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An Unforgetable Experience
by narniana
Hello again!Here's part one of the story!!I hope you'll enjoy it!!
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An Unforgetable Experience
by narniana
Hello again!Here's part one of the story!!I hope you'll enjoy it!!
Part one: It was an ordinary Friday afternoon.My mother took Sandy for a ''walk'' and my father rake the leaves from the garden.. I was playing a game in my computer,when my sister came in! Mandy:'I'm going to Emma.Would you like to come?'
Peter(me):'Of course i want!!!Thanks...!!'
Mandy:'Your welcome....Let's go now!' Mrs.Wilson(Amy):'Emma..Mandy is here!'
Emma:'Coming!!.................Heeey!What's up?Oh,you brought your brother too!!How are you Peter?'
She said and gave me a kiss on the cheek...!!! We went to sit on the balcony.We were talking and talking when suddenly..
Mandy:'Oh my god!!!'....Peter why don't you go to eat a pie that Mrs.Wilson made?!!'
Peter:'Aaamm...why?What happend??'
Mandy:'Just go sweetie...'
I didn't understand anything...I just went downstairs.. Mrs.Wilson(Amy)':Do you like the pie dear?'
Peter:'Mmmm...Yeah it's good......Hmm....Why did she asked me to leave..?'
Mrs.Wilson(Amy):'I guess they'd just wanted to say their girl stuff!!That's why they sent you here.' Mandy:'Who is he?'
Emma:'Oh,he's Sam.An old friend of my mother's.He moved in with ous because he just came from Belladona Cove...and hadn't a place to stay.(He hates hotels..)So he'll stay untill he'll find a house.
Mandy:'Omg!!You must introduce us!!! She ran down to meet him..
Emma:'Mandy,what are you doing?You have a boyfried!!'
Mandy:'Relax..If i decide to ask him out or something i will talk to James.'
Emma:'Promise?'
Mandy:'Yes,yes now com'on...introduce us!!' Sam:'Hey Emma,how are you?'
Emma:'Hi Sam..I'm fine..eeerrm..That's my friend M..'
Mandy:'I'm Mandy!Nice to meet you!'
Sam:'Eeerm...Nice to meet you too..
When i saw my sister hugging that guy..i understood everything!!She is a wacky...My poor Emma didn't know how to react..She was just watching them.. After their ''meet'' they all went up and sat on the balcony again and start talking....Emma was sitting in a corner without saying anything....I decided to go there and tell Mandy that i wanted to leave..
Mandy:'But..we just came..Why do you want to leave?Aren't you feeling good?'
Peter:'I'm fine..I just want to go home..!"
Mandy:'Ok, ok let's go...Bye guys,see ya!'
She glanced at me angrily and then we left.. We didnt speak at all on our way home..She was just muttering..But when we arrived... Mandy:'Why do you have to destroy everything?..I mean i'm nice to you..and...urggg....'
Peter:'I'm....i'm sorry...'
Mandy:'I don't accept your apologize,and you know what?I'm never gonna take you with me again!'
It was the first time my sister yelled at me..!!I ran to my room crying! I would never see Emma again..and Mandy would never speak to me..What a disaster...I didn't do anything wrong.Why did she yelled at me??....Five minutes later she came in. Mandy:'Peter..I'm really sorry..I don't know what happened to me.Please..will you forgive me?
Peter:'Of course i will!!'
We hugged and promised that we will never argue again!
Mandy:'Oh,i almost forgot!Rick is here!' Rick was my best friend and just what i needed now!I told him everything..and i felt a lot of better.We talked for a while.. Later we went downstairs to watch TV.My sister was talking on the phone.
Mandy:'I can't believe he asked me out!!I'm so happy!Eeerm..I don't know if i will tell him..I know i know i promised but....Ok ok i'll talked to him tomorrow...Goodnight!
Rick left after a while because it was quite late. My sister couldn't sleep..She was thinking about her date...and if she should tell James about it.She had to decide. I on the other hand slept really great, and i saw a beautiful dream.. End of part one
I know what's you're thinking...She said she wouldn't make a story of a teenage girl..blah blah blah...I won't!!Wait and see yourself!! ;)Thanks for reading!!Please comment and rate!Have nice day/night ;)

An Unforgetable Experience:Part one

Jan 5, 2009 by narniana
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    12 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jan 6, 2009 snowangel993 wrote:

    Wonderful story so far! Can't wait for part two \:rah\:

    On Jan 6, 2009 jennnnnie02 wrote:

    You know your story is pretty much, uh, amazing!? \:D Can't wait for the next part.

    On Jan 6, 2009 fionaivri wrote:

    I loved it really! I'm rating it 5.0! I can't wait for more! \:D \:D \:rah\:

    On Jan 6, 2009 smiley00girl wrote:

    Great! Can't wait for more!!! \:D \;\) \:D

    On Jan 6, 2009 jarlet wrote:

    sweet dialogs between a brother and his sister and cool story by the way!\:D \:P

    On Jan 6, 2009 whitmartinez wrote:

    \:rah\: Great first chapter! I can't wait to see what's in store for this brother and sister.

    On Jan 6, 2009 pretty_bunny wrote:

    It so cute! Oops I said that before \:wacko\: Oh well! I think that Mandy is cool! I love converse! \:D

    On Jan 6, 2009 candy820 wrote:

    Great chapter! Peter is such a cute kid. And I love Mandy's hair\:D \:D

    On Jan 6, 2009 Queenie1988 wrote:

    Nice story. \:\) Where's the next part? \:D \:P \:P

    On Jan 6, 2009 wrote:

    Great job again!!!

    On Jan 7, 2009 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Fantastic!! \:D

    On Jan 7, 2009 EvaaDJ wrote:

    Liked it!! Keep writing \:wub\:

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