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Jerry Denitt Story Chapt. 3
This one is my favorite so far!! The most cliffhanging definatly I can tell you that!
***** This is my best story I reckon and I will guaruntee it will be good!
Please go read Number 1 & 2 before this I guess you dont have to. It would make sense from reading it now onwards.
This one is my favorite so far!! The most cliffhanging definatly I can tell you that!
***** This is my best story I reckon and I will guaruntee it will be good!
Please go read Number 1 & 2 before this I guess you dont have to. It would make sense from reading it now onwards. Mum looks very young for her age she is in fact really an elder, she lives on her own, she likes everything to be clean and tidy, she likes gardening and spends hours and hours tidying and cleaning and gardening everyday, she has nothing better to do. We spent all night in the Taxi, thoughts hammered my head, i couldnt sleep like Annie or Jessica did, how could they sleep? When we arrived the next morning, we saw mum singing and wagging her bum watering plants.
" Hey, im Craig Anderson, who are you?" The paper boy asked Jessica. Jessica opened her mouth.
" Dont Jessica! " i warned, i knew she would flirt.
" Later" She sighed, dissapointed, watching him leave.
" Why are we at Nan's house?" Annie asked, all dazed and confused. I walked towards mum wondering how this would go. Would she turn me away? Would she be glad?
" Mum!" i said standing in front of her, she sucked her teeth and narrowed her eyes. There was a terrible silence which got me 10x more nervous and worried.
" Dana? Dana is that you?" She kept her eyes narrowed studying my face, how could she not recognise her own daughter? Is this the right woman?
" No mum, its Jerry! Your daughter! Its me mum!"
She gasped
" Jerry? Wh...What are you...Why are you here?"
Was she really that upset to see me?
" I'll explain later mum its a long story, I'm so sorry, this must of been quite a surprise for you, after so long!"
" Yeah, a surprise and a half!" She muttered under her breath, i dont think i was meant to hear that. " Well its okay, come along, I'll show you around, are you kids here?"
She showed us all of downstairs, but not upstairs that only had her bedroom, i was surprised at her taste in furnature and decoration, quite modern for an old lady. WOW, she must be a bit rich eh? Wild kitchen! The she showed us her lovely garden
" Right now dears, your mum and I have to talk, you relax on my sun loungers. Oh Jerry, get those Ice creams from the floor for them would you, sorry, i was having a picnic with friends." I bent right to the floor and gave them to my kids. " Annie, you can play with that trolley if you like, my friends grandson left it behind in the picnic I'll have to take that over later."
" Right, Jerry, what is it?" Mum asked, i tried my best to explain everything in detail what happened and why. " So...thats why you came to my house?"
" Yeah mum, its the only thing i could do, the flat rent will be too much for me. I have nothing, no job, no money, no flat. Im sorry." I explained.
" Well for now, you'll have to sleep on the floor down here, i have no guest beds. Untill Monday sharp!"
" What? Only monday? But..but thats in...TOMOROW?! No mum you cant do that!! I cant sort everything out by then!" i cried desperetly, surely, she cant do that to her own DAUGHTER? Thats ridiculous!
" Look im sorry, i cant have you all in my house for longer than that, you'll have to cope."
" What? Where would we live? Where would we go? What would we do?"
Ear splitting screams and yells burst out from the garden.
" The girls" i explained getting up. Jessica dangled Annie upside-down.
" Jessica!! What do you think you're doing!?" I yelled. Cant they keep thier hands off each other for one second, i just needed a talk, after all my mum gave them!
" They're only playing Jerry, give them a break!" Mum scolded " look Jessica was merely helping Annie do a handstand, now stop over-reacting and help me make lunch" i sighed and walked in with mum.
So, I thought, mum could NOT be serious with that deadline! Its just ridiculous. I dont care what she says I'm her daughter and she cant do that. We'll just she if she has the gut!
That Afternoon I did my hair up in a pony tail all curly like it naturally is and I put on a new set of clothes. Then the doorbell rang.... " I'll get it mum!" I called running to the door. But then on my way I stopped in my tracks. I blinked, once, twice, three times. I gasped loudly. Who was that at the door? Well whoever it was I was about to find out!
