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The princess story
This story is made for Rachel !
Sorry for anything wrong (remember,I'm German) I hope you will like it anyway. Again a big thank you for the CC ! And another one for all of you for reading, please comment and rate!

The princess story
This story is made for Rachel !
Sorry for anything wrong (remember,I'm German) I hope you will like it anyway. Again a big thank you for the CC ! And another one for all of you for reading, please comment and rate! Sarah loves her daughter and she likes reading storys to her, it get her away from the worry's about her husband (he stays always long at work in the last view weeks and she's afraid that he's not working all these hour's).

 Rachel loves when her mum reading storys to her, about kings, queens and most of all princess. She likes to imagine to be a princess and her dad call's her "my little princess" anyway. It was late afternoon and it was raining outside, so why shouldn't I read a story to Rachel, Sarah thought. She called her and started to read: Once upon a time there was in a large and old castle, a princess...
and her name was Rachel! shouted Rachel.
Sarah had to laugh, that was so typical for her daughter. Sarah: all right, I going to make a story of my own then, I loved to play princess when I was your age, so I think I know what you like to hear. Ok, let us start then : Once upon a time.... ...there was a very large and old castle. Princess Rachel lived there with her parents, King Edward and Queen Mary of Wales (that is in England). A view days ago Rachel had her birthday and she was now old enough to get married ( you had to get married very early back then!). So the king gave a ball for her, so she could talk to all the prince's and see which one she like to marry. She had a lot fun and knew now a lot of the prince's, which one she likes and the ones she don't. She hope's that the right one would come back and ask for her hand.
(Rachel is the one in the golden dress!) Suddenly the phone was ringing! Oh,no, my mum just started to tell me a story and the stupid phone rings! Rachel thought.
Sarah answered the phone. Three minutes later!
Sarah: That was dad, sweety he will be late again. He got a lot to do at work, we don't have to wait for him with the dinner. Rachel: Again! Mum, doesn't dad loves us anymore?
Sarah: He still loves us, sweety! He just got a lot work to do (and she hoped it was realy the work!) So where were we? Oh,yes I remember...... Two days after the ball !
The first prince came to ask for her hand but she didn't like him, so she turned him down. The same with the secound prince! She wanted one she liked, she wanted to be happy,to be able to fall in love with the prince she was going to marry. Is that to much to ask for? After the prince was gone, the wizard came and wanted to have a talk with Rachel. He was nice and her parents trusted him, so she agreed.
Wizard: Your majesty, you so lovely, I want to stay on your site for ever!
Rachel: I like you, so you are allowed to stay here when I'm a queen. Wizard: I didn't mean it that way! I want to marry you, to be your king, to rule the kingdom and to have kids with you!
She didn't believe her ears.
Rachel: I'm not allowed to marry you! You not a prince! Wizard: Tell your dad that you love me and he will allow it!
Rachel: But I don't love you! I'm going to marry a prince! One of them I met at the ball ! I never would be able to love you, sorry but I'm not going to be your wife! Wizard: You going to change your mind, you see!
Rachel: No, I'm not! And with that she left him and went for a walk in the park to calm herself down. Rachel suddenly: Mum, I'm hungry!
Sarah had a look to the clock.
Sarah: Your right, it's time to have something to eat! I do us something nice!
So she cooked a soup and they sad down.





 Rachel: Is daddy coming soon?
Sarah: I don't know, sweety,I hope so!
They finished the dinner and cleaned up. Sarah: come here,we sit at the fire and I tell you some more of the story! So the wizard..... was very angry, he knew that the king wouldn't give him his daughter, he wasn't a prince! So he thought what he could do and after a some time, he had his plan ready! As the next prince came to see Rachel, a bright light came around the prince and after just one secound the only thing left was a snake and the prince was gone! Rachel was so angry about it, that she went straight to the wizard. Rachel: I'm not going to marry you, even if there isn't a man left on earth! Do you understand that?
Wizard: and what about your parents?
Rachel: what are you talking about?
The wizard didn't anwer, he only laught. The next morning Rachel couldn't find her parents.
Wizard: Good morning Rachel, let me help you. I show you were your parents are!
He had locked them in the dungeon.
Wizard: Your parents stay here till you marry me, do you hear, do you understand! I love you and I will marry you! You only have to say yes and they free again!
 Later that day!
Rachel went outside to see the next prince (she didn't want him to become a snake or what else). She told him everything what had happend and that she liked him but that she was afraight of what would happend to her parents when she just went with him. The prince promiced to help and when everything was over, they could get married! He had to go home and talk to his wizard! He would know, what to do about it. So the prince got to his castle and talked to there wizard. The wizard told him that the only help he could get, was from a dragon. But he would have to offer him his country to life in without some knights hunting him. He told him were he lives and the prince went on his way to the dragon. Sarah: Well, it's late now, you go and get ready for bed and I tell you the rest before you go to sleep. So Rachel went quick in the bathroom and got ready! After she was ready with everything, she called her mum and she came and sat next to her bed. So Sarah started...so the prince.... went on his long way to the dragon. He ride his horse for three days till he found the place were the dragon lives.He was scared but wanted to help the lovely princess and so he went on! Prince: Hello dragon, please be nice to me,I mean no harm to you! I need your help and would do anything for it! I even offer you my kingdom! A wizard is torturing my lovely queen to be and only you can help us.
The dragon thought a minute, it's better to be friends with the humans as enemies, so he offered his help and they went on their way to the princess. As they reached the castle, they saw some more animals, well not realy, more like poor prince's. The dragon called out for the wizard. He came out and as he saw the dragon, he stiffen and got all white and then he.... crumbled to a small pile of white ash! All the animals vanished and all the prince's were there again.The king and queen were free as well and they all said thank you to the dragon and because Rachel had already found her prince, the other went home, exept for the one who safed Rachel, the one she wanted to marry! Rachel was very happy now and had lost her heart to the brave prince, the prince that safe her and her kingdom of the bad wizard! After the prince ask the king for Rachel's hand, he went and ask her. She happyly exepted! After only a short time they got married and lived happyly ever after till the end of their days.
THE END! And for you it's time to sleep! Night, night! Sleep well my sweety! She gave her daughter a sweet goodnight kiss and went out the room. There was her husband, standing in the doorway and watching the two of them. Rachel was to tired to notice her dad. Husband: I'm already a bit here and watched you telling her the story, your such a good mother to Rachel! Come here my love! He took her in his arm.
Husband: I'm so sorry, I had so much work to do. But I make it up to you, we will go on a three weeks hollyday tomorrow and I'm only be their for you and Rachel! I promice,Sarah! I love you, darling! And with that he gave her a kiss.
Sarah was so happy that she was wrong about him and that the only reason he was late, was the work. She loved him so much!

