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The acciident
A big thank you to all the creators!!!!!!!!!! please leave a comment and rate! Thank you! Hope you will like it!

The acciident
A big thank you to all the creators!!!!!!!!!! please leave a comment and rate! Thank you! Hope you will like it! Jane was sitting in the plane,still angry and very sad.She just had a huge fight with her fiance Peter,once again.She wanted to leave,to be alone,till she know about their future together.So now she's here,flying to Australia,to her parends.She was tired,so soon after take off,she fall a sleep. She woke up from the other people on the plane.They were screming and shouting.The whole plane was shaking!All kind of things flew around. and then it went all black! Suddenly she felt a pain and something wet on her legs.She sat up and noticed she was half lieing in the water on a beach.She had a look around but no one was on the beach,she was alone! She was hungry and thirsty.How long was she lieing there?Where was her handbag?Oh,no she lost her handbag with her mobile phone,money and everything.She felt so lonely and helpless.She got up and decided to go in the jungle.Maybe she would find something to eat or some fresh water. Jane went careful through the jungle,thinking that maybe someone else out the plane could be somewhere here.But the only thing she saw,was plants,some with berrys on.So she ate some of them and went further in the jungle. She soon came to a beautiful lake with nice plants,flowers and a waterfall.But no one was here,only some animals which frighten her a bit.So she went on,even further in the jungle marking her way and hoping to find something or more to find somebody. She walked and walked but after a long time she came to a beach,a lonly beach!Jane started crying. She was alone,alone on a island! After she calm down,she decided to go back to the lake,first thing in the morning! After a not so great night,she went back in the jungle,back to the lake.As she got close to it,she saw somr one at the lake,fishing.A boy,no a teenager with black hair. She run up to him.
Jane:Hi,I'm so happy to see you!Are there more people,how many survivor are there?
Boy:Sorry,I'm not from any plane,I'm a long time here already.My parents boat broke in a storm and they died both.I was ten years then and I'm on my own since then. Jane:I'm sorry.My name is Jane and my plane crashed.I think I'm the only survivor.
Boy: Well,it's ok,my name is Tom and if you like,you can live with me in my place and we can keep each other company. Jane agreed and moved in with Tom.He showed her how to survive in the jungle and she helped him.They talked a lot about everything , how the past was and what the future will bring. They got on very well! After some time Tom fall in love with Jane but she said he's like her brother,he's to young to be her lover.Tom was very sad and they both feld lonly.
Jane:Give us some time,maybe when you grown up,I be able to feel different and not so much like a big sister. They got on with the life on the island and soon it was Tom's birthday.The day he was waiting so badly for.Jane had baked a birthday-cake for him and she watched how he was growing up.She looked at him and suddenly she had a very strange feeling in her stomach. Tom took Jane's hands and looked in her eyes.He smiled.
Tom:Am I still to young,Jane?
Jane looked in his gorgeous green eyes and knew,she couldn't fight her feeling's,she fell straight away for the adult-Tom.She wasn't able to speak,so all she was doing was shaking her head. He still smiled at her,took her chin and gave her a shy but sweet little kiss.Well from that moment on they couldn't keep their hands of each other and the nights........... .They like Tarzan and Jane and very happy on their little island. After some more month of happiness,Jane discoverd that she was pregnant.Tom loved the idea of being a dad and didn't want that anything happends to Jane or the baby and so he told her offten to be careful or to rest for a bit.That made her often anry and she sometimes got bored because she wasn't allowed to do anything. Finaly they worked out how much Jane was allowed.The time went by and the love they shared was getting even stronger every day.But sometimes Jane was afraid,afraid that there was no doctor around,no one that would be able to help her,exept for Tom. And then came the big day(it was very early in the morning),Jane got into labor,but Tom was busy fishing at the lake.Jane paniced! The pain was bad,real bad.She cryed and wished Tom would be there. Then all went black! She fainted,the pain was to strong.
Suddenly she was hearing some voices,saying:quick,get her in theater! And it went quiet again. Slowly Jane woke up,she opend slowly her eyes and there was her Mom!She looked around,she was in a hospital!
Jane:Tom? Mom where is Tom?
Mom: Jane,you're in hospital and I don't know anybody called Tom.You mean Peter,don't you Darling? Peter didn't want to come,he said you left him.You was on the way to us,as your plane crashed.That is four month ago. Jane couldn't believe it!
Jane: Mom,I was on an island,with Tom! I was in labor with his baby!
Mom: You lost baby,Darling.But how do you know that you was pregnant? The doctor said,that your pregnancy was in a very early state as the plane crashed,you wasn't able to know! Was it a dream? the hole time on that island,a dream? Tom? His love? A dream? Her head started to hurt. she was confused and sad. Dr.Phillips entered her room.
Dr.:Oh,hello you awake now! Thats great.Do you know where you are?And what had happend?
Jane:............. speechless! She wasn't able to say a word.Dr.Phillips was Tom! Well he looked like him,same eyes and the hair had the same colour,even his voice and smile was the same! Now she was real confused.
Dr.:Don't worry,it will be all right, you'l see. After a week Jane got out of the hospital and went to live with her parents.She was sad,so sad, all she could think off,was her life on the island and Tom.The dream was so real! She started painting. And all she was doing now was painting.Every day,all day. Now it was spring and it was a lovely day,so her Mom told her to go out in the warm spring sun,like every day now.
Jane: All right,you won Mom.I go in the park for a little walk.
Mom:Thats a lovely idea,do that.
So she went to the park,just outside the city and only 5 minutes from her home.It was a lovely park with a lake and some people was fishing there. She sat down on a bench,looked around and her mind drifted away,to her dream,the island,to the lake and to Tom.Suddenly she saw him,Tom,next to the lake.She smiled and closed her eyes. She heard his voice:May I sit with you?
Jane opend her eyes and next to her was Dr.Thomas Phillips.
Thomas: Are you all right?
Jane: Yes,thank you.I just take the warm sun in.You like fishing?
Thomas: Yes,very much but it make me hungry. You like to join me for dinner?
Jane: Why not.
And there was it again,the strange feeling,the same feeling she had with Tom on her dream island. They talked a lot that day,about her dream,their feelings and about the new friendship,they just started. Later he told her that he feels a lot for her and as he brought her home,he kissed her shyly but very sweet.Jane kissed him back. Some month later they moved together and after only six month of living together,they get married. She had a lovely dress on and was very,very happy.Thomas couldn't leave his eyes of his beautiful, pregnant bride.

