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A Hard Life !
Here is my new story, hope you like it ! Thank you to all the CC-Creators, you are so great and to everybody reading my storys! Please comment and rate.

A Hard Life !
Here is my new story, hope you like it ! Thank you to all the CC-Creators, you are so great and to everybody reading my storys! Please comment and rate. I start this story on a nice, early summer day. It was Marc's birthday and after growing into a kid, he played happy with his brother and his new toys in the livingroom.
( Marc is the one with black hair! ) His parents was outside by the car, talking about something the kids shouldn't hear as suddenly...... two police cars pulled up in front of the house, they talked shortly with them and got them in the police car. Everything went so quick! After only a view minutes, they was standing on the road, watching the police cars disapear in the distance. The police officer said, that they done something bad, so bad that they had to go to prison for a while. He didn't say what they done because of the kids, he thought it was hard enough for them already! So now Nanny had to look after the two boys but she was very old and wasn't able to look after herself, that is why she lived with them in the first place.But she loved them a lot and was a lovely lady to everybody. The hole next year Marco and Marc was busy helping their Nanny. Marco was older, so he went to the bank and shopping with her and done some of the cleaning in the house. Marc done some of the cleaning as well and the garden. They were so busy, that they thought about the next thing they had to do before they even finished what they were doing. Poor kids, their Grandma felt sorry for them but she wasn't able to do much about it. Well she done the cooking and she gave them all the love she had! After one and a half year the Nanny died, it was late and the two boy's wanted to say night to her but as they walked in her room, they saw her in her bed, no colour in her face! They knew straight away that she was dead and they cried for hours! But they had to think as well, they didn't want to go in different and strange families! And because they didn't now any better, they burried her in the same night in the garden.
Every time they needed some money, Marco told the Lady from the bank, that poor Nanny didn't feel good and because they knew him well, he got the money ( it's not allowed but she wanted to help the nice boy looking after his Granny!). They were careful with the money, so it would last longer. And so went another year by. One day, a woman came to the house, Marco said hello and she told him that she was a sozialworker and wanted to see, if everything was fine. Marco said to her that it was a bad day today because his Grandma wasn't feeling well and was sleeping in bed. The sozialworker said that she would be back in a couple of days to speak with his Grandma and to have a look around to see if everything was alright. Then she went off with her car.
But what now? Marco and Marc was scared and so they decided to run away. Well not far away to the city, no deep in the woods near that small lake. They build a very small house and a garden, so they can grow some food. They still had a bit money and they took a lot from the house with them! It was a hard life there but they grow very close together. And so went another half year, a hard and lonley half year by. Then it was Marco's birthday. They didn't see their parents for three years now! They felt so lonely, so they decided to go home and see what happend in the mean time. The boys walked up the path and saw, that the car wasn't the same as before and a pool was there, what happend? As they came closer, they saw that someone different lifed there now! Marco saw this girl on the chair and was in love with her straight away, he didn't see or hear anything else! The girl noticed them as well and got off her chair. Now Marc was scared and wanted to go but Marco didn't hear him! Instead the parents of the girl came outsite towards him. He didn't know what to do and he was so scared, and because they looked like nice people, he just told them the hole story! So they took them in and phoned the police, to see what happend to their parents. Their mother was free already, so they called her next but she didn't care about them and agreed to let them stay with them! Poor kids! So the boys had to share a room now but it didn't matter because they all was so nice and careing. And shortly they had a new decorated room, it was so great! Marc was doing a lot with Mike and Maria( there so off new parents ) and finaly went to school again, it was hard because he missed so much but everybody helped him! Isn't that sweet, they so much in love! Everyone was so lovely to the boys and Marco found his teenage love, it could'nt get to be any better! Time went by and soon it was Marc's birthday, it was a great and fun day! They went to Disney World and later Marc had his birthday cake. ( He looks like his dad, I think anyway! )
It was late now and everybody just wanted to go to bed as they heard a loud knock on the door! Marc went and answered the door. What a surprice! His parents were here! His dad was free at last and wanted the boys back! So they had to go with them but by now, they rather stayed with the Garrisons, they really loved them. Marco was so sad that he stoped talking to everyone! His father was very angry about it and shouted all the time! The two boy's feld very lonely and wasn't even allowed to go to school. Marc was scared and didn't know what to do, there wasn't a phone or a computer, so he wasn't able to contact someone. One morning Marc went in the garden (he allways does it, when he cant sleep!) to sit on the bench. Suddenly he saw Sally comming looking the same sad as Marco. They talked for some time, Sally told him how she was looking everywhere to find them and Marc told her abou their new life and how bad Marco was. Sally promiced to talk to her perants and to help somehow, then she had to go. Later Marc told his brother about earlier this morning and then Marco started to cry! Now Marc couldn't hold back either and they both cryed! Two days later! Suddenly two police officer and a sozialworker came to the house.They talked for hours in the kitchen. Then the sozialworker came out to the boys and told them to pack their stuff! They drove with the sozialworker back to the Garrisons! They were so happy to see the two again, especially Sally! Marc and Marco were allowed to life with them till they grow up.
Happy end? Yes and No! Sally and Marco both studied toghter and got married later. Look thats the first baby, a girl. And they very happy! But Marc didn't want to study, he wasn't good in school, he missed to much of it. Instead he concentrated on women, he had lots of them! He was scared to be a bad dad, so he didn't let any girl get his heart. Marco was worried about his brother.
But one day: well I show you! One morning he went out for shopping, he was about to go in that shop ( without any money, stupid boy! ), as he saw that lovely girl. He forgot everything around him! He only had eyes for the girl. She did noticed and because she thought he was good looking, she went to him. Her name was Isabelle and she invited him for something to eat. Marc didn't had any money so he didn't want to ,but before he could say something she said ,only something she would fix up at home, so he went with her. It changed everything,his hole life! She was rich and lonley but didn't wanted a rich man, like her dad wanted for her! They talked for hour's. Soon they moved together! They didn't rush to anything and with some time, they grow to the perfect match! Marc finaly got himself a job and he proved to Isabelles father that he was the right one for his daughter. And here you can see how happy they are at last.They both married now and have kids of their own! Marc and Marco live close to each other and are still best friends as well as brothers.And I must say they are lovely dads!
And so you see, there is a lovely happy end, in the end!

