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Hello, welcome to my new story! This is the story of the son from Amy and Marc but you don't have to read the other parts! Sorry for my english, I'm still german but I try my best! A big thank you to the CC Creators! Please rate and comment on the end!

Hello, welcome to my new story! This is the story of the son from Amy and Marc but you don't have to read the other parts! Sorry for my english, I'm still german but I try my best! A big thank you to the CC Creators! Please rate and comment on the end! This is were we left! Little Ben on Christmas! He is ill but his Dad found a medicine, so he's not to bad. He gets often very bad headache and is a lot sleeping because of his medecine! But apart from that he is doing ok! This is Ben after his birthday, nice boy, isn't he? He loves learning things and read a lot, he don't like school because he don't have any friends, they think he is strange because of his bad headaches. In the moment he is in and out of hospital most of the time. He has some problems with the medecine but just before he grow into a Teen, they got him on the right amount of medecine and he feld much better, didn't had so much headache now! See, that is Ben as a Teen, he can't wait to go to university! And because he's so good in school, he was allowed to go early! His mother didn't like her baby going but she didn't want to stop him eigher, he wanted to become a doctor to help other kids! So he went of, to a university near Strangetown, he feld a bit better in the dry whether! The girls there like him, he was just a day there and see, she just had to sit with him. But he told her that he only wanted to study, no girls, sorry! And that is what he done, for the hole first year, study, study, study! He was happy with it and he was the best student since the university opend! But still he had these headaches, he had to lie down then, not much else he could do about it. The teachers know about it, so he wasn't in trouble when it happend but sometimes it was hard to get to his room, so one of the view friends he has, takes him home then. In the second year, he noticed that new girl, oh she was so beautiful! Hey, don't even think about her, you are ill, can't have baby's and want to be a busy doctor soon! He thought and went to the sofa for some research. But it was already to late, she saw him! She came over and joined him. Anne: Hi, my name is Anne, I came here from Pleasantview, didn't like it there. I'm in the second year and study art. And you? Ben: I'm Ben, in my second year as well but I want to be a doctor, so I need to study hard. So, do you mind.....? Everytime Anne saw Ben, she came over to him. Anne: Can I play with you? Ben: Can I stop you? Anne: No! Ben: OK then. After a while he gave in, well she was beautiful and it was hard not to show her that he liked her! They spend more and more time together, talking about everything. Ben: I'm ill, you know that but do you know that I always going to be ill? I cant have any kids, I could give them the illness and I don't want that, are you sure you want to be with me? Anne: Yes, I do! I don't care about a baby, all I want is you! And so Ben let have her his heart, he loved her very much by now and they spend every free minute together. Doesn't they look nice toghter? But then there were these bad times, when he had his headache! Anne didn't like it, she wanted to go out and have fun, not sitting and watch him on the bed or sleeping because of his medicine. Ben felt sorry for her, he did told her about it but it must be hard for a girl like Anne! He tryed the best to make up for it. He love her so much. And in no time the university years were over! And so the two moved to Strangetown in a lovely house near the hospital, so it's not so far for him to work. So Ben had work and Anne loved doing her paintings, there both were happy, about the work, the house, each other. Ben was lucky so lucky to get the job with being ill himself but they were all nice in the hospital and he just took his breaktime when the headache hit him! But every time the bad headache hit him at home,Anne just watched him as if she didn't care, didn't help him to lie down! She wanted to go out more, meet people but not alone, like Ben said. And she wanted a baby now! Ben: We cant have any, I told you! I don't want to give my illness to our kids! Anne: you don't know that for sure, do you? Ben: Anne, please! More and more Anne didn't care about Ben anymore, not that she did care very much before but now she went swimming, even when Ben was home and he didn't like the pool, it hurt his head. And she went out by herself a lot more. Soon the two started to fight! And one evening as Ben came home, Anne was gone. Only a little note, was what he found, saying she got a new boyfriend, a healthy one! Now he was alone but for some reason he wasn't sad at all. A view month has past, as a lovely girl past his home. She looked shy and a bit lost. Ben: Can I help you? Girl: No, I just out for a walk but thank you for asking. Ben: I'm Ben. Girl: Hi Ben, I'm Jacky. Ben didn't want to let her go, so he started to talk more to her. He noticed she was shy but still so lovely. And so they talked the hole afternoon! Finaly he had to let her go but not before he got her phone number! In the next view weeks he phoned her every day and they spend more and more time togther. They both fall in love with each other. See, I told you, they in love! It took Ben a long time to get her in his arms but it was woth it! She was so lovely and caring, she's a midwife but not on the same hospital as Ben. Jacky cares a lot about Ben, she looked after him when he didn't feel well and try to make it easier for him, she's so nice! Ben is a lucky man! He told her everything he knew about his illness and that he was afrait that