The princess story

Nov 12, 2008 by maxi king
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    29 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 13, 2008 lilgothgal99 wrote:

    OMG THX SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH THIS STORY ROX THX 4 PUTTIN ME IN IT!\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 13, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:

    \:ph34r\: \:ph34r\:

    On Nov 13, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    great story was wkd\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 13, 2008 jackieQ789 wrote:

    wow loved it such a great story thanks for sharing \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 13, 2008 narniana wrote:

    AwwwNow tha't love!!!\:wub\: Great story!!Keep creating!!\;\)

    On Nov 13, 2008 VictoriaGrace wrote:

    What a lovely story! I really enjoyed reading it and it was fun to see my Castle in it also! Thank you!\:wub\: Victoria\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 13, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    Awww you did a great job! \:\) I enjoyed your story very much, but I just would love to know what happened to the bad wizard, you didn't mention or I haven't seen it? \:\) But it was awesome, your stories get better and better and the shots were from good quality! \:P

    On Nov 13, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Very cute fairy tale.\:D \:D 5.0 here\:D

    On Nov 13, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    absolutly adorable

    On Nov 13, 2008 Little Cloud wrote:

    Very sweet \:wub\:

    On Nov 14, 2008 qvisn wrote:

    You should get 10 for a double happy ending but you have to do with 5. Great story again, i look forward to reading your stuff, well done.\:wub\:

    On Nov 14, 2008 wrote:

    Super story! Soo enjoyable to read!

    On Nov 14, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Great job!! So sweet\:D

    On Nov 14, 2008 blackbutterflys wrote:

    On Nov 14, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    Cool

    On Nov 14, 2008 Luecy wrote:

    Very nice story \:wub\:

    On Nov 14, 2008 charray wrote:

    Wonderful story \:rah\: \:rah\: Great job. \:\)

    On Nov 15, 2008 great b2 wrote:

    Cute story.thanks for sharing \:rah\:

    On Nov 15, 2008 great b2 wrote:

    On Nov 15, 2008 ProwlerTylo wrote:

    Great story, keep up the good work.

    On Nov 19, 2008 evetsangel wrote:

    Cute story.\:\)

    On Nov 23, 2008 scrapbookin wrote:

    Very cute. Love it! \:wub\:

    On Nov 23, 2008 simsnina wrote:

    Ahhh!
    once again a FABULOUS story. I'm so glad that everything worked out well, and i loved the whole old scenery!
    Slightly craving milka chocolade at the moment \:\)
    Keep up the amazing stories!
    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 27, 2008 squeakers wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: Wonderful story, I absolutely loved it!!!\:D your screenshots are amazing, and your simmies are sooo beautiful!!!!I loved stories like this when I was a child, and this story brings back fond memories, thank you so much for writing and sharing it, your a fantastic storyteller!!!!!\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Dec 15, 2008 drewsoltesz wrote:

    Maxi, you are getting better and better, the shots were wonderful, love all the costumes and CC, a lot of hard work, and it pays off! Satisfying ending, nicely done!\:wub\:

    On Dec 19, 2008 wrote:

    I loved it..very imaginative \:D

    On Dec 20, 2008 lisa9999 wrote:

    Another fantastic story! Write more!!!!\:rah\:

    On Apr 4, 2009 wrote:

    Loved this story, \:wub\: and the way it was written.

    On Nov 8, 2009 topaz27 wrote:

    Awww this such a lovely story \:rah\:  thank you so much Irmtraut for making my day a whole lot brighter \:wub\:

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