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This is a story about the movie Back to the Future. Most of the lines are from the movie and the whole storyline is based on the movie as well. Thank you to all the custom content creators and I hope you enjoy the story....

This is a story about the movie Back to the Future. Most of the lines are from the movie and the whole storyline is based on the movie as well. Thank you to all the custom content creators and I hope you enjoy the story.... "Back to the Future"
(Year:1985) My name is Marty McFly and this is the story of how I went back to the future......... I walked into Proffesor Doc Brown's house. "Doc? Doc, are you there?" I looked around and he wasn't to be found. As I walked into the living room the phone rang and I went to answer it. "Hello?"
I heard Doc's voice on the other line, "Hello Marty, it's me"
"Hey, Doc! What's going on? I haven't seen you all week."
"I've been working on a new experiment, which reminds me, Marty, will you meet me at Twin Pines Mall at 1:00 tomorrow?"
"1:00 in the morning!?"
"Yes, and bring your video camera."
"Okay, Doc." I was about to say goodbye to him but then I heard the sound of chiming.
"Marty, are those my clocks I hear?"
I looked around, "Yeah, It's eight o'clock"
"Perfect! My experiment worked! There all exactly 25 minutes slow."
"Wait a minute, wait a minute, Doc. Are you telling me that it's 8:25?" "Yes"
"Darn, I'm late for school!" I hung up the phone and looked at the clock one last time. Then I ran as fast as I could to Hill Valley High School. I got to the front door of the school and was about to walk inside when I heard my girlfriend, Jennifers voice. "Marty, you better be careful, If the principal catches you it will be four tardies in a row."
Listening to her advice, I slowly walked through the doors, hoping not to get caught, but there he was.... The principal, Mr. Strickland, started one of his normal lectures. "Marty! Your late again, that's four in a row mister."
"Sorry Mr. Strickland."
"Your a slacker Mcfly! Your just like your old man!"
I looked up at him, "Can I go now, Mr. Strickland?" He ignored my question and continued on, "Your going to be lazy for your whole life, Marty, I know it. No Mcfly has ever ammounted to anything in the history of Hill Valley."
"Yeah, well history is gonna change." After my classes were over I headed to the autitorium. Today was the day of band auditions for the upcoming school prom. I want to be a musician so this was a big deal for me. In the middle of our song the head organizer of the dance yelled for us to stop. We did as we were told and listened for what he had to say. "I'm sorry guys, but I'm afraid that your just too darn loud. We can't use you for the dance." After the auditions I went to the park with Jennifer. "I'm too loud? I can't believe it. I'm never going to get to play in front of anybody... Maby I'm just not cut out for music." Jennifer stopped me there, "But your good, Marty, your really good. You can't just give up. You should send in your demo cd to the record company."
"No, Jennifer. What if they told me I was no good. What if they say 'get out of here kid, you got no future'. I just don't think I could take that kind of rejection. Jeez, I'm beginning to sound like my old man" I found a place to sit and relax, and Jennifer sat down next to me. I looked down the street and saw a brand new truck. "Wow, check out that 4 by 4. Some day, Jennifer, some day....Wouldn't it be nice to take that truck down to the beach, throw a couple sleeping bags in there, and lay out under the stars?" Jennifer paused for a moment and then looked up at me. "Does your mom know about tomorrow night?"
"What? About us going up to the lake? Are you kidding me? She would kill me if she found out, And I would get this standard lecture about how she never did that kind of stuff when she was a kid." I continued, "I swear, You think she was born a nun."
"She's just trying to keep you respectable."
"Well, she's not doing a very good job."
I leaned in to kiss her when suddenly someone interupted us.... "Hello, I'm trying to raise money to save the clock tower in town. If you could help it would be greatly appreciated--" I looked up at her, "Look, maby another time."
She continued anyway, "But did you know that it was hit by lightning twenty years ago, and is still standing today?"
I quickly gave her a quarter, "Now can you leave us alone?" "Sure, thank you!" I got up to leave and she stopped me. "Wait don't forget to take a flyer." I took it and began to walk away with Jennifer. I heard a car horn beeping and Jen said that it was her father picking her up. "I have to go Marty. Call me, okay? I'm staying at my grandmothers house this weekend, here's the number."
She wrote down the number on the back of the "Save the Clocktower" flyer and wrote I LOVE YOU in big letters next to it. I smiled and watched her walk away. Please tell me if you think that I should continue this or not! It was fun creating and I hope you all enjoyed it!!

