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Made in Heaven
part 1
part 1 The life of Jason is terrible,a mess.He is the son of a famous lawyer and because of his father he's a lawyer too.His fiance is a dauther of an important man, a man who owns a very large firm.Latly Jason is sad,sad because of his life but he always does as he told. So he works a lot to please his father and goes out a lot to please his fiance Melissa,she's a lawyer too but works for her father in his firm.So he pleases everybody exept for himself !
(you think he's an idiot? yes,you are right!) It's not long to his wedding and he's(like always) sitting in his office working, leaving the wedding arrangements to his bride(well, she's happy about it! she can do what ever she likes to get the wedding perfect).He's just finished some Mail on the Computer as a lovely looking woman came in.
"my name is Angela Heaven and I had an car accident! I need your help with it!" she said. She's so beautiful,he can't help it but starring at her. She just smild.
Jason: Em,yes,how can I help you with it then?
She tells him what had happend and they dont stop talking for a long time(not about the case! they forgot about it).As she had gone,he had a very strange feeling, so different. It's late now,so Jason drives home ( still feeling so strange ).Melissa is already waiting for him, all dressed up( he forgot that they going tonight to her parends for dinner).Jason needed some space , some time to think,alone.He didn't want to go out.
( poor girl,don't you think so ?) Melissa:You're late! W going to have dinner at my parents,remember?
Jason: Today? I still got a lot of work to do,can't you go without me,please.
Melissa:What is up with you?????????? You normaly not like this,you allways do what I wish to do, are you alright? Did something happend?
Jason: Maybe it's exactly that, I want to decide on my own,for once, just go alone and tell your Dad that I'm busy with an important case. Melissa turned around to get her handbag (shaking her head ).
Melissa: Do what you want.I go now and I hope you feel better when I'm back,so we can talk about it. She slamped the door,got in the car and drove off. Jason went to his desk and looked to the case Heaven,but he can't concentrate,so he decidet to call her.
Jason: Hello, Jason Manson here.I like to speak about your case with you,maybe we can meet some where?
Angela: Sure,but I was going to meet a friend,can I bring her with me? She's a witness anyway.
Jason: Yes, sure you can! So we meet in the Atlanta in half an hour! As he walk's in the Atlanta (it's a fish-restaurant ), he see's the girls sitting on a table.Her friend is even more beautiful he thinks.Her name is Nicole and she's a funny woman.After the dinner and talking about the case,Angela said:I have to go now,it's getting to late for me! And with that she's gone. Nicole and Jason stayed longer (till the restaurant closed) and talked and enjoyed them selfs.They get a long so well,that they didn't notice how late it was.Jason like's her so much already,that he want's to see her again.
Jason: can I get your number? I like to see you again,if you like.
She gave him her number and they walk to her car. It was late as Jason gets home but Melissa was waiting and she was very angry!
Melissa: Where were you,you said,you had a important case to work on!
Jason: I did! And now just leave me alone.
Melissa: I beg your pardon?
Jason: I don't love you and I only wanted to marry you because of my Dad.I'm sorry but I don't want it anymore.
( he could said that nicer,I think! Don't be so horrible to her,Jason) Melissa: You met a woman then,did you?
Jason: Yes,but nothing happend,yet!
Melissa didn't know him anymore, she just got her things and went out the door,without another word.( does she thinks he will come back to her?)
And Jason? He feels free for the first time in his life. At the next meeting with Angela,he tells her what had happend,she's a great listener.He don't know why he tells her but he feels so great doing it.He feels strong like a man,not like a little boy anymore.Jason don't love her,well maybe he loves her like a sister,yes a big sister,that helps you anytime you need her!
Angela:You must get of your father spell,you should do what you like and not your father,then you will find peace with yourself!
Jason: How do you know,that I'm under my father spell?
Angela: I dont! Oh,sorry it's late,I have to go now. So Jason starts thinking now:what do I want? I don't know! I don't want to be a lawyer! I never wanted that but what do I want to be then? i never had to think about it! Dad wanted me to be a lawyer,so what now?
The only think he does know right then was that he wants to see Nicole.So he calls her for a time to see her! Next day ( it's a nice saturday ) he drives to her house,it's a small one but nice.She opens the door as he get there and for him,it's like the sun comes out the clouds.From that moment he know that he love her. Nicole: Hi,Jason. I'm glad you come to see me because I have to tell you something,something important (I wonder if he's near a heart-attack ).
Jason: What is it? You married to sombody?
Nicole: No,I'm divorced! Jason, I have a son,Mike. I know I should told you earlier but I was afraid you don't want to see me anymore.
Jason: Oh,that's ok.Where is he? I like to get to know him.I love kids,Nicole!
Nicole: He's in his room,I go and get him for you! Jason spend the hole day with the two and he feels so great with them.He like Mike and they get along very well ! Later,as Mike was gone to bed,Jason and Nicole get to talk.Both happy about the lovely day,Nicole tells Jason about her sad life and how it changed since she met Angela. Jason: Since I met Angela,I changed a lot and I'm much happier now.She helped both of us,she must be an Angel! You know,I feel so great when I'm with you.
Nicole(shyly): Me too.
Jason takes all his courage snd gives her a kiss,a gently,shy but sweet kiss. In the next few weeks ( Jason got some time of work) they spend every minute together,like a real family.A happy little family.
His father isn't so happy about it but he never saw his son as happy as now.So he takes all the cases over, his son was working on.( yes,even that Angela Heaven one) Mr.Manson: I'm sorry Mrs. Heaven but I don't believe we can win your case.
Angela: Doesn't matter.How is your son doing,Mr.Manson?
Mr.Manson: Good,very good indeed.I believe he don't want to come back to his office.I'm a bit sad about it!
