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Mr. Right - Is he just a dream?
Part 5 - The last part
Part 5 - The last part When we stopped in the last part, Sandy and Sophie were having a great time in a disco, called the 'Red Club'. The DJ there, was Patrick, a secret love of Sandy some years before. In that time Patrick didn't notice Sandy, they just barely know each other. Now let's see what happened then! Sophie and I had a great time, we didn't have some fun since school has started. It was so unwinding, just dancing, feeling the rythm in your vains and forgeting about everything. Dancing is a cure for me, it can calm me down and it's very relaxing. Later Sophie had a call. It was her mother who missed the last bus. Sophie took the car for tonight so she had to pick her mother up and drive her home.
"Sandy, I'm sorry but I gotta go, my mom is waiting for me. You just stay here, enjoy the party and tomorrow we will mett at school" she said good bye and left. I danced about a half an hour after she left but it wasn't the same without her so I decided it's time to go home. When I reached the bar someone tapped my shoulder. I turned around and faced Patrick!
"Hi Sandy, aren't you leaving, are you?" he said with a big smile. He invited me for a drink so we could talk a little.
"I thought you doesn't even remember my name. It was years ago when we last met. I was surprised when I saw that you are the DJ here" I said.
"Well, I have a really good name memory, of course I remember you. We had a wonderful Christmas holiday at the mountins with our parents" Patrick said. "Yes that's right. We played a lot of tricks together, you were such a bad child and you persuaded me to follow you in everything you did!" I smiled.
"Hey, I didn't persuade you, you were the one who wanted to join me!" he laughed.
"Well, okay, maybe you're right. I didn't remember clearly, we were only 8 years old!"
"Nope, we were 9. But we met sometimes later when me and my family moved to near you" he said.
"Oh, yes. You bought a house 3 streets away from us. But after a year you moved again and since we haven't met I think" I said. We talked a lot about the past, what we've done together and what happened since we last met. The time was flying, soon it was time for me to go home. Patrick were waiting with me until the taxi arrived. Then he hugged me and we both said good bye. After about 15 minutes I arrived at home. While I was preparing for sleep I couldn't help but realize that my thoughts are returning to Patrick again and again. It was so strange talking with him after so many years. It was if we were 15 again, he didn't changed a little, he was still so kind and have a great sense of humour. The next morning I went over to Danny. He greeted me with a huge hug but he looked like a little bit said. His eyes always disclosured him.
"I think something is wrong, isn't it? Tell me, what's the problem?" I asked. "You know, my dad caught a flu so he asked me to work today. I know we planned that we will be together today but I have to help him out. It's just 2 or 3 hours. I was wondering if you would come to the store with me and when I'm finished we could be together as we have planned" he said. "Well, I understand that you have to help him out. That's okay. But I don't wanna go to the store with you. I'm sorry. You know, it's just standing there for 3 hours and doing nothing. I'd rather go home and study while you're working and when you've finished, come to my place, okay?" I asked with a smile. But he weren't smiling anymore. Instead of smiling he looked very angry.
"Why can't you come with me? It's not a big thing to ask I think but you don't even want to do it for me! It's hurting me. You know what? Go home and study but if you go home I won't go over to you!" he shouted. Again, I didn't say anything wrong, did I? But he were shouting and got angry. I was so said and angry as well, so I said "Okay, do as you please I'm going home" and with it I turned around and left. He didn't see the tears that were forming in my eyes. I was so sick of these fights. Of course, some hours later the doorbell rang. It was Danny. I would lie if I would tell you that I knew that he will come, but I was 90% sure of it. He did this all the time. He got angry, shouted at me a lot of stuff that wasn't true and then he calmed down and apologized. We were watching DVDs and made pizza together but it was still in the air that something isn't wright. We didn't talk as much as we usually talk and we acted a little bit strange. You know, if we weren't together. But I didn't care, I was so dissapointed because of our quarrels. When he left for school I walked him to the door and watched him walking away. I wasn't said, no, not anymore. I felt so empty inside. Something died inside me which was so precious for me before. Yeah, I think I wasn't in love anymore. Next day at school, when all of my Sudokus were done, there was still 10 minutes of the class. I just sat there, staring out of my head, waiting for the end of the class. That was when the teacher said: "I would like to inform you that this time next week, you'll have an exam from the first 150 pages of the book. So it's time to start studying. Thank you for your attention." Great, 150 pages of this very boring book. I haven't read a page yet so I called Danny that I have to cancel our program for today because I have to study.
