riverview where it all began! Great build up to a spooky story!!!!

    On Nov 12, 2009 Mangio wrote:

    very interesting part. \:wub\: hope they can help the little family that once lived here. cant wait to read more

    On Nov 12, 2009 candy820 wrote:

    Great chapter!! I loved it.5.0 here\:D Waiting for the next part.

    On Nov 12, 2009 Mike101 wrote:

    I'm curious for the next part the ghost vanished a good cliffhanger

    On Nov 12, 2009 martoele wrote:

    I have been waiting a long time for this chapter... and it is worth while. Congratulations for reaching the front page. \:rah\:

    On Nov 13, 2009 mpatton wrote:

    Excellent chapter.  I can't wait until the next chapter.

    On Nov 13, 2009 Jennifer_R wrote:

    Great second part! \:rah\:  Great screenies too. I wonder who that ghost is? Congrats on being featured. \:\)  

    On Nov 13, 2009 Flexina wrote:

    Nice story ^^ I will look for the next episode.

    On Nov 14, 2009 charray wrote:

    Great job on this part \:rah\:

    On Nov 15, 2009 Mike101 wrote:

    Great chapter

    On Nov 15, 2009 kalirinah wrote:

    ooh this story is great!!!
    just read all parts and now I want more! \:\)

    On Nov 15, 2009 exele1315 wrote:

    Great chapter!
    Cant wait to read more

    On Nov 15, 2009 LadyTanya wrote:

    ok..this one is good....great work with the scemes, just the rights ize. Story line is great..waiting for the next one! Thank you

    On Nov 17, 2009 TUTULA wrote:

    It's getting more and more interesting, can't wait to read more\:rah\:

    On Nov 24, 2009 DragonQueen wrote:

    \:rah\: Fantastic story!  I was on pins and needles waiting for it, and it delivered in abundance! \:rah\:  Wow!  Really looking forward to reading on...  \:cool\:

    On Jan 6, 2010 SimplySarah wrote:

    Thankyou for the story and the words were fine. Not to wordy. Thank you for your sims being dressed fullyclothed.

    On Feb 19, 2010 isarpgista wrote:

    Wow!!! Great story! Hope it continues! 5.0 !!!

    On Dec 23, 2010 wrote:

    great story

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