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This is yet another new story, called 'Remember Me, My Love.' I really hope you enjoy this one! Thanks to all of the cc makers, without you my game would be boring! Don't forget to comment when you are done reading, enjoy!!
"Evi, wait up." Justin declaired.
"Justin, what are you doing here, at my house?" She said a bit nervous.
"Well, I wanted to tell you something." He said. "Really? Well, what is it?" she said turning around quickly.
"Ummm... how can I say this...? Well, I know that you have and have had a crush on me and I think I'm starting to like you too. But, I have one question, I see you hanging out with Jack a lot and I wanted to know if you guys were a couple?" He asked.
"No, not at all." She said questionable.
"Great!" He smiled.
He grabbed her, just like she had always dreamed of him doing. She finally had Justin, and she was happier than ever. He roughly kissed her lips and picked her up into his arms. He carefully carried her up all of the porch steps and reached in her pocket for her house keys. She laughed flirtaciously and he smiled. Finally he got the keys and opened the front door. He continued to carry her into her home and he looked around, she continued to laugh.
"So, you really like me?" She questioned.
But he did not answer when he saw what was on the counter. He dropped her to her feet and his smile turned to an angry pout.
"What's wrong?" She asked.
But again, he did not answer. He only stood there, as Evi was afraid to turn around. Evangeline walked towards the counter and Justin slowly followed behind her. She could already she flowers on the counter and wondered what else was there. On the counter was a letter, a love letter, that was written in pink ink and a small bouquet of pink daises. She quickly skimmed to the end of the letter and saw that it was signed by Jack. Evi turned around slowly, holding the letter close to her body.
"It's from Jack." She stammered.
"I thought you said you two didn't have feelings for each other, and what's up with the stupid roses?" He said abnoxiously.
"There daises." She said without another word. She walked over to her dining room table, sat down on one of the hard chairs and quietly read the letter.
'Dear Evangeline Lilly,
Hello, I have been thinking that maybe our friendship could turn into more. I really like you and you seem to like me, so I was hoping you would go on a date with me, tommorrow, maybe. Well, talk to you soon.
Love,
Jack' Justin didn't read the letter, but he new it was nothing he wanted to read. He immedially scremed at her.
"You lied to be, you lied to me!!!" He yelled.
"It's not what you think, Justin, he may love me, but I don't love him. I love you." She said trying to calm him down.
He pouted again, but agreed to stay and give Evi another chance.
"I'll go make some bagels fo us, you go rest over there." She said. Evangeline put creamcheese on two of the bagels and Justin stood behind her dangeling the daises in his hand. Evi thought about the letter, Jack had liked her, did she like him too?
"You sure you don't like that guy, John?" Justin said interrupting her thoughts.
"I'm sure, and his name is Jack." She corrected him.
"Whatever." He said rudely.
"Here, the bagels are ready." She said sweetly.
"Thanks." He said beginning to smile again.
"You have a seat, and I'll go get my bagel." Evi smiled. They silentely ate, no one said a word. Evangeline was kind of happy to have some peace and quiet, but she didn't want her 'love' to hate her already.
"You're not mad at me, right?" She said slowly.
"No, I'm not mad at YOU, I'm mad at JACK." He said putting emphisis on the words you and Jack.
She didn't say another word, and then shortly after, the phone rang. "Excuse me, but let me get that." Evi said politely.
"No!" He yelled and quickly jumped out of his seat to run towards the phone.
"Wait, Justin, wait!" She screamed, knowing that it could possibly be Jack. Justin got there quicker than Evi and he quickly read the caller-id.
'Jack Shephard; (780)-981-6778'
Justin was really angry this time, and wasn't going to throw out anymore second chances.He turned and left, Evi tried to catch up behind him and almost fell out of her chair. "Wait! Wait! Wait! Please Justin, just wait a second!" She pleaded.
"What could you possibly want to say now?" He shouted.
"Justin, I'm sorry, I'm really, really sorry. It's Jack, he's obsessed with me, he loves me. But I don't love him, i love you." She stammered with a tear running down her cheack.
Justin didn't say anything, he just let her cry and continued to run towards the door. She took a break to catch her breath and then followed after him.
By this time he was already in his car, driving away.
"Wait, Justin, I'm sorry." She cried, even though she had no reason to be sorry.
He didn't even look at her, he just kept driving. And with thinking Evi ran in front of his Ford to try and get his attention, and get him to stop driving. Justin's anger got the best of him and distracted him from knowing where he was driving. He acidentally ran over Evi. Evangeline could hardly breath, she gasped with every breath she took and the it all went black. "What are you going to do to help her when she wakes up?" Jack asked with concern.
"We are not to sure she will ever wake up from this coma. It has already been three months." Said the head doctor.
"Never give up on her." Jack snapped
"Don't worry, we will not. " Said one of the nurses.
The doctor and the nurse went over in the corner of the room, and pulled the curtain to talk in private. Jack couldn't he what they were saying, their voices were muffled. Jack looked down at Evi and sighed. He saw the many cuts and scraps on face, and even the stiches on her forehead. He remembered the doctors telling him that she will suffer with many mental issues, but they were unsure of what types. Jack hoped none of this would happen, he just wanted Evi to be okay. Jack also wondered why he was the only one to visit Evi, no one else came, not her mother, her father, or even her five brother and sisters. Was he the only one who truly cared about Evi? "I love you Evangeline Lilly, I really love you." He said loudly.
"aaaammmmmmmmm..." Evi groaned.
"Evi, Evi, are you awake, it's me Jack." Jack said more quiet this time.
"Evi, Jack? Who are they?" She mumbled.
Jack was speechless, he didn't know how to respond to what she had just said.
"And, errr... Jack, thats is you're name right," she said remembering that he had just told her his name, "Why do I feel weird, almost like I could get sick?" She questioned with her voice still a little grogey from just waking up.
"Well, Evangeline, you're..."
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Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed it! Look out for the next part, and don't forget to rate and comment! --Mary-Kate
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20 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jun 30, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:
Very cute story so far! I can't wait to read more! -plyangel456-
On Jun 30, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:
It drew me in and i could not stop reading
On Jun 30, 2008 maxi king wrote:
On Jun 30, 2008 MagySims wrote:
Great story...Keep Writing! I canīt wait for another part! 5.0
On Jun 30, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
great story! looking forward to reading more!
On Jun 30, 2008 inge8208 wrote:
Very good, and a bit sad too.
On Jun 30, 2008 MinnieID wrote:
very nice, hope to read more soon
On Jun 30, 2008 maryash wrote:
outstanding! i cant wait to read more of it!!
On Jun 30, 2008 wrote:
Very nice story! I love the bagels...
On Jul 1, 2008 arc1801 wrote:
On Jul 1, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:
ooh...very sneaky...cutting the story off at a good part
On Jul 1, 2008 dunkićka wrote:
On Jul 1, 2008 Fikcija wrote:
Not bad
Waiting for the next part.
On Jul 1, 2008 converse02 wrote:
aww how cute! I can't wait for the next part.
On Jul 3, 2008 kazakh wrote:
very nice story!
Evi's scars are so realistic! I love this story
On Jul 3, 2008 wrote:
OMG! That was wonderful! Truly spectacular!
On Jul 11, 2008 Chuck66 wrote:
heartbreaking
On Jul 19, 2008 redtheprep wrote:
lovv ett,,
On Jul 28, 2008 wrote:
No rudeness intended but Evi's wounds would have healed by now. It had been three months. Unless she broke something.
On Aug 6, 2008 Deedee09 wrote:
Eh evi's cut's and grazes would of healed- no offence but over 3 months they would of. good over all