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Hi there! My name is Tom Duffy. Yeah, I know it is wierd but you can call me 'Duffers' if you like. Any way, I hope you enjoy my story.

Hi there! My name is Tom Duffy. Yeah, I know it is wierd but you can call me 'Duffers' if you like. Any way, I hope you enjoy my story. This is my twin brother. HE got the letter confirming that we got into private school! Isn't it brilliant! Sorry if I sounded a bit swatty but it is quite exciting. When our mum found out she was thrilled! Maybe my allowance will go up? Mum decided to throw a party to celebrate the occasion. She invited a few friends over, warning them to park at their own risk. Goopy cheated on his driving test. Well here are some of the guests. I am glad mum is so popular. I told you that goopy could'nt drive. He hit the Audi! Oops Umm.. I don't know how that got there..shall we move on? As the party wore on, mum braved the Karaoke machine. She can sing.. well sort of.. Dad decided to propose a toast, even though he was wearing his speedos. He meant to say the last bit about hoping mum would never sing again quietly, but she heard him Mum was enraged. She went on and on about Dad never showing her any respect and that he never did any thing around the house. Then he started going on that all mum did was party, drink and generally spend all the money. Mum decided that she had, had enough of him. She called through the windows for us to come with us to give Dad time to cool off. We climbed into the car silent as mice.. Not knowing where we would go, we had no other family and Mum's friends lived in bedsits. As we pulled out of the driveway, there was a screech of tires, a massive bang and a flash of white... Then everything went dark.... Thankyou for reading this first installment in my series. This part may not make too much sense but it will in future parts. Anyway I hope you enjoyed the story so far, please comment and rate high. Constructive critisism is helpful but no downright nasty comments- remember, I am only 13. Cheers! #Paul

Learning to let go-Part 1(Intro)

Jul 4, 2007 by simboy161
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    13 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jul 5, 2007 maxi king wrote:

    \:D great story,like the flying car\:D

    On Jul 5, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:

    Cool! The car in the sky was weird but good anyway! Also iif you want ur pictures less blurry, go onto camera setting, do high quality and large frames. Anyway good overall!\:D

    On Jul 5, 2007 simboy161 wrote:

    Sorry about the blurriness\:confused\: It wasn't like that before\:wacko\:

    On Jul 5, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    Great story. \:D i'm looking forward to part 2!\:rah\:

    On Jul 5, 2007 jenniegoldy wrote:

    great story
    im just wondering if you could tell me where you got all the cars

    On Jul 6, 2007 atangki wrote:

    Nice. \:D

    On Jul 8, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    I like the flying car!...Did the mom or one of the kids die in a car crash or something? \:\( Nice start. I'd like to see how this goes. \:\) \:rah\: But it's kind of blurry, just go to the camera options and make the picture quality high....I think that's how you do it....and it'll be clearer. \:D

    On Jul 9, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice story. Thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Jul 9, 2007 Hellfrozeover wrote:

    Good so far\:\) . Looking forward to what happens next!

    On Aug 27, 2007 HugeLunatic wrote:

    Very cute story. \:rah\: Can't wait to see the next part.

    On Aug 28, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:

    Cool Story, Flying Car WOOHP (Y) Just Like Harry Potter \:D 5.0 \:D

    On Nov 25, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:

    good \;\)

    On Jan 26, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:\)

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