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Wellcome to my new story! I had to scrap 'My Cold Heart' as my games broke down but I think this story line is much better (:
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16 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jul 16, 2007 wrote:
I loved it
Great job!!
On Jul 16, 2007 candyprincess wrote:
great story keep up the good work!
On Jul 16, 2007 atangki wrote:
Very nice!
Please write more! 
On Jul 16, 2007 animcfly wrote:
so sorry to hear about your other story, was really getting into it! Oh well this one is great and cant wait for more!
On Jul 16, 2007 Denouement wrote:
I like. Very 'Ugly Betty' such fun
On Jul 16, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
I knew there had to be a model in Neeve! What do the other models have to say now?
Beautiful custom content.
On Jul 16, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:
I love this story!
On Jul 16, 2007 toczka wrote:
great!
On Jul 17, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:
Omg keep going!! It was awesome!! I can't believe the transformation!!
On Jul 17, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
I like the "Ugly Betty" idea. Good story. I wonder what the models will think now? Can't wait for next part. 5.0 ++++
On Jul 17, 2007 Gibson Twins wrote:
Fabulous 5.0 that was soooooooooooooooo lovely
On Jul 19, 2007 rstorms wrote:
Love it.
On Jul 20, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice. Well done.
On Jul 22, 2007 S.Cains wrote:
That was really good. And I love all your custom content, and Neeve is beautiful! I am going to read the next part now!
On Jul 23, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
You know what, I Never thought Neeve was ugly!! After all, beauty is only skin deep, but ugliness goes all the way through!!
On Jul 23, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:
awwwww beauty is on the insdie right?? but those eyebrows were bad. trust me i usd to have something a lil less drastic
its amazing off to read the 2nd part