he could pass his illness on to any kids, she understood that! She was so caring, she even found out what's best to cook, so he don't have so much headache! After nearly a year, she moved in and they done everything together. She even looked in any books she could find, to find out more about his illness, anything could help! Suddenly Jacky didn't feel right, she was sick and started crying about everything! She knew what was wrong but she was afrait to tell Ben and so she waited for the right moment, was there something like a right moment to tell Ben? No! After she finaly told Ben that she was pregnant, he got all pale, he knew she didn't plan that but he was so afrait! He gave his Dad a call and he told him that everyting will work out,that he is doing ok and so does the baby! Yeh, his Dad was right, he wasn't doing to bad, well some bad headache and being tired a lot isn't that bad, there so many people around with more as just that! He felt much better afterwards and told her that he will be ok! He loved her so much, he couldn't be angry with her! I will prove it to you! he thought. So he got a ring for her and a view days later,he ask her to marry him! Ben: Jacky, my sweetheart, will you be mine forever? Be my wife, the mother of my Baby, marry me! Jacky: Ben! I'm already pregnant! I'm the mother of you baby! But yes I marry you! I love you! Ben: Jacky, are you feeling OK? Jacky: Yes, Ben! Why? Ben: I'm only a bit worried, Mom said she didn't feel well as she was pregnant with me and Lisa. Jacky: don't worry, she was pregnant with twins, you don't feel great then! And I do feel great! I didn't want to get pregnant sweetheart, sorry to put you though this! Ben: Don't be silly, it's enough that I'm so silly! Ben worked very hard to find something to beat his illness but couldn't find anything. Jacky: Don't work to hard, sweety! Ben: No, I just finish that and come to bed! After she grow even bigger, Ben got excited, he was going to be a Daddy soon! He used all his time now to make her comfortable, done the cooking, cleaning, well all he was able to. She was a lucky girl! And one evening, they got married, he wanted to do it before the baby is born and he didn't wanted much of a party or whatsoever. Just her! Jacky felt the same, she had what she wanted, Ben! Then came the special day, it was still dark as Jacky woke Ben up. Jacky: Ben, it's comming, the Baby! It's comming! Ben: wait I get you to the hospital! I hope the baby will be OK! Jacky: Stop it Ben! You worry to much! Now get your clothe on and get me to the hospital! After some long hours of pain, little Denise was born! They checked her very careful and to Ben's surprise she wasn't ill at all! It was evening already as they arrived back home. But they were both very happy! A view happy month past by, Ben was a proud Dad and done a lot with little Denise. But suddenly another very bad headache hit him, unfortunately on top of the stairs! He fall! All what Jacky was able to do was watch him fall in horror! She run down the stairs to Ben, he didn't move. So she quickly phoned the ambulance, she didn't want to move him, didn't want to make it any worse! He was a long time in the operating-theatre! She was sitting in the waiting room with Ben's parents and all what she was doing was crying, no one could comfort her! After fife hour's the Doctor came in and told her that he would make,that he will live but that Ben wasn't going to walk again! The injury's was to bad! Now she would have to tell him, but how? She didn't care, well it was great if he could walk but she was so happy that he was still alive, it didn't matter to her so much! Well she did told him the next day! Ben said, he would be alright with such a lovely wife! And family! Ben: Jacky, let us move near Mom and Dad, they can help us and I can work with Dad! What do you think? Jacky: I think as we have to move anyway because of the stairs, why not near your family, they nice! I like them. Ben: I love you! And so they moved in this lovely home! It has big doors and even bigger rooms, so there is enough space for the wheelchair!But most of all, it's only ten minutes from his parents house! It was also Denise first birthday! So everyone help unpacking! And after Denise grow into a toddler and after hours of eating cake and playing around ,finaly she went to bed, so they sat down and talked till late night!Jacky was so happy that Ben's parents were so nice, she realy like them and the new house! Look isn't little Denise cute! She was up early the next day and so the night was a short one for Jacky! Iit's much safer for her without the stairs! Jacky thought as Denise woke her up. Ben feels like he is the most happiest man on earth and now it's him, who wants to have another baby! Ben: Jacky? I love you and Denise! What would you say if we try for another baby? Jacky: And you don't worry that much this time? Ben: No, I promise! He was so happy with live, he didn't mind the headaches so much anymore or that he was tiered, not even that he wasn't able to walk! Why? Don't know, I think to have his family around him is more importand as anything else! Hey look! Jacky is pregnant! Ben is so happy about it and hardly can wait to the birth of their second baby! He wasn't worried at all, so that worried Jacky! But even if the baby would be ill as Ben, they would be alright, they have eachother! They can do everything together! And here we have little Thomas! A healthy little baby boy! The birth wasn't to bad this time! And because everything is so great, we leave them now! I want to say thank you to: Denise, yes I named her after you, you such a lovely friend! Hiedi, I learend from your story that I have to build with large doors and a lot of space for a wheelchair! Stacy for your lovely support! Karen for Marc, I love your Sim! and all the Creators for their stuff!