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The accident

May 27, 2008 by maxi king
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    On May 27, 2008 Ikaridasu wrote:

    oOo i love itt! XD \:rah\: well doen \:\)

    On May 27, 2008 Ikaridasu wrote:

    oooops forgot to rate and i spelt done wrong \:P

    On May 27, 2008 XdamnxangelX wrote:

    That was a really good story... better than alot i have read....\:D\:D\:D\:D\:D GOOD WORK!!!!\:D\:D\:D\:D\:D\:D

    On May 27, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    Great job!! \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 27, 2008 wrote:

    aww.\:wub\:

    On May 27, 2008 mangooo1 wrote:

    Lol, it was funny \:\) Very unique idea. I loved when Jane baked her a cake on the island without any ingredients and gas and so on \:D But I liked it, I know it was a dream \;\) Great job!

    On May 27, 2008 mangooo1 wrote:

    Oops, I mean baked "him" to Tom. It's a little bit late now, I can't type \:\)

    On May 27, 2008 Sim Boy 5 wrote:

    cool...\:D

    On May 27, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    Very cute idea! -plyangel456- \:D

    On May 28, 2008 xxtiffxx wrote:

    Nice idea for a story. Wish they had been on the island a little longer though...\:wub\:

    On May 28, 2008 theycallmevicky wrote:

    best story i've read in ages. \:rah\:

    On May 28, 2008 chlicotene wrote:

    I love it!\:wub\: \:\)

    On May 28, 2008 MinnieID wrote:

    Cute

    On May 28, 2008 wrote:

    \:\) ok notbad

    On May 28, 2008 maryash wrote:

    love the custom stuff! good story\:wub\:

    On May 28, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 28, 2008 fyrcptwife wrote:

    \:\) excellent job better than most story's i have read.GOOD JOB

    On May 28, 2008 wrote:

    wait, so it really him at the end or no? I am confused.

