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Hi Guys, I'm making the foundation for a new story. I don't wan't to make one people will not enjoy, so, please comment and give me critical information on if I should continue or not.
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28 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jul 12, 2008 Jaws3 wrote:
That was great! I can't wait for the next part! You have to do more, it was awesome! You are a good writer and it's an original storyline. A great combination... this story will go far!
On Jul 12, 2008 atangki wrote:
Nice start!
It's very interesting.
On Jul 12, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:
this is a great beginning and i know what you mean about wanting to know if people are gonna like the story but i think you should definitly continue
On Jul 12, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:
very nice
On Jul 12, 2008 Zela wrote:
Nice. And remember that confidence is great when writing stories. Please continue on. ^^
On Jul 12, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
short, but nice
On Jul 12, 2008 wrote:
fantastic,cant wait to read more
On Jul 12, 2008 rebekah eliz24021994 wrote:
that was good start keep going
On Jul 12, 2008 1ayotola1 wrote:
KEEP GOING!
On Jul 12, 2008 finsgirlie wrote:
was a bit short, please continue!!!!
On Jul 12, 2008 TeenIdol wrote:
Interesting!
On Jul 12, 2008 slime wrote:
I want to hear more continue please!
On Jul 12, 2008 Maddster94 wrote:
short, but i really, really hope you continue.
great storyline. you got me hooked! ;]
On Jul 12, 2008 maryash2 wrote:
interesting, can't wait for the next part!
On Jul 13, 2008 arc1801 wrote:
On Jul 13, 2008 pinkfloydgroupie wrote:
yea it was great so far, keep going!
On Jul 13, 2008 Hottiesheldon wrote:
That was a great intro and it was short and sweet xan't wait to read mre
5.0
On Jul 13, 2008 maryash wrote:
interesante
On Jul 13, 2008 kitfu11 wrote:
I'm enticed! Looks like a great intro!
Please continue~ 
On Jul 14, 2008 islandchild97 wrote:
FUDGEMMS...... YOU LEFT ME HANGIN' so i'd love 2 see MORE!
On Jul 15, 2008 kellerwayton wrote:
you lead us in now tell us more
On Jul 15, 2008 spacemouse wrote:
Nice story, thanks for sharing!
On Jul 17, 2008 wrote:
im intrigued already! i hope you continue this story, its off to a great start!
On Jul 17, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Jul 18, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:
Yes, I would like you to continue.
I like your Sims, they're gorgeous. 
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On Aug 23, 2008 Xanthia_love wrote:
Do continue...!!
But wat about suburban girl ?? didnt continue it..