" Oh yes you are! Yes you are!" The lady cooed over her baby, the lady who freakishly looked like me. The cool breeze from outside hit my skin as I opened the door. It refreshed me slightly but I was still extremely puzzled. Who were these people? Did mum know them? Are we related?
" C...Can I ...Help you?" I stuttered not knowing what to do with myself. The lady looked up slowly squinting her eyes a bit. Then there was a terrible silence. The lady suddenly gasped loudly just like I had done.
" Jerry? Jerry is that you?" She said slowly looking as shocked as ever. The toddler squirmed in her arms tugging her long loose hair that was kinda like mine.
I heard mum shriek from behind me. I thought she was going to have a heart attack, her eyes wide and bloodshot.
" Mum! Oh good to see you, you didnt tell me Jerry would be here. Oh what a wonderful surprise. All this time." The Lady said to Mum. " Whats wrong mum, why dont you sit down?"
" What are you doing here Dana? We arranged Tomorrow!" Mum panted one frail hand to her chest.
" No, no, we arranged today mum its just your old age" Dana said to mum. I paused thinking Is there something I dont know and am supposed to know? My heart beat rapidly and my world turned upside down. I thought back to when I first saw mum, the first thing she said was ' Dana? Dana is that you?'
Now I know, she must be my..... SISTER!! The End of Chapter 3
Was it good? bad? Okay? Rate it on my sim page, tell me how you think I did with your advise, I need to know!!
Next Time Find out,
If Dana really was her sister
About Dana
The truth about the secret
And much more..... When emotions are stirred it can be a serious thing. It could happen to anyone by anyone. In my case it was Mum and No-one knew what to do.
Bad emotions have bad side effects.
Usually.
When someone stirs things up they are mad at them.
Usually.
When emotions are stirred and you dont know what to do, it leads to you doing something wreckless and crazy.
Always.
" My house" Dana told everyone proudly. I just could not do anything properly or concentrate. All I could concentrate on was 'What the heck is going on?'.
Mum must of hid this secret from me for ages. But why?
I decided I wanted to catch up to mum and talk to her, but i think she figured and walked as fast as her wrinkled legs could take her. I didnt bother, we would soon be inside Dana's 'family room' inside her big beautiful modern white house.
She was like my clone but better, like a better version of me.
No-one spoke a word on the way apart from Dana, she acted as though nothing happened. That drove me nuts. So, we were all sat in Dana's 'family room' apart from Jessica who went off somewere. We were going to get to the bottom of this and Dana was first.
" Well, look here Mum. Now you explain what is going on."
" I... I just went... no, I meant that...well.... you know what I me-" Mum started but I cut her off.
" No mum, no more hiding this from me. Tell me the truth. The WHOLE truth!"
Mum looked at me in the eyes, she looked shocked. She knew I was serious. Dead serious. She sighed and decided to let it out.
" OK!" she sighed. I looked at her, deeply, the frowns on her face and upturned brows. Every speck of her was worried and scared of what would happen next. I was as well in a way.
" I was young, about 20 to 22. I lived near my parents. They found a nice boy for me but I didnt want him, I secretly had Donston. I never dared tell my parents or I'd of been dead. Donston was really cool and a bad boy. Though I ended up marrying the boy my parents wanted me to, Micheal. I carried on the affair with Donston and one day I got pregnant. It got me scared but I just lied and said it was Micheal's though Donston and I both knew it wasent. I could only have one child though. My parents said twins were a 'curse'. Then when the day came it was twins. I didnt know how to handle it. I could only have ONE baby, one not two. It was a curse my parents said and they couldnt find out and they didnt. I bundled one off to be adopted, Dana, and one to stay with Micheal and me, Jerry." Mum explained looking very far away. " Wait, wait. You surely didnt believe your parents about twins being a 'curse'? did you?" Dana's husband asked.
" Well at the time, i had to believe. They were my parents! They were very religious and strict." Mum explained, her eyes seemed very watery I think she was crying but mum wasent a sypathy type, she was tough.
" What happened after that? What about Micheal?" Dana's husband asked.
" Well, Micheal got a bit suspicious, it fact extremely suspicious that it wasent his child. He had it all in his head and I got so worried. I would be up all night with the baby, I couldnt take much more so I ran away and lived on my own. I stole all the money my parents had, they were very wealthy people. I got a job and paid for a nanny, I did quite well from there. I never saw any of them again and havent talked of this before since then." Mum cried, her voice wobbled. " Ever."
