Hello! This is my second series next to Design on a Simoleon. Since this is a whole different kind of story to me, please leave suggestions as to how to make it better. If you want to see more of this story, then tell me so! Thanks to everyone for reading. Happy Simming! :) Let's get on with the story...
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On Jun 18, 2007 simbaby51 wrote:
sorry that the picture of Clementyne in the car was so fuzzy. I forgot to change the picture mode and I didn't realize it until I put it on the site. Plz comment! Thanks!
On Jun 19, 2007 fallenangelohio wrote:
Pretty good so far! You did a good job with your screenshots, so don't worry about one little mistake. You can hardly notice it anyway. I'll look for the next one.
On Jun 19, 2007 wrote:
I think you did a great job! I didn't even notice any blurry shots
I'll definitely be watching for part two!
On Jun 20, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Good start. Keep on going.
On Jun 20, 2007 simbaby51 wrote:
thanks everyone for your comments. part two will be out soon!
On Jun 20, 2007 Lailey01 wrote:
Good - except you should give her a makeover!
On Jun 20, 2007 Jubilant wrote:
I think it was an excellent beginning. And nevermind the makeover comment. I get so irritated when people tell me I should have made my characters realistic. I hate realistic. Sims should look like sims. Clementyne is lovely just the way she is.
On Jun 20, 2007 itachigirl wrote:
Good job simbaby51 it was just as great as "design on a simoleon"!Please continue with this story!
On Jun 21, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
On Jun 23, 2007 emsmom wrote:
cant wait to read part two