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Thank you for the last coments on Part 4! I really didn't think this story was going to take this long, my apologies. I will try my best, Not to leave you all hanging. Or doesn't that make the story more interesting?.. I'm kidding you, just wanted to see if I can get a pillow fight started. ;-)
A BIG thanks to all the awesome creators here, wish I could be as talented. To the storytellers: Love your stories (I think that's what's holding me up here, hehe) Thanks for taking time to read mine ;-)

Back to the story....

Thank you for the last coments on Part 4! I really didn't think this story was going to take this long, my apologies. I will try my best, Not to leave you all hanging. Or doesn't that make the story more interesting?.. I'm kidding you, just wanted to see if I can get a pillow fight started. ;-)
A BIG thanks to all the awesome creators here, wish I could be as talented. To the storytellers: Love your stories (I think that's what's holding me up here, hehe) Thanks for taking time to read mine ;-)

Back to the story.... Back at (DJ's Grandparents) Fran's and Oliver's place. The night that DJ switched places with Benton.
"You know how I hate doing this, DJ," Fran came back to speak with him after the conversation she had on the phone with Deputy Craig. "I think this time you went over board...." She started to say but (Benton) DJ interrupted. "I'm telling you the truth! I'm NOT DJ, I'm Benton. Benton Henderson...." Benton was getting flusterated. Stepping back, Frans motioned for DJ to stop,"I will have no more of this talk. DJ I advise you get some normal clothes on before the officers show up. You look ridiculous."
Benton shrugged and looked up at her puzzled, "Okay, but.... where are my clothes at Grandma?"
He played along. "Honestly, can you just stop pretending your not you." giving her grandson the warning look.
Christmas chimes started to play as the doorbell rang,"Good, they're here. Oliver, please greet the officers." Frans said without moving her eyes from her grandson. "Hello Frans, it's me, Sergeant Andrews." Andrews wondered if she could hear him. He only talked to her a few months ago when DJ was creating a mess of some kind which caused a murky gas like cloud that lingered over three miles long. "Greetings officers." Oliver said calmly leading them to Frans. Patiently Andrews had listened to the story, first Frans then DJ's version. He then turned to Frans and asked, " No offense Frans, but I'm not sure why you decided to call us. Are you wanting to press charges on DJ?..." "Will you take a good look at him! He has lost it! He is claiming he isn't himself. It's out of my hands, he won't even reason!" Frans exhuasted herself and looked for hope in Andrews. "Hold it!" feeling a bit awkard in this situation. "I'm an officer not a psychiatrist. I can not do anything unless he has threaten, harmed anyone or broke the law. I can escort him to the hospital since I'm going in that direction of town." "Fine. So be it." Frans seemed a little relieved,"I'm just at my wits. Maybe that will help him, but I'm not counting on it." Benton couldn't believe his own ears, he certainly isn't very fond of DJ and what he has done. But DJ's own grandma thinks of him hopeless. Where's the love he wondered. He looked straight into her eyes to see if she meant just what she said and couldn't help but spoke on DJ's behalf, "Grandma, I'm sorry if I caused you any pain. I hope you will forgive me." "Too late for that, don't you think?! There is NO room for that." Frans looked over to Andrews, "Just take him away, away from me." She turned her back on him and walked out the room. As they were heading out, Andrews asked if he needed to gather some personal belongings and was very surprised when he answered, saying it won't be neccesary. He waited until they were in the car and he went to collect some things for him in case he changed his mind. Andrews found a change of clothes for DJ, poor kid he thought. Wondering what made him snap, not too surpising to him. He knew something would happen, he was always into crazy experiments. He knew the kid always kept to himself. After arriving at the Hospital that night, Craig pulled Andrew aside.
"I have to admit how ironic it is that DJ claims to be the guy that we thought his wife had murdered..." Craig has been wanting to gossip as soon as DJ (Benton) headed into the Hospital, out of ease dropping range.
 Andrews feeling a bit confused and never really into gossiping, suddenly occurred to him prior to Benton's story. Man, that Craig can talk up a storm thought Andrews. He was trying to piece together the first information he had brought to his attention. "You know Craig thanks for reminding me about Benton, you may be on to something there..."
Craig stopped in his ninty-per-hour-chat, "I am?... What do you mean?"
"I don't have time to chat at the moment, I'm going to see that DJ gets checked in, wait for me in the car." Andrew said as he took out DJ's luggage and walked briskly to catch up to DJ. A few moments later....
"Yes Mam, that's correct." Andrew was verifying DJ's address.
DJ (Benton) dreaded what's to come. He just wished he had stayed home that day, Oh how everything would of been different. He missed Linda and Javi more than anything. "Alright, He will be seen by Dr. Beldy first thing in the morning. His room is on the second floor, Room 424." "Thank you Mam." Andrew said noticing that she was checking him out, he smiled but to himself. You lady-charmer-you, this old dog still has it, he thought to himself. Before DJ (Benton) went to his room, Andrew gave him a hand shake and gave him reassurance that all will be fine.
Benton was a little bit reluncant at first but accepted his faith. After a shower and changing clothes, Benton tried to think of what to do for the following morning. His thoughts were drifting, and he couldn't stay awake. "What should I do? Linda wouldn't reconize me, I'd probably scare the wits out of her." he mumbled on the way to bed. Soon as he went to bed... ...Morning arrived and so did Dr. Beldy.
"Morning DJ, I'm Doctor Beldy, but you can call me Doc, everyone does."
Feeling drowsy from lack of sleep Benton yawned and asked,"Wh-hhhhat time is it?" knowing that this wasn't a dream couldn't make him feel any worse. "First I want you comfortable, please have a seat and explain to me what is troubling you." Dr. Beldy said with a warm smile. (Moments later)
"I see your having Identity difficulties. Are you taking any prescribtions by chance?" Doctor Beldy thought if that was the case it would be a simple cure.
"No, I never had any." Benton now worried that Doc thought he was nuts. "I'm afraid your going to need intensive therapy. I'll need to go over some paper work and I can meet you in the cafetria." Doctor Beldy said in his gentlest voice with a hint of worry. Searching for a snack for Javi, Linda thought a salad would be a best since they can both share it. Waiting for Benton was taking longer than she thought. She was keeping her fingers crossed that everything will be fine.
"I want cookie! I want cooooookie!!" Javi pointed at the dessert section.
"Not yet sweety, maybe later if you eat. Okay?" Linda said with a kiss to her forehead.
 Shock froze Benton solid. He knew who was behind him without looking.
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Stay tune for Part 6
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Just A Simple Wish (Part 5)

Feb 21, 2008 by rover202
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    9 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 22, 2008 misha1013 wrote:

    omg....i can't wairt to see what happens next\:rah\:

    On Feb 22, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Feb 23, 2008 OCIKITTEN wrote:

    It was well worth the wait. Great story. \:D

    On Feb 23, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\: GREAT STORY!!!!\:rah\: I can't wait to see the next chapter!!!\:\)

    On Feb 25, 2008 primavera77 wrote:

    nice job!\:\)

    On Feb 26, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Great story, thanks for sharing! \:\)

    On Feb 28, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Oh, what will he do?! Hope the officer can help him and that his wife can recognize him despite his looks... Look forward to the next part!

    On Mar 28, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Good part ! Thanks for sharing !\:\)

    On Apr 15, 2008 qvisn wrote:

    Wow, this is very exciting, i am sure she will recognise her hubby, I cant wait for the next one, please let me know when its out.\:D 5.

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