The scorching white light grew stronger and stronger, energising the ground it penetrated. It glowed intense and hummed with dynamic force and then ... disappeared. The Sim night returned to normal, dark blue, stars twinkling, and moons shining bright.
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On Jun 27, 2006 *louise* wrote:
Have been really looking forward to this chapter & haven't been disappointed. So pleased Chester didn't die! Can't wait for the next installment!
On Jun 27, 2006 abbieken888 wrote:
Yay!!! Chester is back!!
On Jun 28, 2006 laceyhearts wrote:
I have to say WOW... You are a very talented writer. The pictures and words you have written to express them have worked so well together. I have just started reading the stories in the last few days and I tell you, this one has boosted my mood greatly. I hope you keep this one going as it is very enjoyable....
On Jun 28, 2006 tephielea wrote:
Great story can't wait for more
On Jun 28, 2006 tonkpils24 wrote:
On Jun 28, 2006 minsmusic wrote:
Thank you for your encouragement. I have to admit to being a bit bored with the story at the moment, but there will be a FINAL part to the story some time later. Again, thank you to everyone reading and leaving comments - it's taken me this far, just one more to go...
On Jun 28, 2006 PRDGirls wrote:
It just gets better and better!
On Jun 28, 2006 cyberlucy1965 wrote:
Keep it coming. Great Story!
On Jun 28, 2006 Trchook wrote:
I love your stories so much, my favorite to be exact. Don't let the next ones take so long.
On Jun 28, 2006 neenornina wrote:
It's great, I'm so glad you continued
On Jun 28, 2006 McBeal wrote:
I want to know what happens next. PLEASE!! I beg you i neeed to know
On Jun 28, 2006 evetsangel wrote:
Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. I'm happy Chester didn't die.
On Jun 28, 2006 mainegal wrote:
Woohoo, Chester is back. Doing the happy dance, woohoo..oh sorry yeah anyways another GREAT chapter.
The expressions you captured on Chester are priceless! It's sad to hear that the final chapter is coming. Like all good stories we just hate to know we're getting to the end. You have done a fantastic job. I have kept looking everyday for part four. (More than once a day, I might add) LOL. I was sooo excited to see it here this morning.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully we will learn the name of the little one. Thanks for the hard work and thanks for sharing.
On Jun 28, 2006 MissJay wrote:
Cool!!! He's back!!! Chester...is back.....Chester's back yes he is....! *doing dance from commercial* LOL Great part 4!!!
On Jun 28, 2006 kkffoo wrote:
On Jun 28, 2006 wrote:
On Jun 29, 2006 sheneiney wrote:
interesting plot
On Jun 29, 2006 wrote:
On Jun 29, 2006 Kismyname wrote:
So happy to finally have part 4! A wonderful story!
I will be anxiously awaiting the next installment and hoping it is not the last.
On Jun 29, 2006 clubrocker247 wrote:
Oh man! This is the best! I love this story
Please dont get bored with it? lol i dont even like sci-fi and im in love with this family and i MUST know what will happen to the species. I want to see them successfully integrate into Earth! lol I imagine aliens wakling amoung the sims on like a comm. lot- just socializing and watching their children play together lol. Thanks for the great stories!!!!!!! Clubrocker247
On Jun 29, 2006 Little Seer wrote:
On Jun 29, 2006 cringo wrote:
you need to keep track of ur on story one mintue he is dead the next minute he is not. depite the fact ur not keeping tracked i enjoyed the one , 4, very much!!
cringo
On Jun 30, 2006 D2Diamond wrote:
Yet again, awesome chapter!
On Jun 30, 2006 honeybjones wrote:
Oh my gosh! This is so exciting! I'd rate you a "6" if I could.
On Jun 30, 2006 snidertree wrote:
Chester is not dead! Yay for Chester.
On Jun 30, 2006 Gibson Twins wrote:
YYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHh! Chester is back I really want 2 know what happens 2 the child
On Jul 1, 2006 KrawkDbz16 wrote:
Wow! This is a great story!
Isn't it amazing what you can do just by taking a screenshot a certain way? Take enough screenshots and you get a story!
