maxi king / Stories / Made in Heaven-The End
629 Views
3.9 Rating

Made in Heaven
The End
Please comment and rate! Thank you to the CC-makers,your so great!

Made in Heaven
The End
Please comment and rate! Thank you to the CC-makers,your so great! Angela drove in her car,in her home-town.
Angela: God,why here? Why are you showing me the way? It's so strange this time !
There was silence, she didn't get an answer as ususally. Angela turned in the street where she used to live. Where she had died. She had a fight with her fiance back then and she run on the road without looking. She got hit by a car. Angela: God,I can't do it,not here,please.
Voice: It will be alright,it wound hurt,drive along!
What, he spoke to her? He never spoke to her after she left heaven,to be an angel ! Angela: What?
Voice: Angela,you done so much good to the world,I'm so proud of you, you were my favorite angel ! But your fiance needs you,he can't make it without you, you know.
Angela: Are you saying.......
Voice: Yes, I give you, your live back, good luck! At the same time and not far from Angela, Nick(her fiance) was on the sofa as ususal,in his underwear, watching TV. That was all he ever done,since the accident.He didn't go to work or out the house at all. His mother is cleaning the house and do the shopping for him since then!
Mother: Nick, live goes on, you have to get up and do something, you have to look forward!
Nick: It's all my foult ! How can I look forward? Mother: Maybe you should move back home, to us, away from the bad memories.
Nick: No way ! I never forget her ! Now just leave me alone, will you. Angela was so happy and excited that she started crying, she could hardly see. She didn't see the car pulling out the driveway and hit it. Everything went dark, black.
Angela: Gott, what.......
Voice: sleep, angel Angela,sleep ! She woke up in an hospital and her fiance was standing on the window looking out of it. She could see his tears running down his cheeks.
Angela: Nick ? He turned around to face her, she could see that he was glad that she woke up.
Nick: You scared me to death, you now! I'm so sorry, Angie, don't let us argue about our wedding again ,please ! Oh, and don't you run on that road again without watching the traffic!
She knew then, that she was back, back in her old live and she thanked God for it! Angela: I will be more careful now,I promise! Nick, I love you!
Nick: I love you, too Angie. Why aren't we just marry in the garden, without the hole stuff around it!
Angela: that sounds great to me! Later Angela went to sleep and dreamed of all the things and people she meed as she was an angel.
She liked to be an angel but she loved her live with Nick! As she woke up, everything was like it was just a dream! As if she was only in her dreams an angel. Angela sat up and thought that she had a strange dream. The doktor came in and told her that she was alright and that she was allowed to go home. She was very lucky,he said! Nick picked her up and they went home.
Nick: Angie,I want a real family,you know, with kids and everything!
Angela: well we should start straight away then! And they did.They so much in love! One month later! They got married in the garden,alone! Well not quite, she's pregnant and very happy! Everything is going perfect for them! Look,twins! She's so proud of the baby's and she love the life with Nick. It is as if she knew that it could be different ! So she thanked God every day for her great life. I had to put this one here! Aren't they little angels? And so cute! They spend every minute together and when there had some spare time for themselfs,they would kuddle up! So after a long and happy life, she died shortly after Nick ! They had the twins and three grandchildren ! If she came back on erth as an angel? Who knows! That was it! I hope you enjoyed my story!
please leave a comment and rate!
Thank you for reading,commenting,creating the CC and rating!
A new story will come soon!

Made in Heaven-The End

Jul 10, 2008 by maxi king
    Rate this:
       

    Page 1 / 23

    More from this Category:

    Report this Story:

    If you find a problem with this story or wish to report inappropriate content, click here

    Add a Comment

    Note: Please report any offensive comments so we can remove them. Use of bad language, unsuitable links or flaming will result in deletion of your account - regardless of your membership status.