"You know, I won't have time tomorrow, so I have to do it today. I'm sorry, we will make it up an other time, okay?" "You always do this. You have to study and I'm the one who are being dropped. I'm getting used to it" he said.
"I'm sorry but you know that I have to learn hard to reach the expectations so I could report on the state-financed training" I said almost begging for understanding.
"Yeah, whatever. See you later" he said and hunged up. I never was a go-getter but I really needed good grades in this term because I didn't want to burden my parents with an expensive cost for school. 'I don't know why Danny can't understand that I have to study a lot. Maybe because he isn't as close to his parents as me' I was wondering. When I was busy with my books he went out a lot with his fellows. They often played poker or went to basketball matches or just rode the streets in the town. We didn't meet so often but I was glad that he occupied himself. At that moment I didn't know how much he kept busy himself. One night, when I was fed up with all those functions and equations, I threw my notes onto the floor and decided that it's time to relax a little. So I sat in front of my computer and wrote to my friends:
"Interested in a party at the Base in the usual time?" Of course they all said yes. On the next week as we agreed we gathered in the club called Base. It was a smaller one but was always full of friends and schoolmates. Gabe and Danny decided that they will get intoxicated so they spent a lot of time at the bar. I mean too much time, Danny totally ignored me the whole night. Yeah, he occupied himself like I wasn't there. I was dancing with Peter and the others 'cause Danny only talked and drank with Gabe. When they left the side of the bar that was only because that Gabe wanted to smoke so they went outside. This ignorance killed me inside much more than our fights, I felt the emptiness growing deep in my heart. I needed some company so I asked Patrick if he could talk to me in front of the disco. He asked the other DJ to help him out for an hour so he could cheer me up a little. He was so funny, he always could make me smile. This night would have been a terrible and boring one if he wasn't there.
"Don't worry Sandy, everything will be okay, and if something is wrong I'll always be here to listen to you" he said and I believed in all the words that he said. Later when he had to get back to work I went to Danny, he wasn't drinking anymore 'cause Gabe didn't feel so well and he went home. But I could tell that Danny was drunk as well.
"Danny, I'm tired, I wanna go home and have some sleep. Do you come with me?" I asked. "No, I'm not tired and I think this party is rockin'. I don't wanna leave so early. Stay for some more hours" Danny said.
"I don't wanna stay, tomorrow morning I'm having a class, you know. Please, let's go home." I asked.
"If you wanna leave then leave. I stay 'cause I'm having a great time, I don't wanna end it because you're tired" he said. "Very well then, good night Danny!" I shouted and then got my things and left. I was so disappointed, I didn't say good bye to the others. But I had to get out, I couldn't be in the same room as Danny. I thought I will cry, but I didn't have a single tear. I couldn't cry anymore. Next day after school I went over to him. We had some things to discuss.
"You know what a jerk were you? You were ignoring me the whole night and didn't care about that I was tired. It was so kind from you, thanks..." I said.
"Well, at least you know now how I feel when you ignoring me when 'you have to study' " he said with anger in his voice. "I can't believe how could you be this mean! Why can't you understand that I have other important things in my life as well? You're not always the first and most important thing, Daniel Bright!" I shouted.
"No, I'm not always the first, I'm always the last one! And I'm fed up with it! I think we don't fit together. I don't want a girlfriend who doesn't have time for me!" he shouted back. "I think your right, we indeed don't fit together. And just to tell you, I don't want a boyfriend who cannot understand me and my feelings as well. I think we should end this relationship" I said.
"If that Sandy Peterson want, then let's finish it. I don't care."
"Yeah you don't care about everything just yourself. This is your main problem. Well, good bye Danny" I said and walked out of his room for the last time in my life. In the next few weeks I was said. Yes, said, because I didn't think that everything will turn out in this way. We were so happy in the beggining. But this was the best for both of us. I often stand in front of my door and just stared at the street. At other times I listened to music.
