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little red riding hood

little red riding hood ther once was a girl who was helpful and good who everyone called a Lttle Red Riding Hood .One day Little Red got a basket of goods to take to her Granny who lived in the woods But down the road beneath the wide open skies she came across a Wolf with big hugry eyes" Littel Rea" he said with a dark toothy smile "Please won't you come walk with me awhile?" Llittle Red just turned and walked quickly away for she still had to get to her Granny's that day but the Wolf wouldn't give up withaut a fight for he still planned to eat Little Red that night. The Wolf ran to her Granny's and started knocking when Red's Granny come out to greet the day. The Wolf held her back and locked her away he put on her clothes and crept into bed and waited around for sweet Little Red When Little Red come in she notice the change her grandmother really looked rather strange."What big eyes you have" spoke Little Red " The better to see you with" the bad Wolf said." And wath big ears you hawe" spoke Little Red "The better to hear you with" the bad wolf said " And what big teeth you have " spoke Little Red "The bette to eat you with " he howled from bed Little Red stood frozen shaking with fear and wished and wished that her Granny was near Just then Little Red heard a small muffled sound coming from her wardrobe where her Grannywas bound she went quite fast before the Wolf could see to untie her Granny and then set her fee. Little Red and Granny ran swiftly outside to tell all the flks about the wolf still inside . the big hungry Wolf had lost out on his snack. So he ran away.... and he never come back Little red and her Granny cried with laughter and together thay lived happily ever after.

Little Red Riding Hood

Jan 24, 2007 by manuela55
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    On Jan 24, 2007 15RabbitLane wrote:

    ok no offence, but that is seriously SAD (eg pathetic)\:mad\:

    On Jan 24, 2007 PRDGirls wrote:

    Actually, I think it's cute and rather clever. I would never have thought of using a werewolf as the Big Bad Wolf \:\)

    On Jan 24, 2007 popsewini wrote:

    Het, 15Rabbit! That's mean. She might be only 5 for all we know! \:mad\:

    On Jan 24, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    hey 15Rabbit thts mean do u h8 this person or somethin\:mad\: i love this story its told in many diffrent ways\:\)

    On Jan 24, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    forgot to rate\:o \:confused\:

    On Jan 24, 2007 slime wrote:

    1SRabbit if you had a problem wit da story y did u rate anyway it was good i give you 5.0 points \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 24, 2007 Jubilant wrote:

    Cute and clever. It would have been awesome if you could have gotten the wolf wearing Grandma's dress.

    On Jan 24, 2007 wrote:

    It was definetly cute and clever.\:P And 1SRabbit, I L-O-V-E Little Red Riding Hood. \:mad\:

    On Jan 25, 2007 spritegurlo2 wrote:

    Cute good story!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 25, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    Cuuute! I love it! 15RabbitLane doesn't know what he/she's talking about, that was awesome.

    On Jan 25, 2007 GFitz wrote:

    Your story was cute. It was written in rhyme. And I'm really glad Gran was saved in time.\:P

    On Jan 25, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:

    What a cute idea! Nice poetry....\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 25, 2007 Strawbz wrote:

    \:\) I really liked it - and I'm glad granny was saved \:\)

    On Jan 25, 2007 Marylyn Linney wrote:

    Simply nice little tale... \;\)

    On Jan 25, 2007 agreen002 wrote:

    Well, I liked it. Little Red's outfit is cute \:\)

    On Jan 25, 2007 Melody Curious wrote:

    Interesting take on a classic fairy-tale! Well donw, do you have others planned?

    On Jan 25, 2007 fallen_simangel wrote:

    \:D nice story of Rotkäpchen^^\:rah\:

    On Jan 25, 2007 SimsBarbie wrote:

    very cute.

    On Jan 25, 2007 15RabbitLane wrote:

    the rhymes are not obvious, bc there are no separate lines. it's all one big one. P.S: I'm a girl\:mad\:

    On Jan 25, 2007 15RabbitLane wrote:

    oh yeah and forgot to mention: about pops comment: if she were 5, i doubt she would be on sims (7+), making creations and writing stories!!!!!!!!!1\:mad\:

    On Jan 26, 2007 Jasmine206 wrote:

    Hmmm. I liked her outfit, very cute, and the characters were well developed. However, it could;ve been a bit longer and more capturing to readers, yet I don't mean any disrespect. Well done. I will give 4.0.

    On Jan 26, 2007 number1smile wrote:

    I liked the idea of a fairy tale, very lyrical. For future reference, I agree with Jasmine, it could have been a little better executed, and longer to fully develope the story. Wasn't there a Woodsman in Little Red Riding Hood? Try another. They idea is still really cool! \:D

    On Jan 26, 2007 msxn4me39 wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\: I just don't understand why there are people out there who feel like they have been appointed critics. You have made a perfect story! It was just long enough to be awsome, your pictures were outstanding. I gave you a 5! Very Clever!

    On Jan 26, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:

    wow very random!\:rah\: \:P \:D

    On Jan 26, 2007 weirdfaerie wrote:

    5.0 I thought it was wonderful!!! It was so clever for you to write in ryhme! I found it really interesting and cute. And the wolf rocks \:\) Little red riding hood is so sweet \:wub\: Ok, 15rabbitlane, I need to put in my two penneth. I think it is really rude of you saying such hurtful things. What has manuela ever done to you? The sims2 is a game for crying out loud!!! For fun and entertainment. It isn't a serious thing or whatever. I don't understand how you can be so critical over this. If you don't like it, don't rate or comment. Constructive critiscism is great but rude critiscism like that is not needed. Plus, how can you say that along with "no offense". The only way you can mean things like that is in an offensive way!! But Manuela, this story is great so just ignore the mean words. It isn't waste your time \:\)

    On Jan 26, 2007 Simlover4eva wrote:

    That was very clever!