    30 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jul 11, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:

    Awww.... it was beautiful!!! And i was the first person to comment on your ending. Yay!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 11, 2008 Chiakiii wrote:

    Great end! \:\)

    On Jul 11, 2008 DrEaMyPriNcEsS wrote:

    nice one.. ^_^

    On Jul 11, 2008 Hoola123P wrote:

    Amazing story!\:wub\:

    On Jul 11, 2008 inge8208 wrote:

    Beautiful xxx

    On Jul 11, 2008 Earcat wrote:

    Wow! Fabulous ending. I can see why she wanted to come back to Nick, he's a cutie! I hope everyone who reads your story realizes what a gift our lives are.

    On Jul 11, 2008 Angela! wrote:

    \:\( sad end,but it is the best story i ever heard in my entire life!!!!! \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jul 11, 2008 misha1013 wrote:

    great ending\:rah\:

    On Jul 11, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    Wow, what an ending. \:\) I was so sad and happy at the same time! Can't wait to read your next story, it will be, for sure, even better. \;\)

    On Jul 11, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:

    Wow...just great as always\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: 5.0\:D

    On Jul 11, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:

    very good story\:cool\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Jul 11, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:

    Loved it!\:rah\:

    On Jul 11, 2008 Nenehunni wrote:

    awww that was such a nice ending, i thought it was going to be a load of random stories but to end it liek this was seriously nice, it ouwld have been nice to have liek mabye a few clues to her old life, but this was a realli good idea. I hope you can do soemthing else liek this because i really have liked reading these \:D \:rah\:

    On Jul 12, 2008 babygrl12345 wrote:

    very nice ending! \:wub\: great job!

    On Jul 12, 2008 rclmp wrote:

    \:\) nice!

    On Jul 12, 2008 TeenIdol wrote:

    Good story!

    On Jul 12, 2008 drewsoltesz wrote:

    Very well done maxi, I enjoyed this very much, cheers!\:\)

    On Jul 13, 2008 Herzen & Blasen wrote:

    GREAT END!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 13, 2008 vicarious37 wrote:

    A very lovely and happy ending\:wub\: I will be looking forward to reading your next upcoming story\:\)

    On Jul 14, 2008 taki1002303 wrote:

    I love this story, beautiful characters, high quality pictures! Congratz \:\)

    On Jul 14, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Great story, thanks for sharing! \:\)

    On Jul 15, 2008 Bury me deep inside your heart wrote:

    Awww this is a perfect end to this story\:rah\: I'm so glad Angela got back her old life\:\) Well done\;\)

    On Jul 17, 2008 qvisn wrote:

    WOW! that was a wonderful ending, I thought she would just go to heaven, i never expect her to come back to Nick, oh he is hunky stuff.\:o %.0 loved it and thanks for sharing.\:wub\:

    On Jul 20, 2008 wrote:

    Yay! I love sweet stories with happy endings. Thank you for all the hard work you did to bring this to us.

    On Sep 19, 2008 pawilo wrote:

    VERY NICE ANGEL\;\) \:D \;\)

    On Oct 1, 2008 jelloonsprings wrote:

    That was a really sweet ending!

    On Jan 25, 2009 squeakers wrote:

    \:wub\: OMG!!!!Thank you so very much for sharing this wonderful chapter with the rest of us, it was so wonderful, the screenshots are breathtaking, Nick is a hunk, and Angela is gorgeous!!!!\:wub\: I also adore the screenshot of the twins in their room together, it is such a heartwarming picture. You also reminded me again of what a beautiful gift life is, and that we should take nothing for granted!\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Apr 14, 2009 wrote:

    I just had to read the ending and I´m glad I did it now and not later. It was such a beautiful ending and I even got a tear in my eye at the end. But she lived a full life and got to be old, that was so nice. Thanks for these stories. \:wub\:

    On May 19, 2009 spitzmagic wrote:

    I loved this story very much. It was very good  \:wub\:

    On Jan 4, 2010 topaz27 wrote:

    Awww, this was so beautiful, this story set has been absolutely awesome \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    Random Featured Stories:

     
    Please wait - loading...
    Please wait - loading...