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Hi, welcome back.
Just to fill you in. This is the second part. The first was called: First Look. Sam and his family moved next door to an amazing girl and they became friends but sadly she moved away with her father. Leaving her Mother.

Hi, welcome back.
Just to fill you in. This is the second part. The first was called: First Look. Sam and his family moved next door to an amazing girl and they became friends but sadly she moved away with her father. Leaving her Mother. After Grace left, my Mother would spend time with Bridget next door. Me and Evie would listen through the walls.
'Lila, I don't know how it happened, Harold just told me he didn't love me anymore and took....he took our little girl. I jave nothing,' Bridget sobbed. 'Its ok Bridget, Grace will come back. There is no way why Harold can stop her. Im sure she would rather be here, with her Mother and friends then with her boring old Father!' My Mother urged. But In everyone's hearts we knew things we not going to be Ok. We could tell that just by looking into Bridget's tired eyes. After a few months since Grace's departure, me and Evie sat up talking one night.
'Sam, do you think Grace will ever come back?' Evie whispered. 'I don't know Evie all I know is that i miss her....I really miss her,' I said back to her, almost silently. ...6 Years Later... Its six years later in my life. They passed like a blur and the prominent memory of Grace eventually faded to the shadows. But today, it was our thirteenth birthday. We would be teenagers! My Mother organised a garden party with all our school best friends.
This is Emily, shes quiet but very sweet. .....James. Im not too fond of him. Hes a real ladies man. Evie insisted on him coming as she ADORES him. And heres my best friend, Ricky. After Grace left we always played football and playstation games together. Bridget also managed to turn up....without Grace but i expected never to see her again. And of course my Mother. Sadly my Father waas working but the company we had was good all the same. Our friends cheered us on as we got ready to join them in their teenage years. Even Bridget joined in on the celebration. But she must of been thinking what i was thinking, what would Grace look like as a teen? I blew out my candles and i wished for her. I wished for her with all the power i had in me. Me and Evie no longer looked completly alike. She had lived up to her crazy personality with bright tufty hair and colourful make-up. Im still widrawn and my appearence shows it with my long hair and scared expression. As my friends all left in a taxi, not to be seen until i joined them with my sister in the first year of our secondary boarding school we all would be attending i heard a screech of breaks and angry talking. I walked closer to the car and I could make out the voices.
'I NEVER WANTED TO COME WITH YOU DADDY! I WANTED TO STAY HERE BUT YOU PAYED MY MOTHER TO HAVE ME' Shouted a female voice. A man got out of the car and yelled,
'FINE! LEAVE ME BUT I CAN BUY YOU THINGS YOUVE NEVER DREAMED OF! I BET YOUR PRECIOUS MOTHER AND FRIENDS HAVE FORGOTTEN YOU!' The man was Grace's father! And then she got out, I looked at her and i knew. I loved her.
'Hey Sam. I missed you so much' She said simply. I ran and hugged her.
'G..g..grace!' I stuttered.
'I came back for your birthday. AND Im coming to the same boarding school as you and Evie next term!' she whispered with her arms around me. I kissed her and whispered taht i loved her and she told me that she loved me back. I knew my life was never going to get any better. I would marry Grace and we would have little children with the plalest skin, bluest eyes and blonde curls. But would it go wrong? Hey, i hoped you enjoyed this chapter. All the teens are going to a boarding school next time. And may this photo be a clue for you. Will Grace change her mind and forget about Sam for greater heights? Well you will have to find out! Thank you everyone xxx

The Girl Next Door:Im Missing You

Aug 15, 2007 by rosieseed
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    27 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 16, 2007 wrote:

    omg I LOVED IT CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE\:D \:\) \:D

    On Aug 16, 2007 kisekiai wrote:

    Hope to see the next one soon

    good job \:wub\:

    On Aug 16, 2007 Pucina wrote:

    Great work! Can't wait for the next one.. \;\)

    On Aug 16, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    FANTASTIC!! Can't wait for the next one!!!5.0\:D

    On Aug 16, 2007 halla07 wrote:

    Super 5.0 \:P

    On Aug 16, 2007 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\:That was great!!!!!! \:wub\:

    On Aug 16, 2007 atangki wrote:

    This is a great part! \:D Please do continue. \:D\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 16, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:

    Very nice part, thank you for sharing!

    On Aug 16, 2007 wrote:

    i dont think this one was as good as the first. You rushed it, i mean she got out of the car and BOOM they were together....u rushed it...

    On Aug 16, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:

    Yeah I agree it was a little rushed...but a good story either way. \:D

    On Aug 16, 2007 candy820 wrote:

    great chapter a little rushed but still great\:D

    On Aug 16, 2007 KhandiKane wrote:

    EXCELLENT WRITING!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. cAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, WITH THEM IN THEIR TEENS.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 17, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Great! Rushed, but great! \:\)

    On Aug 17, 2007 muaxxx2004 wrote:

    Wow, I really want to see next chapter!!!\:rah\:

    On Aug 17, 2007 wrote:

    Loved the new chapter.\:D

    On Aug 17, 2007 myladycraven wrote:

    cool story!!\:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Aug 17, 2007 heyunome11 wrote:

    \:D i wanna know what happens next. I loved your story. Sam is so cute

    On Aug 18, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:

    Great continuation! Nice screenshots. Can't wait to see if true love wins out. 5.0+++++++

    On Aug 18, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:

    That was very sweet, well done!\:\)

    On Aug 20, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Good story, I loved it. \:\)

    On Sep 24, 2007 Junior_bad wrote:

    Excellent story, very beauty

    On Sep 24, 2007 Junior_bad wrote:

    p.s. good pictures \:\)

    On Sep 25, 2007 JLounge wrote:

    Well done, it was very beautiful!\:wub\:

    On Oct 18, 2007 Eluna wrote:

    \:D

    On Oct 22, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks !
    \:\)

    On Jan 5, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:P

    On Jan 22, 2008 beckyleanne wrote:

    \;\)

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