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Hey guys!!!! ooooh whats gonna happen??

Hey guys!!!! ooooh whats gonna happen?? I invited her in. It was the least I could do.
'Evannna! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!' I let out. 'Look sis ive had problems with a boyfriend. I had to leg it. Please let me stay for a couple of days?' She whimpered. 'Evanna, I have a family. You ruin everything I have. I can't let you take this away from me.' I stated. She turned her back on me. 'Neve PLEASE. Im desperate!,' She begged. I put a false smile and agreed. I had to. How could i not? Evanna had to sleep on the sofa in a pair of Bella's old pyjamas! She was always slimmer. In the morning Zane walked in...
'Wow' He just said. 'Oh, who are you young man? Single I hope' She grinned in a flirty way. 'Evanna I see you have met MY husband, Zane this is my little sister Ev.' I snapped. I saw the look in Zane's eye. It killed me. I could read him like a book, he was thinking 'Why didnt I pick her' On the first week of Evanna's stay, I kept out of her way. Looking after Electra gave me pleasure as soon she would no longer be a toddler. My muscles grew tense as I watched Zane and Evanna grow closer each day that passed. Would Evanna go soon? Zane would not betray me would he? But I saw the way he looked at her. Like a locked up dog wanting a bone. My new baby bump grew more obvious. I knew things were bad when Zane forgot our anniversary and took Evanna and the girls shopping instead. Electra joined her twin sisters in the years of childhood and even her embrace seemed different from before she met Evanna. She loved her just like she loved me. Maybe even more. Evanna was given many outfits and trips to the salon. He marked each month of her stay with a celebration that she was still in her midst. The twins loved her and I would watch from the corner of me eyes, my huge pregnant belly lolling in front of me. Trying to make myself look more glamerous wouldn't even tempt Zane away from his and Evanna's 'Friendly' relationship. I awoke one night. I could hear giggles and whispers. Would the girls never learn the school is after a sunday even though its a weekend day! But it wasn't the girls. It was Zane.....and Evanna. She was wearing my wedding dress and they seemed....busy. Thats the moment my world came crumbling down. 'WHY ZANE.? WHY! I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME! I THOUGHT YOU LOVED YOUR CHILDREN!' I screamed at him.
'Im sorry Neve it was a.....mistake.' I muttered. They conversed quietly behind me. I rubbed my stomach, this would be the last child i would ever have that would be Zane's. This would actually probably be the last child I would ever have. I felt a twang of pain I had never felt before. I was having my baby, now. But the pain was so bad. I had never felt like it before. I was blindly screaming. The birth was done in our own kitchen. I passed the baby to Zane.
'Its a girl, her name is verity, take her,' I mumbled, the pain was still so bad. I fumbled to the bath room and forced a smile to my children as they asked me what was wrong. But I felt my knees weaken and the pain wrenching my every body part. Then I was rising, passing my yelling twins. I felt as light as air. Death came to me, only visible in my eyes. I somehow was realised by death that I had died of a brewing cold, it had worsened to pnemonia. I was raised up to the light, I passed my family and whispered....
'Not everything can be achieved by .....face value.'
I heard my voice echo around the room in a final burst of life and then I knew it. I was dead. That was the end of Face Value. I really hoped you liked it! Ive just got one question: How can you change a sims eye colour during game play without using contacts? thanks.
I will probably do a follow up, Many thanks to all custom content makers and all my comments leavers and people who have stuck with My story throughout the whole journey. xxx

Face Value: Goodbye Earth

Aug 13, 2007 by rosieseed
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    10 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 14, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    WOW!! That was really good. Neve looked like Angelina Jolie. OMG!! And I hated Evanna from the first moment I saw her!! Aww, Neve died!!\:\( \:\( I'm like nearly crying!! I'd like to know how to change eye colour too, and skintone!!\:D Great, great part. 5.0\;\)

    On Aug 14, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:

    very good , the people look very realistic \:\) baby looks a bit scary at the end lol \:\)

    On Aug 15, 2007 plushies_lovergg wrote:

    I liked it a lot \:\) The only thing I would do different is at the beginning, have some type of title or something. At first, it was a bit confusing as to what was going on.

    On Aug 16, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    No! How could Zane and Evanna do this to her? \:\(\:\(\:\(\:\( So sad. This was a great story! I \:wub\:ed it and hope to read more from you!

    On Aug 16, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:

    Nice story! Well, I think it's possible to change it with a special face surgery mashine you obtain as a career reward, I think that after completing a career of Actor. But there is a simple cheat that unblocks all the rewards: while in game you press Ctrl + C and type 'unlock Career Rewards'. Have fun!

    On Aug 19, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice story, I loved it. \:\)

    On Aug 28, 2007 basketballbabe818 wrote:

    great story!!

    On Oct 5, 2007 wrote:

    5.0

    On Oct 20, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Good story ! Thanks !\:\)

    On Nov 1, 2007 wrote:

    Hey can u tell me how to get contacts?
    Thanks oh and great story!

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