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Say hello to the McDonald Family. I have decided that they should adopt children throughout their lives. Lets begin.
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12 Comment(s) posted so far
On Dec 10, 2006 slime wrote:
its ok
i hopethe next part is better this one was good to
ima give you a 3.5 points
On Dec 11, 2006 manuela55 wrote:
On Dec 12, 2006 kellyhopkins22 wrote:
me to 3.5 ok
On Dec 12, 2006 Dr. Macabre wrote:
I think it was great, keep up the awsome work!!!!!
On Dec 12, 2006 simboy161 wrote:
thanks for your comments so far. I realise that this intro to the family was a bit rubbish so i don't expect amazing comments. THe next edition will be on some time soon in january 2007
On Dec 13, 2006 gamemast75 wrote:
Well, not much happened yet, but I hope the next one is better. I give 3.0
On Jan 8, 2007 Pete789 wrote:
On Jan 12, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:
Pretty good!
On Feb 4, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Thanks !
On Feb 5, 2007 MinnieMinPin wrote:
Nice!
I love it!
On Feb 15, 2007 shady411 wrote:
Good
On Apr 8, 2007 Olga2102 wrote:
super story!