    On May 28, 2008 Stellagirl wrote:

    Cute story and an original idea. Good work \:D \:rah\: \:D

    On May 28, 2008 eshuff wrote:

    very sweet and cute idea and some really beautiful shots! \:rah\: \:D

    On May 28, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    \:rah\: great shots and the story is really good keep up the good work\:wub\:

    On May 28, 2008 babygrl12345 wrote:

    Very good story! \:\)

    On May 28, 2008 sims_vaka_suave wrote:

    please tell me in what site you found that airplane !

    sorry for my bad english ..im mexican \;\) \:rah\:

    On May 28, 2008 TugmeL wrote:

    Very beautifull one story!.. \:wub\: And very beautifull picture \:rah\: I congratulate \:cool\:

    On May 28, 2008 vicarious37 wrote:

    Very romantic story\:wub\: To bad it couldn't have more chapters\:\(
    Hope to see more stories from you\:D

    On May 28, 2008 gautie53 wrote:

    \:wub\: It is beautifully done! What a lovely happy ending!
    Looking forward to reading more of your stories!

    On May 28, 2008 azazelo wrote:

    Very nice, but too short. It could be longer with some more complications - for example some other Jane's dream memory or somethng like that. But I like it \:\)

    On May 28, 2008 jkhornby wrote:

    sweet story

    On May 28, 2008 Gelika wrote:

    Nice story.\:wub\:

    On May 28, 2008 charlottey9p wrote:

    excellent best story i have read in ages but just wondering are you not from america or australia or usa because alot of the words were in different tense BUT STILL AMAZING STORY HU\:rah\:

    On May 28, 2008 BBKZ wrote:

    I love it! You had great idea for the story. All pictures are wonderful. Can't wait for more \:\) Thank you so much \:D

    On May 28, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    great story! \:D

    On May 28, 2008 petrov1@014 wrote:

    Hey,you did a very interesting story it was my pleasure reading it.Hope to read more of you strories soon!\:rah\:

    On May 28, 2008 cariadbach wrote:

    \:wub\: I love happy endings, beautiful pictures \:rah\:

    On May 28, 2008 timoram26 wrote:

    I love it \:wub\: Great story !

    On May 28, 2008 Gem--xx wrote:

    Its a good story

    On May 28, 2008 gamelia wrote:

    Sweet story! \:wub\:

    On May 28, 2008 erospsyche wrote:

    \:wub\: \:\)

    On May 28, 2008 ,xPheobe. wrote:

    Great Story! \:D

    On May 28, 2008 ladyd7177 wrote:

    good stroy \:rah\:

    On May 28, 2008 jhard213 wrote:

    nice idea for the story a LOST!
    remake I love it!!!

    On May 28, 2008 Sumashedshaya wrote:

    wow..it was great!!!!\:wub\:

    On May 28, 2008 teresa010 wrote:

    It was wondeful but I hate it because you leave it on a sort of cliff hanger. \:mad\: So you need to make more please!!!!! And hopefully the two guys will find out about the doctor and her! Thank you for sharing it, it was exelent.\:wub\: \:D

    On May 28, 2008 wrote:

    very good keep it up \:D

    On May 28, 2008 redwingsbeann wrote:

    good story\:\)

    On May 28, 2008 wrote:

    That was soooooo cool!!!! well done!!!!\:\)

    On May 28, 2008 twinkletoe wrote:

    Good idea for a story\:rah\:

    On May 28, 2008 qvisn wrote:

    Nice idea and good story, i wish it had been longer, i want more.\:P

    On May 28, 2008 Coral Butterfly wrote:

    were is the Baby??????????????? \:eek\:
    \:P XP

    On May 28, 2008 missdj wrote:

    quite good, liked the clothes\:\)

    On May 29, 2008 wrote:

    Amazing!!! Awesome!!\:D Loved this story!!\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On May 29, 2008 cutedazy wrote:

    good job!