Ben

Mar 5, 2009 by maxi king
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    32 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Mar 6, 2009 luckyoyo wrote:

    That was  a really sweet story, I love your sims there very beautiful, I'd love to read more.

    On Mar 6, 2009 candy820 wrote:

    Great part. Waiting to read more.

    On Mar 6, 2009 lisa9999 wrote:

    You did a great job! I loved the whole story!\:wub\:

    On Mar 6, 2009 milk_icecreama wrote:

    Another happy ending story\:wub\:I love the kids, they're sooo cute, and little Ben too\:D . You're such a talented writer

    On Mar 6, 2009 drewsoltesz wrote:

    AWWW. maxi, that was lovely, Ben turned out to be a handsome man, and even though he had a lot to deal with, he learned how important family is. Wonderful, and you are welcome mate, glad you liked the sim you made into "Marc". Great work!!\:cool\:

    On Mar 6, 2009 smiley00girl wrote:

    Great story! I loved it! \:D \:D \:D

    On Mar 6, 2009 Melody336 wrote:

    That was a nice story. I wish you culd make more 5.0 \:D

    On Mar 6, 2009 PenelopeT wrote:

    Super sweet Maxi! \:wub\: 5.0!

    On Mar 7, 2009 pinkbutterflies_84 wrote:

    I loved your stories, and thank you for letting me know it was out to read\:wub\: I hope Ben walks again.

    On Mar 7, 2009 vicarious37 wrote:

    Wonderful story Maxi\:wub\:  Can't wait too read your next one\:\)

    On Mar 7, 2009 Murphy75 wrote:

    I absolutely loved this story!!\:wub\:  It was nice to know that Ben found such a great woman to take care of him and have a family with!!\;\)

    On Mar 7, 2009 Ame-C wrote:

    Hi Max, love the story, poor Ben, he has it hard maybe it can end him being healthy again!! Still having guestbook problems. Your sims are lovely!! Take care. Amelda.

    On Mar 7, 2009 j_girl87 wrote:

    Lovely story.. I felt so bad for Ben when Anne left but happy when he met Jacky \:wub\: ..so sweet!

