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Hello and welcome back to the story of the Hunter Family
It must have been a while since we last heard about this troubled family so a quick introduction is in order!
Enjoy! ;]

Hello and welcome back to the story of the Hunter Family
It must have been a while since we last heard about this troubled family so a quick introduction is in order!
Enjoy! ;] Here are the very happy parents, Marie and Barry...arguing. See, Marie is a hard-working, and unusually kind person and Barry is a fat, lazy and self-centered person who enjoys a greasy ham burger more than his only child (almost), so it is no wonder they argue. Marie and Barry argue alot lately, after the 'fire' in their last home. Motherlode insurance gave them $50 000 compensation after the fire which eventually destroyed their home. Marie took the money and used it to buy a nice family home. Lets get on with the story. Marie: I just cannot belive how stupid you were. I mean, you prepare a toater pastry, which is one of the simplest things to cook, and then you just walk away from it, thinking 'oh, it won't catch fire, when it had been cooked, it will just whizz out of the oven and into my big, fat mouth!
Barry: Look I said I was sorry! Nobody got hurt-
Marie: That was luck!
Barry: and the news was on so I couldn't miss it.
 After a lengthy 'discussion' Marie stormed off upstairs to play with her lovely daughter, Annie, who was oblivious to her parents problems. After alot of thinking which is amazing for Barry, he decided to get a job as a gas station attendant. Barry didn't particularly hate his job, he just didn't love it. So after some more thinking (well done Baz!!) he decided to quit. He just wouldn't tell Marie yet. One argument was enough for now. The next morning, as the two ladies in pink got up, Barry had a plan to tell Marie he had quit his job, but first he was going to attempt to re-enter her good books. Barry said sweetly " Good morning dear, would you like some breakfast? How about a nice walk in the park afterwards?
Marie snarled " You've lost your job haven't you?! That is why you are acting so sweetly to me, huh? "W-wh-what. How did you guess? And anyway, we can afford to live with the insurance money" he stuttered.
Marie stormed off downstairs disgusted, She had had enough of his antics as mobey was tight. So that evening, as Marie watited for HER carpool, she wondered what she should do:
1: Stay with Barry and hope everything is sorted out, meaning he can sit on his butt all day whilst she acts the slave, bringing in meagre funds.
2: Takes Annnie and run away, meaning leaving Annie with a childminder to work several jobs.
3: Tell Barry how she feels and encourage him to get a job, to relieve some of the strain. Marie liked this idea the most, her conscience would be at rest, and she would be able to bring little Annie up in a safe and stable environment. So as it began to snow, and as Marie left for her nightshift, she had made up her mind as to what she would do.. Thank you for reading the first proper part in this troubled family's story. Look out for part 3 where you will find out what Marie's decision will be. Please comment and rate high!
Thanks again
Paul xx

The Hunter Family Part 2:The problem

Nov 24, 2007 by simboy161
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    On Nov 24, 2007 simboy161 wrote:

    Hi and thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it. You may notice a change in picture quality half way through - I started a while back then forgot\:o Anyway, pleeease comment and rate\;\)

    On Nov 25, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:

    good \:\)

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