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Hello, and welcome to my new story! I hope you enjoy it!!
He didnt say anything so I continued.
"I haven't seen you at that piano in years, what made you decide to start again?"
"I don't know, I guess I just miss it, is all." Jen started thinking back to her childhood. In her younger years ALL her brother did was play the piano. It was like it was his best friend. At times she even got jelous that he spent more time there then with her. Then Jen snapped back to reality. "Anyways, I'm going shopping."
"What else is new?" smirked Dom. "But seriously, be--"
"I know, i know, careful"
He was always trying to protect me. I try to make him understand that I'm old enough to take care of myself, but I guess thats what big brothers are for. I headed off to the grocery store first to pick up some turkey and a few vegtables for dinner.
Then I went to the new cosmetics shop in town. It was really beautiful. They had everything from lipstick to perfume to cologne. After my full day of shopping I decided to relax at the local coffee shop. It's a very small place, very welcoming and cozy. I grabbed a cup of decafe and sat down in my usual seat. Then, out of the blue, a total stranger walked up to me and asked if he could sit down. Not wanting to be rude I quickly said yes. Normally I wouldn't be so nice to someone I didn't know but he looked vaguly familair. The first thing I asked him was his name and he said that it's Charlie. As soon as I heard that, I knew that I knew him from somewhere, I just wasn't sure where yet. So I decided the best way to figure it out was simply just to ask him.
"Charlie....you seem so familair. Have we met before?"
Quickly, without even thinking, he said no. "Are you sure? I mean, you look so--"
"I said I don't know you, alright?"
"Alright..."
For a few moments after it seemed pretty tense and akward but in a short time I forgot all about it, and we were chatting away like we were old highschool buddies. Charlie told me about how he went to college to become a lawyer, stayed in Harvard for three years and then dropped out to persue other intrests. He said that he would rather be a singer or a musician than have a steady job as a lawyer. I didn't ask many questions, I mostly just listened. I glanced at the clock and realized that I had been talking to Charlie for over three hours. "Dom must be getting worried" I thought.
I told Charlie that I had to go and that I would really like to see him again. So we exchanged phone numbers and I was on my way. When I arrived home dinner was already cooked and Dom was setting the table as I walked in.
"I'm soooo sorry. I lost track of time. I'm sorry--"
"Jen, it's fine. Just call me next time so I know where you are, okay?"
"Okay" As we sat down to eat he asked me what I was doing while I was out. I told him that I met a guy that I really liked and he was happy for me. I also told him that he looked strangely familair.
"So whats this guys name?" he asked.
"Charlie" Dominics face turned red and his smile quickly turned into a frown. "Did this Charlie have blond hair and green eyes?'
"Yeah, how did you kno--"
"Did he look about 5'8"
"Yeah, but--"
"Does he play the guitar?"
"Umm, well, he said he's a musician."
"Jen, he's Charles, from when we were kids, he's the one who stole my girl, he's the one who stole Penny! He's the one who ruined my......" Dom continued to talk but I didn't hear another word that he said. I just began to think, and to remember. I didn't know how I could forget. Charles and Dom were always inceperable, they went fishing, played in a band together, and were even on the same soccer team. They were best friends for years. They hung out every single day.......... Then I began to wonder about when I was at the coffee shop. Charlie said that he didn't know me. I wondered if he didn't remember or if he was trying to hide it. But why would he lie? He wouldn't. I also wondered if I should ever call him. He did get into a huge fight with my brother but that was so long ago. Maybe I should call.... A few days later I made my decision final. So I picked up the phone and began to dial right as my brother walked in. "Who are you calling, Jen?" he asked casually.
I never lied to him, so I told him flat out and figured he would understand, but I was wrong.
"Jen! Do you know what this guy did to me? Do you know how bad he hurt me? I don't want him to do the same to you."
I began to get frustrated, "Yeah, Dom, I know. He stole your girlfriend and you got mad! Get over it already! Your always trying to protect me, well here's some news for you, i can protect myself!" With that I was out the door. I went into my room to listen to some music, it always cheers me up. The songs began to play but I couldn't concentrate on them. All I could think about was how I just yelled at my brother for no reason at all. I've never done that before and I felt terrible. I didn't want Dom to be upset, but I still really wanted to see Charlie. Since music wasn't helping I thought I'd sit down and watch some television. I noticed there was a movie in the dvd player, not knowing what it was, I hit play. It turns out it was a video of us when we were in the city together a few months ago. I watched the whole video, then re-watched it. It was then that I decided that Dom was much more important to me then Charlie was, and I wouldn't dare ruin our realationship. After a while I was on my way way to Dom's room to apoligize. But when I passed the phone in the hall it began to ring. I looked at the caller i.d. and it said "restricted". Thinking nothing of it, I answered the phone.
It was Charlie, "Hey, you wanna hang out sometime?"
And what I said next changed my life forever.........