Back to the Future Part 1 Scene 1

May 4, 2008 by maryash
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    37 Comment(s) posted so far

    On May 3, 2008 maryash wrote:

    if you've never seen it then i suggest that you watch the movie!! it's amazing!!\:wub\:

    On May 4, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    Wonderful job! You should continue! -plyangel456- \:D

    On May 4, 2008 wrote:

    That was so cool you should continue\:D

    On May 4, 2008 PhotoSigs wrote:

    \:cool\: I agree, I think you should continue, Great story & pics.\:cool\:

    On May 4, 2008 FathomDesigns wrote:

    That was good. Definately continue!!! \:D 5.0 \:rah\:

    On May 4, 2008 Ses wrote:

    \:D I loved Back to the Future! Thanks for the memories, please continue! \:D

    On May 5, 2008 Camila_CMD wrote:

    BTTF - the best movie ever - in TS2 style? Great! More, more, more \:rah\: I want to see DeLorean in action \:wub\: By the way: in last 3 days all BTTF movies were on TV (TVP2, Poland), i can watch it over and over \:D

    On May 5, 2008 Deanna73070 wrote:

    Great job on this! I feel like I'm reading the movie. Keep it up..I wanna read the rest!\:rah\: \:\) ~Deanna

    On May 5, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    great story, but I'm a little confused, congrats on the front page!!!

    On May 5, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On May 5, 2008 aamt27 wrote:

    Please continue with the story! It was really cool \:rah\:

    On May 5, 2008 olegario39 wrote:

    great!!

    i love back to the future!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 5, 2008 twinkletoe wrote:

    I've always liked Back to the Future\:D

    On May 5, 2008 indibabs wrote:

    that was really good! keep going with it. i think it will improve too! you did a fabulous job!!!!!


    barbara

    On May 5, 2008 captainlicious wrote:

    Amazing \:\)

    On May 5, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:rah\:great!more please! \:rah\:

    On May 5, 2008 babygrl12345 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On May 5, 2008 Luecy wrote:

    Please do continue...I do like to watch that movie and its like the movie has been written....\:D \:rah\: \:cool\:

    On May 5, 2008 samcactus101 wrote:

    Well I haven't watched the movie yet but I can tell its pretty dang AWESOME!\:rah\:And a lot of the TSRians seem to think so too\:D \:D \:P \:P You should definitely continue, since I don't get the chance to watch it, I can read it\:D \:\)

    On May 5, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    one of my favorite movies! really enjoyed your story! \:rah\:

    On May 5, 2008 BBKZ wrote:

    My favorite movie! The whole trilogy is gorgeous \:D Too bad that you didn't show us the scene when Marty plays the guitar in Doc's house - this was very funny \:D But your story is wonderful. Can't wait for the next part \:D

    On May 5, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On May 5, 2008 4aeki wrote:

    CONTINUE!\:D
    its great!\:\)

    On May 5, 2008 Earcat wrote:

    Continue! You;re faithful to the movie and use cc very well. I'm looking forward to part two, so don't disappoint me, please. \:cool\:

    On May 5, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:

    very cool story\:cool\: \:rah\:

    On May 5, 2008 smelly.sims wrote:

    Never seen the movie, but nice story!

    On May 6, 2008 goodcars wrote:

    Great!

    On May 6, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Great story, loved it! \:\)

    On May 6, 2008 .:Mary:. wrote:

    Awesome! \:\) I just watched this movie days ago \:D Haha.

    On May 6, 2008 plushies_lovergg wrote:

    I love the movie and looking forward to reading the whole series

    On May 10, 2008 twofee wrote:

    oh yeah! this is my favorite movie of all time. i know the lines by heart! you did an awesome job and please finish it so others will know the brilliance that is back to the future!!!! \:D \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On May 11, 2008 maja89 wrote:

    great story!

    On May 24, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Good story ! Thanks for sharing !\:\)

    On May 31, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    this is absoluetly the WORST story I have ever read!!!!! NEVER EVER WRITE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\:mad\:

    On May 31, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    I'm just kidding it's the BEST story I have ever read!! Love, Your Bestest Budder!!

    On Jul 22, 2008 Scooby Dude wrote:

    Nah, this story was definetely a good read. It was an intresting take on Marty's personnol life. I wonder what the Doc is planning. I hope u elaborate.
    \:D \:D

    On Jul 24, 2008 wrote:

    \:D

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