On Jul 1, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
::
n my knees, looking up at the ceiling, with fists in the air:::: "why must the story end now!!"
kidding! Love this chapter too!! Thank you!
On Jul 2, 2006 triss wrote:
i'm so happy to see this chapter!
On Jul 4, 2006 stanley the sim wrote:
Good, I love this story ....NICE very NICE
On Jul 5, 2006 zlsuter wrote:
love this story cant wait for more
On Jul 7, 2006 Jubilant wrote:
That was great. I can not wait for part 5 although I am not sure what happened to part 3. And my custom content is in your story! AWESOME!
On Jul 9, 2006 DuncX wrote:
Amazing, an incredible storyline. I found myself getting more and more enthusiastic as each episode unravelled. I seriously hope you do not get bored with this, it's such a gripping read. There just HAS to be more! It will indeed be very interesting to see how the Aliens manage to place Chester back into his home, and how he will explain his reincarnation.
Very enjoyable. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. I eagerly await the next episode to indeed see how it all progresses.
EXCELLENT!! Top marks!
On Jul 10, 2006 Emerald_Lexus wrote:
It was awesome, I can't wait for the next part...
On Jul 11, 2006 oldmember_ohmama wrote:
Just opened this area today for the first time and found Parts 1-3. Read them and was ecstatic to see part 4!!! Even though you are a bit bored, could you possibly try to work on the final chapter. We just can't wait!!!
Oh, love your backgrounds for the alien planet!
On Jul 12, 2006 Elven_Ranger wrote:
loved this installment
Thsank you, and cant wait for the next part
On Jul 12, 2006 xoxopinkprincessxoxo wrote:
THIS IS GREAT! I love it. the pictures are the best. great positions and colors. love the story line.
On Jul 13, 2006 bbbbthorg wrote:
On Jul 16, 2006 wrote:
It just keeps getting better and better! If you're a bit bored with it, maybe take a break (despite all of your impatient readers - I'm one of them, lol) for a little while. As far as I can tell, you've given the story your best effort so far, and it deserves a good finish. You can't end it as well as you started when you're not interested in it anymore, so maybe you need to put it away for a while. Thanks so much for part for - I'll be waiting for the final chapter along with everyone else, whenever you feel ready.
On Jul 19, 2006 evi wrote:
The story keps geting better. Very good!
On Aug 6, 2006 slime wrote:
this is really great i didnt comment on the others but i wanted to i had to go somewhere and didnt have time but this was great better than all but it was sad that the alien child got taken away
On Aug 6, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
What a lovely story!
5 points!
On Aug 17, 2006 spottsmom wrote:
This suspense is killing me.
You have such a gift of pulling you in and mking you want more.
Which is after all part of being a great story teller.
Wonderful work!
On Aug 18, 2006 Tuesdai wrote:
Great story. It was sad when he had to go in that blue car. My children on the sims 2 never got taken away before I aways keep their grades up and make them have good parents and keep them healthy. But it great. How did you get them taller than Chester. Is it like a cheat code or somthing? Tell me in my gustbook.
On Sep 15, 2006 lia2223 wrote:
I love this series, you have done a great job.
On Sep 15, 2006 huntress2005 wrote:
love your alien skins
On Sep 27, 2006 Toxic_Storm wrote:
great work....keep it up
On Oct 7, 2006 Mistress Useless wrote:
I love this story - the best one I have seen!
On Oct 26, 2006 Leng-Lui wrote:
the alien skins are amazing
and the history gets better each day
On Nov 13, 2006 wrote:
On Dec 6, 2006 civetinja wrote:
Thanks!!!! Nice story
On Dec 9, 2006 kiwiana girl wrote:
cool story
On Dec 14, 2006 gilysse wrote:
Wow!
On Dec 23, 2006 Pete789 wrote:
On Jan 9, 2007 manuela55 wrote:
On Feb 12, 2007 Palina wrote:
Very very amazing story!!!!
On Apr 26, 2007 md198 wrote:
Bring on number 5!
On Jun 16, 2007 tuxcedo59 wrote:
On Jun 21, 2007 nanapon wrote:
i hope the ending is as good as this part was!
On Jan 25, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:
I have been waiting to read this...nicely done!