A Hard Life!

Jan 8, 2009 by maxi king
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    29 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jan 9, 2009 jennnnnie02 wrote:

    Aw, very nice. I loved this. \:D

    On Jan 9, 2009 lisa9999 wrote:

    Great story! Everyone loves a Happy Ending!\:wub\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 9, 2009 drewsoltesz wrote:

    It took a while to get there, lots of ups and downs, but happy endings all around! Nicely done, Maxi mate!\:wub\:

    On Jan 9, 2009 fionaivri wrote:

    Oh, really sweet! \:D

    On Jan 9, 2009 Little Cloud wrote:

    Very sweet \:wub\: \:wub\: \:rah\:!!!

    On Jan 9, 2009 tykijones wrote:

    Through all the ups and downs they all had a happy ending maxi king you never fail to amaze me with your stories

    On Jan 9, 2009 etheea wrote:

    \:D awsome CC\:D\:D\:DD:

    On Jan 10, 2009 squeakers wrote:

    \:wub\: Wonderful story, it started sad, got happy, sad and happy again, you did a wonderful job telling it, and the screenshots were gorgeous!!!\:wub\: You have an amazing gift for storytelling, and you get better and better with each one, WTG!!!!\:D I cannot wait to see the next one, this one is one of my favorites!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: Keep them coming, I'll be here waiting!!!!\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 10, 2009 nleslie wrote:

    Great! But the cover shot was a little strange/deceptive. :P

    On Jan 10, 2009 angiex wrote:

    aww very cute and sweet \:\) x

    On Jan 11, 2009 BBKZ wrote:

    It was so sad at the beginning... but... thank God everything ended well \:\) Great story \:\) I'm touched. Thank you for sharing \:\)

    On Jan 11, 2009 PenelopeT wrote:

    Whew, when the Grandmas died I thought their lives would be over. However, though challenging, they began a sweet journey into adulthood. Very nice story Maxi. \:\)

    On Jan 11, 2009 Scarlet1000 wrote:

    Awwww so cute! I loved it!

    On Jan 13, 2009 Murphy75 wrote:

    Great story!  I really liked how they both ended up with happy families!\:wub\:

    On Jan 15, 2009 oreocush wrote:

    Great story so makin any more ? You could be a good book writer you know ! someone should make a series of sims book writers like my self. Any way nice story maxi. I love family stories as you can see. Well great job see ya.

    On Jan 15, 2009 boogie woogie wrote:

    That was such a nice story! And I love happy endings.\:D

    On Jan 18, 2009 qvisn wrote:

    I really like this one, Thanks for another lovely story.\:wub\:

    On Jan 20, 2009 zucchinideen wrote:

    ooooohhhh i loved this \:wub\:

    On Jan 20, 2009 roseofsharon1980 wrote:

    Awwwwe.  I loved your story, it was sad at first but at least it ended with a happy ending.  I like it!!!  \:wub\:

    On Jan 21, 2009 pleasure0711 wrote:

    Awww thats a very nice story made me cry,\:D  but it was happy tears

    On Jan 23, 2009 Ame-C wrote:

    Life is so much sweeter when you have had so many hardships to overcome! Good story!\:rah\:

    On Jan 27, 2009 charray wrote:

    Great job on this story \:\)  Thanks for sharing it \:rah\:

    On Feb 1, 2009 ReadySteadyGo! wrote:

    aWWWW a nice story

    On Mar 19, 2009 spitzmagic wrote:

    very nice  perfect ending. These are so fun to read..Thank you \:wub\:

    On Mar 24, 2009 MizLuv2005 wrote:

    Very nice! Beautiful Sims as always, I don't have a stroller in my game, Can the sims really push that thing down the street? \:\)

    On Apr 10, 2009 wrote:

    I read this yesterday and forgot to comment. Great storyline and as the others say, nice with a happy ending. \:D

    On Apr 11, 2009 topaz27 wrote:

    Great story, it was so sad in parts but I am so glad that Marc and Marco are now happy, beautiful ending \:\)  \:wub\:  \:rah\:

    On May 6, 2009 CamCo9 wrote:

    well written and good story line! Cam xx

    On Jul 9, 2009 sly81 wrote:

    how did you get a lawnmower!

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