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On Jul 21, 2008 maryash wrote:
I started this new story because my computer crashed and I lost everything from my other ones. But if you want me to continue them anyways, please just tell me
I hope you enjoyed this story
On Jul 22, 2008 juliekins wrote:
really good!
i think you should finish it
On Jul 22, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:
Cliffhanger! I wanna know what happens next!!
On Jul 22, 2008 Hottiesheldon wrote:
I can't wait to read the next part and this first part is really good I hope Jen decides to meet Charlie and find out wether he remembered or not about the past.
5.0
On Jul 22, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:
Rated 5! Very nice pics. Can't wait for the next part!
On Jul 22, 2008 Scooby Dude wrote:
It's a good story setting up for more. The ending was a bit dramatic but, no doubt good. I hope you do elaborate more with the whole 'stole my girlfriend' issue. I am looking forward to the next one.
On Jul 22, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:
Great job, I enjoyed it and can't just wait for the next part
5.0
On Jul 22, 2008 KionaPlay wrote:
Great story, finish it, please! I wanna know what's going to happen!!
On Jul 22, 2008 Laura-rose wrote:
I loved you story, it was awesome.
On Jul 22, 2008 lien007p wrote:
love it!!
On Jul 22, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:
You did such a great job. The writing was clear and very emotional, you could feel that she cares for her brother. It was very good to say that Charlie stole Dom's girlfriend and that that's the reason Dom's upset, it makes us relate to him but I agree with one comment here, you should have elaborated thiss more, but I'm sure you will do it in the next part or so, so don't watch it as criticism.
Anyways, it was fun reading and I can't wait for the next part.
On Jul 22, 2008 exmoorpony wrote:
Great!
On Jul 22, 2008 Tupiniquim6 wrote:
Great job! Please, continue the story! I'm dying to know what will happen to them.
On Jul 22, 2008 maryash2 wrote:
That was simply fantastic!! I really enjoyed it! I liked all of the pictures from her past and all of the photo-shopped pics!! Great job!!!!!
On Jul 22, 2008 wrote:
I think it was really goooooood.
You have to finish the story
On Jul 22, 2008 wrote:
damn this is soo qewd!!! you should continue this one cause like i kept clickinq the clip and then i was like whats wronq with the stupid button and it was the last clip lol.
On Jul 22, 2008 redtheprep wrote:
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On Jul 22, 2008 Smokey_forever64 wrote:
Keep going please!!!!
On Jul 22, 2008 Gem--xx wrote:
On Jul 22, 2008 MinnieID wrote:
Nice Story ^^
On Jul 22, 2008 Alathiel wrote:
On Jul 22, 2008 Buckeye428 wrote:
Nice ending, I didn't see that coming since I thought she had decided that she liked Dominic. I liked your flashbacks and thought you handled them well. Moving into a flashback with dialogue can be difficult sometimes, but you did it well.
On Jul 22, 2008 butternugsquash wrote:
Good story!
On Jul 22, 2008 cariadbach wrote:
On Jul 22, 2008 supasexyvadore wrote:
iT WaS aMaZiNG i L0VeD iT...i W0ULDLiKE 2 KN0e WHaT HaPPeNS NXT...
On Jul 22, 2008 sappbaptiste wrote:
On Jul 22, 2008 leifofdel wrote:
Wondering what she said. Looking foward to more!
On Jul 22, 2008 petskittleskitten wrote:
On Jul 22, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:
Amazing story so far! I can't wait to read the next part! -plyangel456-
On Jul 22, 2008 twofee wrote:
awesome start, i really want to know what she says and how it changes her whole life
On Jul 22, 2008 lisa9999 wrote:
Can't wait for the rest of the story! Really Good!
On Jul 22, 2008 Chuck66 wrote:
wow
On Jul 22, 2008 mini me3393 wrote:
Ahhh! I want to know what she said! Haha, you did a great job on this part. Keep up the awesome work!
On Jul 23, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:
very good story and pictures
On Jul 23, 2008 blackbutterflys wrote:
tre tre bein
On Jul 23, 2008 irngirl96 wrote:
On Jul 23, 2008 Murphy75 wrote:
Yes, great story so far...I am interested to know what happens with Charlie
On Jul 23, 2008 lulu15 wrote:
Great cliffhanger!
Can't wait to read more.
On Jul 23, 2008 wrote:
guhh I don't like the gibberish guy but anyways great story and I thought your sims were really purdy!
On Jul 23, 2008 converse02 wrote:
great start! I can't believe you left us on a cliffhanger!!
but it just adds to the curiosity.
well can't wait till the next one. 
5++
On Jul 25, 2008 Stars45 wrote:
great start. Can't wait for the rest
On Jul 26, 2008 KoolNate wrote:
good story idea
On Jul 26, 2008 maryash2 wrote:
that was terrible, the worst story ever!! lol, jk that was great!
On Aug 2, 2008 lisasimsneros wrote:
Wow!!! Please please make another one!!
On Aug 13, 2008 Hunter_13 wrote:
please continue!!!
its really really good
On Sep 13, 2008 wwechick38 wrote:
this is soo good! you should make another