Angela: Everyone should do what they like to do! I think Melissa is a very good lawyer,too.And I believe she's not that happy at her fathers firm. Mr.Manson: Yes,you're right, Melissa is a very good lawyer! Maybe I call her.
Angela: Do that,I think that is a great idea!
Mr.Manson: Thank you for your help.
Angela( smiling ): Oh,please.I have to go now.I hope it will work out for all of you! Mr.Manson was sitting now in the office,thinking.Yes,I call him and Melissa as well ! he said aloud to himself.
Father: Hi,my son! I just call to say it's alright to me,if you wanna do something else with your life.I was thinking maybe Melissa can take your place here,if you want,that is!
Son: Yes,Dad,that would be great! I was afraid to tell you but I don't think I want to be a lawyer anymore,so yes,go on and call her! Dad,I'm happy that you understand my feelings! We talk later,ok? see you then,bye.
Father: Yes,see you soon,bye.
Melissa is very happy to work for Mr.Manson and she is the best lawyer he ever had.Oh,and she loves that workpartner,Mr.Johnson! They are all happy! It's so much better for everyone now. Jason moved in with Nicole and they going to marry soon.Jason is working as a teacher now and he loves it! Nicole is still working as a waitress but soon she will quit her job because they want another baby.Mike is looking forward to be a big brother and he got his first girlfrient,too! But no one saw Angela Heaven,where was she?
The wedding-day came and Nicole looks so great,she hopes that Angela is comming because she's her brides-maid. And yes,here she is,lovely as ever. After the wedding she left and no one saw her again! Only Mike,he had a dream,he saw her,as a Angel with beautiful,with wings!
Is Angela Heaven an Angel? Will she help other people as well? Find out in Part 2 of Made in Heaven!
A big thank you to all,who done the lovely CC!
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44 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jun 11, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
great story!
On Jun 11, 2008 Lauren-Alicia wrote:
this story is beautiful!! keep it up!!
On Jun 11, 2008 Earcat wrote:
great story love the decor in the seafood restaurant Where did you get that dolphin table?
On Jun 11, 2008 Angela! wrote:
my name is Angela...
On Jun 11, 2008 Angela! wrote:
On Jun 11, 2008 sosliliom wrote:
Great!
On Jun 11, 2008 eshuff wrote:
Very nicely done and great use of unusual CC! Great job!
On Jun 11, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:
great story, 5.0
beautiful caracters
On Jun 11, 2008 wrote:
good
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On Jun 11, 2008 Bury me deep inside your heart wrote:
Great story, well done
Angela is so beautiful
Hope the next part comes out soon
On Jun 11, 2008 Thera_M wrote:
All casting simmies are soo lovely and the story was very sweet, thank u!
On Jun 11, 2008 babygrl12345 wrote:
very original! I like it!
On Jun 11, 2008 maryash wrote:
good
On Jun 11, 2008 maryash2 wrote:
yip yip, good
On Jun 11, 2008 lulu15 wrote:
fab
On Jun 12, 2008 iloveyellowsoles wrote:
On Jun 12, 2008 cutedazy wrote:
awesome job!
On Jun 12, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:
Can't wait for next part!
On Jun 12, 2008 vicarious37 wrote:
This was truly a beatiful story
Can't wait to read more
On Jun 12, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:
great story!!!
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On Jun 12, 2008 Sumashedshaya wrote:
veeery gooood story!
On Jun 12, 2008 Odey92 wrote:
Really great story!
I had to watch it all the way to the end! Great work 
On Jun 13, 2008 jayb04 wrote:
Great Story!!
On Jun 13, 2008 finsgirlie wrote:
beautiful characters!! lovely job on your story!
On Jun 14, 2008 qvisn wrote:
Lovely story, i cant wait for more about Angela. 5.
On Jun 16, 2008 wrote:
Very enjoyable read, thanks!
On Jun 17, 2008 Herzen & Blasen wrote:
Great story!
On Jun 17, 2008 latekate wrote:
I'll give it a 4, maybe 4.5, it's good, and the way it's laid out is awsome, but before you post your next one, proof read it some more. It's harder to follow along with so many words per slide and with them miss spelled so much. No offence intended, but it IS good. I honestly think you should make a second part.
On Jun 19, 2008 DarkMoon689 wrote:
Lovely.. nice reading
On Jun 22, 2008 wrote:
WOW howe'd that happen i gotta watch the next one to know
man that is awsome 
On Jun 29, 2008 lab9132003 wrote:
very cute story
On Jun 30, 2008 summerlove88 wrote:
On Jul 6, 2008 Chiakiii wrote:
Great story! I'm gonna read the other parts too
On Jul 8, 2008 sophel21 wrote:
Gute Story
Werde gleich die nächsten Teile lesen. Sag mal, das "Seaworld" Restaurante sieht ja echt super aus. Hast du das Grundstück i-wo runtergeladen oder selbst gebaut? LG Sophia
On Aug 17, 2008 wewe78 wrote:
good!!!
On Sep 30, 2008 jelloonsprings wrote:
Very good! I will have to check out the other installments of this one!
On Oct 24, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:
ahhhh...what a great story
On Jan 25, 2009 squeakers wrote:
On Feb 11, 2009 ReadySteadyGo! wrote:
Where'd you get those gorgeuous angel wings?
On Apr 6, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:
On Apr 12, 2009 wrote:
What a lovely story
Can´t wait now to read the rest of the chapters 
On Sep 5, 2009 paramiti wrote:
Loved reading this..will be back for part 2!!
On Jan 3, 2010 topaz27 wrote:
Awww, this is so beautiful, and the pictures are wonderful, and your cover picture for this story is so awesome
On Jan 10, 2010 loveopi1 wrote:
where'd you get the hair from