    On Mar 7, 2009 spitzmagic wrote:

    Oh my goodness...Ben is such a hottie \:wub\:  how could anyone want to leave. Wonderful Jacky to save the day. Bravo maxi
    loved it waiting for more..more..more    ..kinda like that old comerical     open! open! open!  LOL :P

    On Mar 7, 2009 qvisn wrote:

    Lovely Maxi, what a sweet girl he has married.  That Anne was a right B, but it worked out better in the end. \:wub\:

    On Mar 8, 2009 charray wrote:

    Wonderful story \:\)  Thanks alot \:rah\:

    On Mar 8, 2009 SkylaneRose wrote:

    two words....love it n.n

    On Mar 8, 2009 BBKZ wrote:

    Wonderful story. Many interesting scenes - happy & sad - just like in real life. Very nice photos. I love it \:D Thank you for sharing! Barb

    On Mar 8, 2009 fredbrenny wrote:

    One of the most romatic stories read here. I have Bob, he is a mad scientist, I'll ask him to find a cure for Ben, although he is retired and his kids are in College \;\)
    But they seem a happy family the 4 of them, is there going to be another part? Ich hoffe es. Danke vielmals für dein story!

    On Mar 10, 2009 KDLANG0 wrote:

    I just loved the story! And sure! Rated 5!\;\)

    On Mar 10, 2009 KDLANG0 wrote:

    I just loved the story! And sure! Rated 5!\;\)

    On Mar 10, 2009 KDLANG0 wrote:

    I just loved the story! And sure! Rated 5!\;\)

    On Mar 10, 2009 KDLANG0 wrote:

    I just loved the story! And sure! Rated 5!\;\)

    On Mar 10, 2009 TUTULA wrote:

    It's a lovely and sweet story as usually are yours, you do a great work and I can't wait for read more\:rah\:

    On Mar 12, 2009 hiedibear75 wrote:

    Aww. \:wub\:  How sweet. \:D  Sweet story. \:cool\:  I'm glad in the end he found true love & happiness. \:rah\:

    On Mar 14, 2009 Valgrida wrote:

    Great story, Maxi!! I'd love to write stories, too, but haven't even tried!! It must be quite a lot of work creating a story?! See you again und vielen danke \:\)!! (Ich habe Deutsch studiert aber kann virklich nicht sprechen... Schade!!)

    On Mar 14, 2009 topaz27 wrote:

    This is such a beautiful story, love it \:wub\:  \:rah\:

    On Mar 18, 2009 squeakers wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: OMG! I absolutely love this story, you have a wonderful imagination, and we are so lucky to have you sharing your talent with the rest of us.\:D Your screenshots are amazing, and your simmies are too cute!, I was so happy that Ben grew up and found someone to love, and then I was angry that she didn't stay with him, he is a lovely man, and even though he is ill, she knew that going into the relationship.\:mad\: But on the other hand, it did work out better for him as he found such a beautiful girl, who loves him no matter what, I hope we get to see a follow up to this story, you left it open for so much more!!!!\;\) And last, thank you so very much for naming their little girl after me, you got me crying!\:P It's an honor, and now this is one of my favorite stories from you!!!!!\:rah\: I can't wait to see yoiur next story, your the best!!!!!\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: P.S. if I could rate this story higher than a five, I would!!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 30, 2009 mariabubu wrote:

    i just read "happy again part 2" and "ben" and i loved them! you really make wonderful stories, with interesting characters and beautiful screenshots. the ideas you have are great, the more i read the more i wish that the story continues so i can see what they do next. i'll keep an eye on your stories all the time, because i know they won't be boring. thanks for sharring with us your great products of imagination \:\)

    On Apr 13, 2009 shady411 wrote:

    Great part

    On Apr 17, 2009 wrote:

    Such a touching story, loved it. \:wub\:

    On Jun 16, 2009 miraminkova wrote:

    Great \:wub\:

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