The room stirred with silence. " Why didnt you tell Jerry the truth though?" and " Yeah shes your daughter!" kinda questions broke the silence.
" There were many times when I could, and should of but I couldnt bring myself to do it. It was too hard, how are you supposed to tell your own daughter they have a twin sister." Mum said, wiping her eyes. " Though I tracked down Dana when she was 5 and I kept in touch with her though I knew that it was dangerous and I shouldnt, one day when Jerry went to a friends house I decided Dana needed to come over to see her own mum. Though she stayed later than she should and saw Jerry skipping down the path coming home. I hurried her set walking back on her way home, then when we met again I decided I had no other option but to let it out. I lied and said I would tell Jerry but I didnt." It took a while to sink in. Then i realised it all made sense. I sighed sitting back.
" Mummy, when are we going home!" Annie pested.
" No Annie." I told her, then paused. " We are home"
" Oh of course Jerry, thats a wonderful idea. You can stay as long as you like." she said to me. That night I said goodnight to the girls and had a talk to them.
" Ok, Im going to sleep pretty soon now, its been a very tough day for me adapting to these changes. You two must behave as best as you can, promise me now." I told them sternly.
" Promise" they chorused in unison.
" Get dressed now and go to sleep."
I did the very same thing i told the girls to do. Get dressed now and go to sleep. Though before sleeping I stayed up to think. I didnt know if we were ever going to go back to our home or ever see Fareight or Tiffany again.
It seemed strange that after all this time I had a twin with out knowing. Dana. She was so lucky. She was married to an decent man. She had well behaved nice kids. Her house was astonishing. She had tons of money. She looked gorgeous. She has everything! I wonder what it would be like to be her. Not a bad idea. In fact.... I could actually pull that off....
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On Aug 1, 2006 *louise* wrote:
Nooooo! I was really getting into that! Please hurry with the next chapter!
On Aug 2, 2006 Hottiesheldon wrote:
u have already submitt one of these ai it the same lol.. but still cool
On Aug 2, 2006 Kismyname wrote:
is this a repeat of the last chapter?
On Aug 2, 2006 wrote:
H...E...L...P...M...E!!!
I...N...E...E...D...M...O...R...E!!!
On Aug 2, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
Pretty girls and story
On Aug 2, 2006 lemonloveshane wrote:
oooh, Dana's husband is hot! lol
All of Jerry's stories are unbelievable, gr8 job!
On Aug 2, 2006 wrote:
it was good but please do the next chapter
On Aug 3, 2006 kittydiva_2017 wrote:
On Aug 7, 2006 Wigwog wrote:
I need more Info!!!!!!!!!
On Aug 7, 2006 McBeal wrote:
COOOOL
i really loved that. Is she going to fake herself into dana??????????? 
quick quick more more!!!!!!!
On Aug 10, 2006 Gibson Twins wrote:
MORE MORE MORE!!!! hehehe gr8 story please write the next chapter soon
The bunk beds looked cool can you tell me where you got them or it.
On Aug 11, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
interesting
On Aug 24, 2006 Tuesdai wrote:
On Sep 7, 2006 spottsmom wrote:
I think you have come a long way. I really enjoyed this one and love seeing how your writing has progressed. Way to go!
On Sep 19, 2006 huntress2005 wrote:
On Sep 24, 2006 grenondini wrote:
oh my god where did you got a bunk bed? they are so nice and i have been looking for them in so many websites
If you could tell me I would realy thankfull. Your stories are getting better and better. Keep up the good work. Congrats
On Sep 27, 2006 Adira wrote:
Thanks for sharing this!
On Oct 9, 2006 bayba1707 wrote:
On Oct 11, 2006 Mistress Useless wrote:
Cute story - love the hair!
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On Dec 9, 2006 civetinja wrote:
Thanks!
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On Jan 30, 2007 morneau_grl27 wrote:
good story, waiting for mroe
On Feb 23, 2007 Palina wrote:
Very interesting story...Thank you!
On Jun 3, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice story. Thanks for sharing.
On Feb 1, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:
very confusing story..
On Mar 28, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:
Very good
On Mar 28, 2008 Bury me deep inside your heart wrote:
Good Job
On Nov 25, 2008 saturrn wrote:
super good stuff