    On May 29, 2008 Cheena wrote:

    very cute \:wub\:

    On May 29, 2008 wrote:

    Beautiful story! need to read more!\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On May 30, 2008 kalakal wrote:

    cute.. n___n \:D can i ask where did you get those outdoor log chairs and table?? ty

    On May 30, 2008 simboy161 wrote:

    Really good story\:rah\: It could have been longer-You need to make part 2\;\)

    On May 31, 2008 Daffygurl16 wrote:

    Good story, But was that Tom at the end or what,or was That just a dream....\:rah\:

    On May 31, 2008 almaxx wrote:

    It's soooo romantic

    On May 31, 2008 brebrebre514 wrote:

    good story =)

    On Jun 1, 2008 Idriel wrote:

    It's so sweet! \:wub\:

    On Jun 3, 2008 Murphy75 wrote:

    Good start...hopefully the next chapter explains what happened!!\:rah\:

    On Jun 5, 2008 miller1220 wrote:

    VERY GOOD! Great story. It was a unique and good idea. Thanks! \:rah\: \:\) \:D

    On Jun 8, 2008 Pop Arina wrote:

    I love it!Its a really good!

    On Jun 12, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Good story ! Thanks for sharing ! \:\)

    On Jun 16, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:

    \:rah\: I liked it! And the sims were beautiful too!!\:rah\:

    On Jun 19, 2008 DarkMoon689 wrote:

    Oh.. nice, fairytale like..

    On Jun 30, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    Like the story! Awesome scenery! \:\)

    On Jul 14, 2008 taki1002303 wrote:

    Nice story!! Very beautiful screens and characters! Congratz \:rah\:

    On Jul 20, 2008 miller1220 wrote:

    I just loved this story! I liked the CC. Where'd you get it? Awesome story again, thanks!\:D \:\) \:wub\:

    On Aug 18, 2008 wewe78 wrote:

    that was so good!!!!

    On Oct 1, 2008 jelloonsprings wrote:

    This is a really nice story! I like it!

    On Oct 24, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    wow...absolutly wonderfull

    On Oct 28, 2008 lilgothgal99 wrote:

    I loved this one the dr was tom.....? hmm strange but good

    On Dec 30, 2008 PenelopeT wrote:

    Great story, LOVED the screenshots! \:rah\: I used to watch the tv show LOST, this kind of reminded me of that. \:\) 5.0!

    On Jan 8, 2009 lisa9999 wrote:

    I never noticed this one before. Fantastic! Lisa\:rah\:

    On Feb 23, 2009 SimonettaC wrote:

    Very good, nice twists in the story, very well thought out. Keep it up!.xxxxxx

    On Apr 5, 2009 wrote:

    Great story maxi, I loved it. Pictures and scenery perfect! \:wub\:

    On Apr 28, 2009 spitzmagic wrote:

    I liked it alot maxi, great story, I'm still making my way to the top of your stories...\:wub\:

    On May 6, 2009 CamCo9 wrote:

    That was really good, slightly confusing when she woke up, but you made it clearer as it went on \:D Well done xx

    On Jul 9, 2009 Peachybitz1 wrote:

    Well, I haven't read ALL the comments because there so many...so I guess you already know what a great story it is!! But I just wanted to say my piece because I don't usually post long posts....but I saw your house 'Sandy Beach'...thought that looks kinda peaceful...so I had a look at your site..I don't usually look at stories, sometimes I do if something catches my eye but usually I'm too busy downloading to look at things for long...anyway...just wanted to say that It was a great story, it made me laugh and it made me smile, what a great thing after a day at work...keep it up!\:wub\:

    On Dec 15, 2009 nateshales wrote:

    wow i really liked this story!!

    On Dec 19, 2009 topaz27 wrote:

    This is such a lovely story and I love all your pictures, they look wonderful \:rah\: \:wub\:

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