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Friend or foe?

Hello again guys! This will be my next story about Gary Rico, the lonely detective. This part is only an intro, I hope you'll like it and if so (or not) please leave comments, they're all very appreciated :)

Now, let's read on!

Friend or foe?

Hello again guys! This will be my next story about Gary Rico, the lonely detective. This part is only an intro, I hope you'll like it and if so (or not) please leave comments, they're all very appreciated :)

Now, let's read on! It was a chilly Wednesday night at the end of October. Most of the day was a usual day at the Wytham's Financial Adviser Office, clients went by and soon the sky turned into grey. After all of the employees were gone home, a tall and good-looking young woman, who had long red hair, left the office at the back door in a hurry. She would have seemed to be worried if someone would have seen her. A few moments later the police arrived at the same place. On that same day, Gary Rico sat alone in his tiny office, reading an old book which he had read sometimes before. He had already read all of his books but time flies faster if you read when you are bored. He didn't have a lot cases these times, so he often was bored. He didn't like to hang on the phone all day, so instead of it he read. When the phone rang he was frightened at first, but when he realized that he was still in his office he put down the book and went to answer the phone.

"Yeah, it's detective Rico" he said.

"Good evening Mr. Rico. I'm superintendent Garret. We have a death case at the King Boulevard. Please come to the scene and have a look around" the policeman said.

"Understand Mr. Garret, I'm on my way" Gary answered and hunged up the phone. The King Boulevard wasn't too far from his office so he decided to walk there. 'This will be an other boring case just like the others lately' he thought. As he guessed he didn't need the exact address because when he saw the sirening policecar and the yellow tape he knew that he was at the right place. He slipped through the tape and went inside to the huge office building. When he stepped in a young policeman stopped him.

"Sir, can you please prove your identity? This is a crime scene so I cannot let anyone in while the forensics are working" the policeman said.

"Of course, here's my badge, I'm detective Rico. Mr. Garret informed me about this case" Gary said while he handed over his badge to the police officer.

"Good evening Mr. Rico, I'm sorry, I didn't realize you. The scene is on the first floor, use the elevator to get there" he told to Gary and then turned to face the door again. On the first floor there was an other police officer standing in front of a big wooden door. When she saw Gary she smiled.

"Hi Rico, so you got this case, right? Well good luck, just go through this door, the coroner is already there" she said.

"Thank you Brandis, I promise it won't take long so you can get home early" Gary said joking then he went inside the office. It was a very neat room with wooden furniture and a lot of books. 'It surely belongs to a very wealthy man who has a good taste as well" he thought to himself.

"Good evening Alex. What do we have here?" he asked.

"Good evening Gary. Meet the victim, Mr. Wytham. If you haven't heard about him then I tell you that he was a well-known financial adviser in Simcity. It seems he had had an apoplexy" the coroner said.

"When did he die? And who did find him?" Gary asked curiously.

"He died between 7.30 and 8.00 pm, I will tell you the exact date after the dissection. A woman called the police at about 8.10 pm but we don't know who she was" Alex said. "Maybe it was an employee. Was there anybody here when he died?" Gary asked.

"When we arrived nobody were here and only the back door was opened which located in his personal assistant's office" Alex answered.

"Well, thank you very much Alex, if you finished your task I'll look around a little bit" Gary said.

"Okay, but here is one thing that I haven't told you yet. This is the most important and interesting issue. The truth is that this is not an apoplexy, it's a murder."

Friend or foe? - Intro

Oct 29, 2007 by mangooo1
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    27 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Oct 29, 2007 mangooo1 wrote:

    Hey guys, this is my new story, hope you'll enjoy it. It seemed years while I was making this intro but first I had to create some new lots. I forgot to write it in my story, but a big thank you for all the costum creators. Without their creations this story wouldn't be here \;\)

    On Oct 30, 2007 atangki wrote:

    Whee.. He's good. \:D Great intro! Do continue. \:D\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 30, 2007 AshGreg wrote:

    awsome story cant wait to see the next one

    On Oct 30, 2007 sweetcharming wrote:

    great intro! The pics are awesome, the writing also!\:wub\: I'm waiting for the next part!

    On Oct 30, 2007 ila73 wrote:

    great story\:\) \:\)

    On Oct 30, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    Interesting...

    On Oct 30, 2007 trolzgirl wrote:

    cool\:D

    On Oct 30, 2007 SpaciKathy wrote:

    great intro, I like your pictures\:D

    On Oct 30, 2007 trilbyfay wrote:

    Great start, love murder mysteries.\:wub\: \:\) \:rah\:

    On Oct 30, 2007 wrote:

    that deserves my 5.0\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 30, 2007 sunny33 wrote:

    and then what..........really good!!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 30, 2007 Salt n pepa wrote:

    luv it keep goin


    On Oct 31, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:

    You have totally improved since your last story. I thought it was gonna be a heck longer but I guess I'll to wait...\:\( Very exciting & interesting story. I've always wanted to read a mystery story, especially murder scenes... The pictures were clear & beautiful too!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 31, 2007 charmany wrote:

    sounds great cant wait to read what happens next the pictures are really good...

    On Oct 31, 2007 lillith_666 wrote:

    great start\:D

    On Oct 31, 2007 iluvhorses13 wrote:

    Wow! Very well done! I can't wait to see the next part.\:rah\:

    On Oct 31, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Awesome firstframe, the start grabbed me right away! I love a good old detective series \:cool\:

    On Nov 2, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Whoa! Nice, a mystery murder case! Love the idea, can't wait to read more! \:\) \:D \:eek\:

    On Nov 6, 2007 BriannaSun24 wrote:

    Nice start, would like to see more.

    On Nov 7, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    Great start. Superb English. I hope to see more parts! 5.0

    On Nov 10, 2007 wickedgoddess_athena711 wrote:

    ooh! Oooh! I love detective stories! \:wub\: Can't wait for the next part. \:rah\:

    On Nov 10, 2007 kecr101 wrote:

    ooh... suspenseful!!
    Can't wait for the next part! Hope you continue the story.\:rah\:

    On Nov 19, 2007 wrote:

    Exelent story!\:rah\:

    On Nov 20, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:

    great \;\)

    On Jan 27, 2008 cptnemo6 wrote:

    Great story!! \:cool\:

    On Mar 20, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Aug 13, 2008 Herzen & Blasen wrote:

    Good story \:\)

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