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Everyone said my Mother was beautiful.
I looked nothing like her sadly but i remember how she used to hold me with her soft scent. I felt apart of her.

Everyone said my Mother was beautiful.
I looked nothing like her sadly but i remember how she used to hold me with her soft scent. I felt apart of her. Some of the time we were happy. But a heap of the time Mum would sit in silence and cry. At these times she would chat to people online. Then she would leave me alone...she always said the same thing.
'Its all about the loving baby' So a man would stay with us for a bit. For these times she would be so happy. She never paid any attention to me but i knew she was happy so i felt happy. But.......Then usually a while after the new man had come, a glitzy, rich woman would strut up the path. There would be shouting. Then the man would go. ...And then we would have to move. But i was young. It was all an adventure. I never thought she was a bad mother. Even though she may have let me slip many a time. It was the day before my birthday and for once my Mother was in a motherly mood. Chatting to me, she finally blurted out.
'Asia Babe, i really need to go out if were going to settle down here'
I just gurgled for a response. And with that a nanny was booked and she was out the door. She didnt come back till the day AFTER my birthday, in the same clothes as she had left in. 'Im sorry Babe' She called out to me.
I just hugged her. I didnt wan't her to be in a bad mood. I was a child! But I still looked nothing like my Mother sadly. But as months went by, i was left alone. My Mother no longer needed to care for me as much. I was now able to get snacks from the fridge, order pizza, walk to play school, get dressed and wash myself. My mother would sometimes forget about me and i would play all night long by myself. It was almost like i was forgotten. Little did I know, my Mother was having problems of her own. She was wearing baggy clothes all the time now. She was constently in doors as well. No Parties! And when i took a look at her in her Nightwear. I realised she was FAT! Or was it something else? She started screaming for me. I didnt know what to say.
'Mum, whats wrong?' But at the end of that fateful night, the two boys where born into the world. Cain and Abel. My Mother seemed content. She dressed well and payed a lot of attention to the twins. I however was not happy with the family conditions. I was always placed on the sidelines. My Mother ordered to share my very few toys with my Brothers.
But when she wasn't looking i played tricks on them and teased them!
 I became such a cold little girl as a few years past by. I had no intrest at all in the twins birthday. I pretended to be much happier playing alone outside. But i looked through the window, silent tears trickled down my cheeks. I looked for attention in many ways. I tried to grow my hair long, but my Mother just snapped.
'I won't wast my money going to the salon then.' I liked the twins no more when they were children.
Their Childish behavier was no suprise to me. And soon i flowered into an older body.
'You look just like your Father Asia' My Mother said.
'That fact is no use to me since i have never met him' I snapped back. The Children have left for school....What surprise will their Mother have for them when they get home?
Find Out in the next part!!!! Will Asia warm up and fall in love?
Thankyou for watching and thankyou all custom content suppliers! xxx

My cold Heart

Jun 24, 2007 by rosieseed
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    33 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jun 25, 2007 itachigirl wrote:

    great job!!!\:D

    On Jun 25, 2007 maxi king wrote:

    \:Dnice story but very sad,too \:o

    On Jun 25, 2007 wrote:

    A good start! Poor Asia\:\( \:D\:D

    On Jun 25, 2007 wrote:

    where did asia's long hair come from?

    On Jun 25, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:

    kinda short. I love the hair in the story. Where did you get the majority of them? Can't wait for part 2!!\:rah\: \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Jun 25, 2007 sara_87 wrote:

    Poor Asia, Great story! \;\) \:D

    On Jun 25, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:

    \:D Can't wait for part 2!

    On Jun 25, 2007 Zela wrote:

    Good first part, I liked it. It is strange that you used the main character as the cold hearted one, that is so unique and I love it. Can't wait till the next part.

    On Jun 25, 2007 simboy161 wrote:

    \:rah\: great story\:D

    On Jun 25, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice story. Thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Jun 25, 2007 dorcam wrote:

    very nice story, good job \:D Poor Asia but \:\(

    On Jun 25, 2007 wrote:

    Well, the story was very short, I really didn't understand it, and the pictures were very blurry,

    you could do better,
    Just2Cute \:D

    On Jun 25, 2007 wrote:

    wow, sad. poor girl, i've never read anything like this on TRS, i really liked it, it was good!\:P

    On Jun 25, 2007 rosieseed wrote:

    Thankyou so much for all your guys feed back!!!!
    I dont know how to make the picture less blury so does any one have the answer aaahhhh!
    i get allll my custom content from this site so just scroll along if you want to find something!!
    xxx\:rah\: \:wub\: \;\)

    On Jun 25, 2007 Daffygurl16 wrote:

    This was a very good story I liked it alot. Where did The moms hair come from in the 22nd slide.OverALL I liked the story a lot.\:wub\: \:D

    On Jun 25, 2007 sheneiney wrote:

    great stories, i love the mother's hairdo's. you can fix the blurry problem by going to your graphics tab under options in the game, or just go to peggysims2.net and under the FAQ(i think) she tells you how to do it.\:D

    On Jun 25, 2007 sheneiney wrote:

    http://memberarea.peggysims2.net/Index.do
    scroll down to the bottom and she'll show you how to fix the blurriness

    On Jun 26, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:

    Very nice start indeed! Hope you continue it!!\:rah\:

    On Jun 26, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:

    That was a good but sad start, I'll be watching for more.\:rah\:

    On Jun 26, 2007 ppunkprincess wrote:

    i feel bad for Aisa, but i cant wait to hear the surprize!\:D \:D \:D

    On Jun 26, 2007 wrote:

    thanks for sharing, i enjoyed this story, will be looking out for the next one.

    On Jun 26, 2007 wrote:

    very nice

    On Jun 26, 2007 vmceldrew wrote:

    good job! i recently wrote a story but when i put part 2 on it erased my old story so i think im done with storys but dont give up good start!

    On Jun 27, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Wow, really good story and nice custom content! \:\) I feel bad for poor Asia. \:\( And about the note "What surprise will their mom have for them when they get home", is the mom pregnant again? \:confused\: I can't wait to read the next part.

    On Jun 27, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:

    Good story. Looking forward to next part. \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jun 27, 2007 shayka1st wrote:

    \:D nice story thanks\:rah\:

    On Jun 27, 2007 atangki wrote:

    Your sims are pretty! Great story! \:D\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jun 28, 2007 wrote:

    I love that story \:D Really great! Pictures are very nice too.\:\)

    On Jun 29, 2007 emsmom wrote:

    very nice. cant wait to read more

    On Jun 30, 2007 shumain wrote:

    oh i really feel sorry for her. i guess her mother doesnt pay attention to her bcuz she doesnt like her father. loved this story\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 1, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:

    That was very interesting, hope you continue\:rah\:

    On Jul 3, 2007 Linuxete wrote:

    Good story\;\)

    On Jul 23, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:

    awww no how sad\:\(

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