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A Fairy-Tale
or my live!
Hello everyone, here is my new story and I hope you will enjoy it! Sorry for gramma or spelling mistakes( I'm sure you will find some! ) and Thank you to all the great Creators!! Your the best!
Please rate and comment ( it make the work worth )!

A Fairy-Tale
or my live!
Hello everyone, here is my new story and I hope you will enjoy it! Sorry for gramma or spelling mistakes( I'm sure you will find some! ) and Thank you to all the great Creators!! Your the best!
Please rate and comment ( it make the work worth )! Hello, I'm Ben and I'll tell you my little fairy tale!
I think everything started shortly after the accident of my dad. He's gone to heaven now and we are alone with mum. It's sad for all of us but my brother worry's my mum most because he got bad friends and bad grades. My dad used to talk sence to him but mum can't handle him. So as he was once more in trouble, my mum decided it was best to get away from his friends and the town. Mum: we going to live with Grandma Amy, she's the mum of your father and really nice. But don't believe everything she's saying, she like's telling story's!
David (my brother): I don't want to go away from here, mum! I got all my friends here and there aren't any place's to meet friends anyway.I want to lieve in a city.
Mum: no, we move and it's your own fault that we do! So we packed all our stuff and moved away from Simcity to Farybay a small place on the coast. That is grandma's house, I love it! It's near the forest and so peaceful! David don't like it at all. That is grandma Amy, she's so nice to us, I love her already and I help her with everything. I love the garden, so I help there most of the time when mum is at work, we need the money she sayed as she looked for work. David sit's on the computer all the time and chats with his friends or play some stupid game. He hardly gets up from it! There is a small pond in the forest and I go there for some fishing, it's great, I love it! After a month or so, Grandma Amy came to me.
Amy: you are so often in the forest, you must love it there, did you see someting interessting there?
Me: No, what should I see, Nanny?
Amy: Fairy's, Ben! When they like you, they come and you can see them. They normaly afraid because a lot humans lock them in prison.
Ben: I don't believe you, I only can see some animals there!
 A month past and nothing happend much but then, I was on my way to the pond, I saw a girl! She was dressed like a fairy and so beautiful but looked very sad. I went to her. Me: Hello, I'm Ben! You look sad, can I help you? Did you get lost?
Girl: My name is Lilly and I'm not lost. I run away from my uncle, he's so horrible. My parends got caught and as they tryed to escape, they had an accident and now they both dead! The human's hate us and I hate my uncle and I'm so alone. (tears run down her face and I feld sorry for her)
Me: What do you mean with that?
Lilly: Oh, I thought you knew that I'm a fairy. Me: So you are real then!
Lilly: Yes. Can you help me? I'm hungry and I don't know were to go.
Me: Sure, I go and get my tent and a view other things from home for you, so you can stay here. I get you something to eat every day and bring it to you. Do you want to come with me to get the tent? We found a nice place for her and we put my tent up. So she was living here now. I came every day here to see her and we soon were best friends.I had to be careful, so no one find out about her. A hole year went by like this. It was my brothers birthday and that soon he was grown up, he moved out, back to the city. My mum was very sad about it and I tryed my best to cheer her up. I still loved it here and I like my mum's new boyfriend, his name is Andrew and he is very nice to us. After another two month, it was my birthday. Straid after my birthday party, I went to see Lilly, it was her birthday as well and I wanted to see how she looked now! She was even more beautiful as before and I fell in love with her at this moment. I think she feld the same about me because she came to me and gave me a kiss! A bit later, Mum came to me, she wanted that I go to Uni and study something but I don't want to go there!
Mum: you good enough, son! Do something with your life.
Me: Mum, I don't wanna go, I don't have to study to be happy! I want to stay here.
