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Welcome to my new story: The girl next door. I hope you enjoy it and just to let you know, it is not based on the film!

Welcome to my new story: The girl next door. I hope you enjoy it and just to let you know, it is not based on the film! My Mother, Lila Kirby knew she was a country girl at heart. It was her idea that we moved and as my Mother always gets her own way the plan was carried out. My Father abandoned his job as a taxi driver in the city and scraped all the money he had ever earned to get us to our new home. My Twin Evie was always a confident and excited little girl which made her a popular icon in our large school we just left. She was not happy to leave her many friends and relationships that had brewed over the last seven years. I, Sam Kirby on the other hand was quite quiet and reserved compared to her and did not mind to be tossed to another life style. As we drove up the path to our street, only two house stood in one whole road! The bright blue one drew me in, with its high roof and pretty swing i could hardly resist gawping at it. But the building aspects of this house were not the only things that made me look.... .....A girl stood in the front yard. She looked about me and Evie's age. She had white blonde hair, bright blue eyes and the palest skin you had ever seen! She looked like a china doll. Our hose was no nearly as nice as the blue one. My parents still sat in our sitting room and smiled with happiness as they looked around at the start of a new life we were all embarking on. Me and Evie played cops and robbers in our empty yard. There was plenty of space so we enjoyed ourselves for a few minutes. We both suddenly clicked on the neatly dressed little girl watching us from over the fence as we played. Evie ran up first,
'Hey I am Evie and this is my twin Sam. We are new here why don't you play with us,' She shouted loudly at the scared looking girl. 'No, thankyou. Mummy says I must not play with strangers and to keep in the garden at all times. Besides I have my bubbles to play with,' She replied politely. 'Oh!.....well. Come and play if you feel like it,' Evie mumbled, suprised at being rejected. A voice suddenly filled the air. It was neat and crisp and stated,
'Grace. Come here now! Your piano lesson started 1 minute ago. This means you will have to practice an extra half hour!'
Grace- If that was her name looked very worried and skipped quickely inside. Later in the day we heard a knock on the door, as we knew no one in the district we were all in question about who it could be. It was the little girl from next door, this time with her parents! The Father was incredibly exotic looking, with his tanned skin, jet black hair and deep eyes. The Mother was where Grace must of inherited her features from. The prominent markings like the blue eyes, white hair and almost clear skin. The parents both dressed in crisp suits that looked like they were cleaned and pressed every five minutes. My Mother came and greeted them.
'Good afternoon. My name is Bridget Fank, this is my husband Harold and daughter Grace. We live next door,' She spoke to my Mother as if she was selling a house. 'Oh! Hiya, Im Lila. Brad, my husband is just in there along with my twinnies Sam and Evie,' My Mother replied as though she didn't quite know how to greet this amazing women. 'Ah well, come round to ours for some pool fun, tomorow maybe. Some....neighbourly bonding,' Bridget said.
'Cool' Replied my Mother. Along with a lovely house, Grace and her family had a reasonably sized pool in their garden. I was nervous about diving in the pool. Would Grace think I was cool? She didn't even look as i made a noisy splash into the waters. Her and my sister hit it off really well. They were aleady best friends and Evie found out she and I would be in the same class as Grace. Bridget seemed to approve of us, though I felt my Mother envied the family's glossy life-style. At the end of the summer, we were all doomed into starting a new year of school. To the end of the holidays Grace had become a lot more quiet and she always winced when Grace was shouting or yelling. And as we walked down the road, Grace suddenly burst into tears. 'Whats wrong Gracie,' Evie cooed. 'Mummy and Daddy are not together anymore. He is moving out and....I have to go with him for a bit!' She sobbed. 'But you CAN'T go Grace. You just can't. I will miss....I mean Evie will miss you so much,' I yelled but she only continued to sob. At the weekend she left. The blow of her hair and the sweet twinkle in her eye she got when she was happy was bundled into a taxi and thats when my life came crashing down. Well thats the end of my first chapter. It will proceed to get more exciting as the guys get older. Will Grace come back? Will Sam's love blossem as he turns to his teenage years? Thankyou everyone, all commenters, custom content makers! xxx

The Girl Next Door:First Look

Aug 14, 2007 by rosieseed
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    24 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:

    houses not so impressive but good story!!!loohking 4ward 2 part 2 !!!!!\:ph34r\: \;\)

    On Aug 15, 2007 binky13 wrote:

    That's really cute, I always loved little childhood romances. \:D

    On Aug 15, 2007 treeppa wrote:

    That is just so cute! \:wub\: I'm looking forward to this to continue. \:\)

    On Aug 15, 2007 xjenjenx wrote:

    geat story will look fwd to the next part good job

    On Aug 15, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:

    \:wub\: Nice story, thank you for sharing!

    On Aug 15, 2007 maxi king wrote:

    \:Dnice start \:cool\:

    On Aug 15, 2007 onutika4u wrote:

    Nice story!\:wub\:

    On Aug 15, 2007 candyprincess wrote:

    where did you get those houses from?there nice and well decorated

    On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:

    that is a great story and i cant wait for the next one to come out!!
    were did you get all the hair styles and clothes! they are a ll very cute love the story\:D \:\) \:wub\:

    On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:

    Nice Story!!!! Where did you get the hairstyles and the clothes from, they are really cute!!!\:wub\: \:D

    On Aug 15, 2007 candy820 wrote:

    such a cute story

    On Aug 15, 2007 simbaby51 wrote:

    Hey, my name's Bridget!!! \:\) Haha. Great story. 5.0\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 15, 2007 rosieseed wrote:

    thanks every1!!!!
    lol i made the houses myself so thanku candyprincess for commenting on them, i was feeling worried after what the first comment i got said. I get all my downloads from The sims resourse but if you go to the sims 2 website and search dokieplayer, you can get all the downloads you have to pay for from places like peggysims2 for free!!

    On Aug 15, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    Aww, that was a lovely, sweet story!\:wub\: 5.0\:D

    On Aug 16, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\: great story!!!

    On Aug 16, 2007 kisekiai wrote:

    aww, i cant wait for the next one \:\)

    On Aug 16, 2007 Abercrombie_Fitch wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Aug 16, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:

    Good start. Can't wait to see what happens to the kids as they get older. Great screenshots! 5.0+++++++++++++++++

    On Aug 16, 2007 wrote:

    very good. I really liked the houses also. I am excieted for the next part.
    \:rah\: \:D \:rah\:

    On Aug 16, 2007 swirlique wrote:

    I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! \:ph34r\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 18, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:

    Very enjoyable, on to read the next part!!\:rah\:

    On Aug 19, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice story, I loved it. \:\)

    On Oct 21, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Great story ! Thanks !\:\)

    On Jan 22, 2008 beckyleanne wrote:

    \;\)

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