"Who doesn't long for someone to hold, who knows how to love you without being told. Somebody tell me why I'm on my own, if there's a soulmate for everyone..." I hummed. One day I decided that I have to talk to Patrick. I needed somebody who listen to me and can cheer me up. So I went to the Red Club but it was 5 pm so there was no DJ here yet. I went to the bartender to ask about Patrick.
"You're lucky, he came today early so now he's here. I call him here for you" the bartender said and went back to the employees' rooms. After some minutes Patrick came with a bug grin on his face.
"Let's order something to drink and tell me everything that happened to you since we last met" he said.
So I told him everything about how Danny ignored me at the party, and how he behaved with me after it and how we broke up. Patrick realized that this conversation needs more time so when the other DJ arrived Patrick went to ask her if she could undertake this night instead of him. I told him not to do it but he wanted to spend the day with me to cheer me up. The girl was very kind, she undertook the night from Patrick and she even wasn't angry at all. We sat at the bar hours long just chatting about stuff. Nothing important just things that came to our mind. When the night came a lot of people were gathering and the bar got very noisy so Patrick suggested another place for us. It was the roof of the building!
"When I want to be alone, I always climb up here and just gazing the stars. They're so wonderful, aren't they? I could stare them hours long" he said and I agreed with him. We had a great view of the sky from here. After some hours I was getting sleepy so I told Patrick that it's time to go home. He offered to walk me home and I accepted it. 'At least I can be near him for some more time' I thought.
"So, here we are. Uhm, you know Sandy, I'm going to a ball next Saturday and I would be very happy if you would join me" Patrick said.
"Really? That sound great! But, what about your partner? Does she ill or something?" I asked.
"No, I don't have a partner unless you come with me" he said. Of course I said yes! The day of the ball came fast. I was dressed up and I got my hair fixed. My mom had said that I was beautiful but I was still nervous when I entered the huge room. But on the other hand I was so excited about that night. I love dancing, not just in clubs but all the classics as well. Danny couldn't dance so we never went to an event like that. Patrick waited for me in front of the entrance. When he saw me he started to smile, the smile which always made me happy.
"Hi Sandy, you look gorgeous tonight." Patrick said impressed and then he gave me a big hug.
"You are handsome as well. White suits for you" I told him. When all the guests are arrived we sat to our table because tha waiters started to carry out the diner. All the dishes were bio and healthy ones but they were delicious.
"Hey Patrick, I'm only curious but do you dance?" I asked. It would be very uneasy if we wouldn't dance at all the whole night, I thought. "Of course I do. That is what we are here for" he said and after we finished eating he held my hand and asked with a serious but funny face: "Shall we dance?"
"Yes, of course" I answered. Well my anxiety was unfounded. He indeed was a good dancer and we danced the whole night long until I couldn't feel my feet. Some weeks later he called me on the phone.
"Hello there, what will you do this Friday night?" he asked.
"I suppose I'm going to go somewhere with you" I said joking.
"You're right. I'm going to participate in a DJ competition. I would be very happy if you would join me. You know, I need some support" he said.
"Wow, that sounds good! Of course I will join you and will cheer for you!" I said laughing. So, this was the big night for Patrick. I think he's very talented in mixing so I hope he will be awarded. When we arrived the first participant was at the DJ booth. He wasn't bad, but Patrick is better. Other people might thought the same as me 'cause they were not dancing just moving to the music a little bit. After the blond DJ it was Patrick's turn. Maybe I'm a bit prepossessed but I think Patrick rocked. Everybody in the room were dancing and I believe they enjoyed his music so much. I've just met a nice girl, she was also a participant of this competition. She also enjoyed the music that Patrick mixed. The temperature was so hot, so I went out to the huge balcony to have some fresh air. Some black haired guy came after me and he started a conversation.
"Hi chick, what's your name? Do you have a boyfriend? May I invite you for a drink?" he asked. He was so pushy but I tried to be nice and turn him down.