Amy: Let him, he's happy here and that is more important. I think he belongs here, like his Grandad. They so much a like and Grandad was very happy! Later Granny came to see me.
Amy: what is her name, boy?
Ben: who's name?
Amy: you little fairy's, the one you get all the food for!
Ben: you know?
Amy: Yes! Well, I was once a fairy too! I done everything for your Grandad and after they discovered us, I had to choose, human with him or fairy without him! Just think about, what you two want! I will be here to help, if you need me! Granny looked suddenly so much older but I didn't worried so much about it and I still went to see Lilly the next day.But as I got there, Lilly wasn't there and I was scared, so I run as quick as I could, back to the house.
Me: Nanny,Nanny, Lilly is gone! There came and got her!
Amy: Slow down, boy! Tell me all from the start.
And so I told my Grandma everything and she listen carefully. Amy: alright, we going to the Fairy-village, I still know everyone there, so I'm going to talk to them!
I went in the house and wrote a little note for mum, so that she don't worry when she comes home.
After that we went on our way to the Fairy-village, it was a long walk but we got there in the end! There was she, the queen of the fairy's! Grandma went to her and I followed her.
Queen: You brought a human to our village? How could you, Amy!
Amy: The boy is my grandchild, so he's not only a human, is he! And he looked after Lilly the hole time and didn't tell anyone, so you can trust him! He loves her and she loves him as well! Lilly wasn't happy here before, she will run away again, give her to me and I look after her! And we will see what to do when they both grow up! Queen: I think you right, it's better you take her with you! She would run away anyway but you have to be careful, Amy! I'm going to trust you on that one! So we went back home and Lilly got the old room of my brother. We had some problems with her wings but they don't show now. I was so happy and Lilly as well, we were so much in love. Mum didn't understood a thing but because we were so happy, she didn't say anything. Her boyfriend was nearly everyday here, so she was happy as well! So we lived happy like this till my and Lilly's birthday! At last we were adults and a view day's later my mum married her boyfriend, she was so happy! They moved to his house,so we were alone with Grandma. I was glad that she had someone to love and to keep her happy. Now we had to decide what we want to do. It wasn't easy at all, Lilly loves the nature, me too, but I don't want to live in the forest. I want to work, live here with Grandma. So we talk about our future and Lilly said that she wanted to stay here as well, with me and Amy. I was very happy to hear that! The next day, we went to the queen to tell her about our feelings, that we love each other, wanted to get married and have some kids! That I want to work and that we want to live with Grandma.
Me: Maybe we can get humans and Fairy's together, get everyone to trust the other, maybe even to like each other, starting slow, with just a view good friends we can trust. What do you think?
The queen thought about it, yes, maybe it was time to go new ways.
Queen: Maybe you right, I allow you two to stay together and to talk about us with good friends but be careful and don't get us in danger, tell me as often as you can about the steps you take! We were so happy, that we decided to marry the very next day! It was lovely and no one cared about my little fairy. I had told all of them before and they promiced to keep it a secret for now! That was a great start! After a view month, Grandma died and we were very sad! Lilly hoped so much that Amy would be there for our baby and for us as well, to give us advice and some help. We loved her very, very much! After another view months, we had our first baby and soon we had lots of great friends and they all live nicely with the fairy's here in Fairybay. Now Fairybay is a place for humans and Fairy's and no one is allowed to live here, when they don't like or belive in Fairy's. They all live and work great together! So in the end we done a lot for the Fairy's! Well, now we were old and still very happy, happy to live here, in peace with human and Fairy's. We have a big family now, as you can see. We achieved everything, we wished for.I hope we will live for long time, to see our granchildren! Well that is the end of my story! Just belive in yourself and you can achieve nearly everything!