    On Jan 26, 2007 cateye301 wrote:

    i like story but i looooove grandma's dress! great costum design!!

    On Jan 26, 2007 CandieW2001 wrote:

    Good story!\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 26, 2007 Swt_Pea92 wrote:

    Hey, great story! Ignore 15RabbitLane, poor little thing's only 11, she doesn't quite know what manners are yet, give her some time to GROW UP!! \:\)

    On Jan 26, 2007 popsewini wrote:

    I'm only 10 and I don't go around telling people their stories are rubbish, especially when they are good.

    On Jan 26, 2007 MoriaG wrote:

    i think it was very clever of you to creat a sim story out of little red riding hood, and i think you did a good job. i mean yes, you might have out the wolf in grandmas dress and yes, you might have had a woodsman chasing the wolf away, but honestly, it was very good. i know how hard it is to get your sims in the right positions and dressed and such for the screenshots. like i said before, very clever of you to do this. at least it was not the regular boring boy marries girl and has baby story you see 100 time a day on this site.

    On Jan 27, 2007 wrote:

    \:\) \:P Very cute I really enjoyed it\:rah\:

    On Jan 27, 2007 wrote:

    I have to say it's a little strange that the wolf was a werewolf, but I loved the story.\:D

    On Jan 27, 2007 Love4oneAnother wrote:

    That was adorable! Good Job!

    On Jan 27, 2007 kenzerz wrote:

    \:\) cool

    On Jan 27, 2007 Born2sing101 wrote:

    u know what rabbit ur juss eleven u don't know what ur talking about!\:mad\: o and LOVE the story

    On Jan 27, 2007 Masquerade37 wrote:

    I do like this, however a lot of work was needed. Pictures taken in build/buy mode are very sloppy, but I will admit I've been guilty of that before. It was neat to see a werewolf as the BBW, but it would have been so great to see the wolf in the grandma clothes. But other than that, your rhymes were very nice and the story was cleverly written so it could be properly executed in Sims 2. As for your flamer, I have a message: There are FAR worse stories out there by people who put in no effort at all.

    On Jan 28, 2007 wrote:

    Hah. Cute. \:ph34r\:

    On Jan 28, 2007 15RabbitLane wrote:

    i may be only 11, but the writer is 27 according to her page!!

    On Jan 28, 2007 midgetcool wrote:

    is she 27 lol good stroy! Rate my Romeo and Juilet stories please

    On Jan 31, 2007 scrambled76 wrote:

    Very cute story. \:D

    On Feb 2, 2007 TheaDidia wrote:

    Good story! Great idea to do a fairy tale Sims 2 style! \:D

    On Feb 2, 2007 wrote:

    It's so creative and takes the fairytale
    to whole new levels! \:\) \:\) \:\)

    On Feb 4, 2007 DragonessGirl wrote:

    What a cute story! Very well done!
    //Dragoness

    On Feb 12, 2007 jayk99 wrote:

    \:rah\: i love how u wrote that story in rhyme

    On Feb 18, 2007 maggiesmom1 wrote:

    OMG, that was awsome!!!!!!!!! Loved how you made it rhyme. 15RabbitLane, I have three words to say to you, and those are , GET A LIFE!!!!!!!!! Manuela55, don't listen to 15RabbitLane,(who I am now going to call Rabbit) because she is only three and doesn't know proper manners like SOME three year olds I know. \:mad\: (Like my brother Henry.) Once again, love your story.\:wub\:

    On Mar 3, 2007 Eisbaerbonzo wrote:

    \:\) Very nice Rotkäppchen. I wished it was longer.

    On Mar 4, 2007 zukini52 wrote:

    Cute story. I have to agree with the person above me. I wish it were a bit longer... elaborated on a bit more

    On Mar 7, 2007 maggiesmom1 wrote:

    i may be only 11, but the writer is 27 according to her page!!




    Rabbit, your eleven? I thought you were like, 28 or something!\:eek\:

    On Apr 16, 2007 biatch1965 wrote:

    \:D Cute, short story. \:D

    On Apr 23, 2007 WordCobbler wrote:

    Very awesome Simmed version of this old story. \:D You used amazing details in your shots! \:rah\:

    On Apr 24, 2007 poohbear7882 wrote:

    good story. \:wub\:

    On Apr 27, 2007 ukiyo wrote:

    So cute! Thanks much for sharing it. \:D

    On May 3, 2007 Sara1993 wrote:

    Cute story i give it 5.0 Rabitt if you want to insult manuela with comenting her story, don't do it then! Take care of your own bussineses. Manuela, it's great story and try to make another fairy-tale. \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On May 28, 2007 PhotoSigs wrote:

    I like your story..and some stories are better being short..I actually had the time to read the whole story.. there are some that are way to long..and to the others, I wouldnt care how mean your comments are as long your honest..to me that would help make even a better one next time..but preferred in a nice way.

    On Jun 21, 2007 nanapon wrote:

    okay. nice story and let's leave the hate comments to ourselves. Everyone can stop this ridiculous war with 15rabbit and she can stop posting comments to get the last word. leave this story alone and use it only for comments ABOUT THE STORY NOT EACH OTHER!!!!!!!!!!!

    On Jun 30, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks !!

    On Jul 21, 2007 silviapripoae wrote:

    \;\)

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