"I'm Sandy and thank you but I don't want to drink anything." I thought he would leave me alone but I was wrong. He just went on and on, I was starting to get a little bit scared when my hero arrived. Patrick finished his performance and stepped behind to that guy.
"She's with me, leave her alone!" he shouted. The other guy was so shocked, he immediately went back to the room and disappeared in the crowd. "Are you okay? Did he hurt you?" he asked with a worried voice.
"I'm okay, thanks for helping me out. You're my hero" I said smiling.
"Now that you've mentioned. I would like to be your hero. I mean, I'd be very glad if I could say that 'She's with me 'cause she's my girlfriend' he said with an unsure voice.
"You'd make me very happy if you would say that I'm your girlfriend" I said while I was staring something very interesting at my feet. "Well, then there's only one thing is missing" he said now smiling again.
"And what is it?" I asked. I thought he would say some bad thing but I was wrong.
"This" he said and with it he pulled me close to him and we shared a kiss. But this wasn't only a kiss, this was THE kiss. The most romantic, passionate one I've ever had and it was full of love. I felt something that I have never felt before. I think they call it true love. When he kissed me I thought that he's the one for me, the one who I want to live my entire life with.
I found my Mr. Right.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope you all enjoyed Sandy's story and hope that you will read my upcoming story as well. Happy simming! :)
THE END
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30 Comment(s) posted so far
On Oct 20, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:
Aww *sobs* that was so touchie...
Glad she found her Mr. Right!
On Oct 20, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:
very good
On Oct 20, 2007 vanessa190371 wrote:
good story
On Oct 20, 2007 caclark wrote:
nice story
On Oct 20, 2007 mangooo1 wrote:
OMG! I got featured! I can't believe it! I'm soooooo happy! Thank you guys a lot who read my story and leave nice comments, it's so inspiring! Thanks a lot
On Oct 20, 2007 wrote:
On Oct 20, 2007 wrote:
SOO great
good for Sandy 
On Oct 20, 2007 odnavgorode wrote:
great
On Oct 20, 2007 Miss_Crazy13 wrote:
Aw so sweet,I totally loved it!!
Nice ending
On Oct 20, 2007 trilbyfay wrote:
That was great
On Oct 20, 2007 floydine wrote:
Great story!
On Oct 20, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
AWWWWWWW, that's a sweet ending
On Oct 20, 2007 k_dezurik wrote:
I loved your story!
On Oct 20, 2007 ila73 wrote:
nice story
On Oct 20, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
I have to say, almost every guy she dated seemed to be THE one.
Then you surprised us by showing their true colors! 
I am so glad that Sandy found a sweet, gorgeous Mr. Right in the end. 
I loved the story!
On Oct 20, 2007 Dreamestate123 wrote:
glade to here that she finlay found the right one
On Oct 20, 2007 BoodaMae wrote:
So happy that she finally found Mr.Right, though it seemed a bit rushed. What will your next story be about?
Happy simming!
~Sarah~
On Oct 20, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:
On Oct 20, 2007 mangooo1 wrote:
Yeah, I know that maybe it was a little bit rushed but I didn't want to extend it how Sandy and Patrick got together 'cause I thought it would be boring. Well, about the next story, I have a lot of ideas, I just have to put them together
But mainly it will be about a detective who wants to oncover a murder 
On Oct 20, 2007 mangooo1 wrote:
I mean uncover... I cannot type, sorry
On Oct 21, 2007 mssoftbrn wrote:
love what you did!
On Oct 21, 2007 mssoftbrn wrote:
forgot to rate
On Oct 21, 2007 binky13 wrote:
Very happy ending. I hope this is her final and real love.
On Oct 21, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
Love happy endings, and your shots were well done !!
On Oct 23, 2007 Katriona! wrote:
OOOOOoooh!!!!!Ooh ooh oooh!! The emotion!! I loved it absolutely!!!Damn good job!
On Oct 24, 2007 muggelx1 wrote:
very cool
On Oct 26, 2007 sunny33 wrote:
ohhh she found her mr.right
On Jan 25, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Jan 28, 2008 cptnemo6 wrote:
Super story!!!
On Aug 13, 2008 Herzen & Blasen wrote:
Good story