A Fairy-Tale or my live!

Nov 28, 2008 by maxi king
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    31 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 29, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    Beautiful screenshots and a great story!\:D \:rah\:

    On Nov 29, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:

    I loved it! I was really original.....\:rah\:

    On Nov 29, 2008 narniana wrote:

    Great custom content-screenshots and story!!!!!\:wub\: \:wub\: \;\)

    On Nov 29, 2008 pjeff03 wrote:

    That was fantastic! It was acctually better than i thought it would be. 5.0!!!

    On Nov 29, 2008 PAP3RxH3ARTS wrote:

    I loved it!
    Except for the grammar \:\(
    I wouldn't normally comment on grammar but the name should be A Fairy-Tale or My Life not live.

    On Nov 29, 2008 lilgothgal99 wrote:

    wow maxi where do u get ALL your clothes and downloads from i want to no because somehow I sufford a lose of ALL my downloads everyone I dont have much hair or clothes!
    Please tell me n write baq
    Rachael \:D

    On Nov 29, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Wow, beautiful screen shots, great job!! Where did you get Ben's mum's hair from?? \:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 catsandbooks wrote:

    Great story, great screenshots! \:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 charray wrote:

    Really good story \:rah\: \:\) \:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 SIMcredible! wrote:

    Great story, Maxi! Well done \;\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 Scarlet1000 wrote:

    lovely!!\:wub\: where did yuo get the wings??\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 squeakers wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: OMG!!!!This is such a wonderful story, I loved stories like this when I was a little girl, and still read them every now and then. You're screenshots are breathtaking, and would make beautiful greeting cards, and postcards!!!\:D Thank you so very much for sharing such a lovely and moving story, I can't wait til the next one!!!!!\:wub\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 30, 2008 Little Cloud wrote:

    Good job with the story and the screenshots. I liked your story very much \:P \:D \:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 qvisn wrote:

    \:rah\: Good work Maxi, i loved it\:rah\: never mind the grammer, a lot of English speaking people get it wrong. your doing really well.\:P

    On Nov 30, 2008 PenelopeT wrote:

    Touching and beautiful story.\:wub\: You took FANTASTIC screenshots. \:rah\: I also LOVED the house and the garden. Great use of custom content too! \:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 PenelopeT wrote:

    Oops forgot to rate! 5.0 \:\)

    On Nov 30, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:

    \:\) I love this story! You did a wonderful job with the screenshots! They have lots of color, and the cc looked great! Very well written! Great job!\:D

    On Dec 11, 2008 LD202 wrote:

    great job on the storie

    On Dec 12, 2008 wrote:

    Very good story\:D \:D

    On Dec 16, 2008 lisa9999 wrote:

    I love this story! Fantastic!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 20, 2008 lisa9999 wrote:

    This is also a good story. Keep up the good work!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 20, 2008 lisa9999 wrote:

    See I read so many stories that I forgot I read this one and commented on it twice, now thrice. You know it is a good story when it can be read more than once and is still appreciated!

    On Dec 20, 2008 drewsoltesz wrote:

    Maxi, a delightful read, your shots are getting better and better, love the detail you put in them! Just one thing, angle the shots a little more so the green plumbob above their head is not showing. And don't worry about the grammar, for English not being your first language, you are doing just fine!! And you know I love happy endings, well done mate!~Karen\:\)

    On Dec 21, 2008 charlottey9p wrote:

    PAP3RxH3ARTS and anyone else commenting on grammer.
    This person is german so It is pretty good grammer.
    btw another awsome story

    On Jan 6, 2009 KDLANG0 wrote:

    What I admire most about people is their imagination! And I really admire yours in this story particuarly! Sure I love the house, the coustumes and the shots, but itīs nothing compared to your idea of this story... Sure you got 5 \;\) \:P \:wub\:

    On Jan 19, 2009 Simpetuous1 wrote:

    I am not usually into the story writing as part of playing the Sims but lately I have have begun to appreciate the work others put into this.  I really loved your story.  It is so innocent and refreshing compared to some of the more violent stories I've come across.  Your screen shots are just beautiful and the way you decorate in the game is wonderful.  I love the clothes, the faces, the landscaping...I love it all.  Great job!!!!

    On Mar 17, 2009 Desu Baloney wrote:

    that was so great! Fairies really are real, you know. I have prove but I don't want to reveal it! \:D Good job with this story, I really enjoyed and I can tell a lot of other people did, too! \:\)\:\)\:\)\:\)\:\)\:\)\:\)

    On Mar 17, 2009 Desu Baloney wrote:

    that was so great! Fairies really are real, you know. I have prove but I don't want to reveal it! \:D Good job with this story, I really enjoyed and I can tell a lot of other people did, too! \:\)\:\)\:\)\:\)\:\)\:\)\:\)

    On Apr 7, 2009 wrote:

    Such a lovely story, pictures and storyline \:wub\:

    On Apr 30, 2009 topaz27 wrote:

    Beautiful story, made my day so much brighter \:rah\:  \:wub\:

    On Dec 1, 2009 Pralinesims wrote:

    sehr sehr cool danke\:wub\:

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