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Welcome to "Terry and Ashley - The continuation"!
As requested, here is the continuation of my last story "The half-breed - A vampire story." I tried to make this story comprehendible for everyone, but I think it would be better if you would read my last story, if you haven't yet.
I had some big computer and game problems so it took much time to finish this story, but in return it's longer ^^
Please rate and give feedback and please don't forget that English isn't my native language.
ENJOY!!!
As requested, here is the continuation of my last story "The half-breed - A vampire story." I tried to make this story comprehendible for everyone, but I think it would be better if you would read my last story, if you haven't yet.
I had some big computer and game problems so it took much time to finish this story, but in return it's longer ^^
Please rate and give feedback and please don't forget that English isn't my native language.
ENJOY!!! After Terry and Ashley went with Custos help back to the earth, they were a happy couple, even after they had finished school. Finally they married. By-and-by they got better jobs, moved into a big house and had two children: Liam and Lilly. Our story starts again at a normal day in the morning: Ashley went to work and left Terry, who had some free days, alone at home. The children already were at school.
In her office, Ashley checked her appointments book; her first customer would be a Mr William G.T. Allen. It would be a normal day, she had some appointments today, but not too much.
It knocked. One second later a pale man went into her office.
"Mr Allen? Nice to meet you, I'm Ashley Olsen." she greeted him, both shooked hands and Mr Allen sat down.
"Nice to meet you, too." he said and that in a way that Ashley couldn't class. She get a strange feeling because of this man. "Well, what can I do for you?" she didn't want show him her sudden uncertainty and spoke like she did it usually with a customer. Wasn't she one of the best insurance agents the insutance company had?
"I want a life insurance for my two grandchildren." Mr Allen told her.
This words,no, this MAN brought memories about a person back although she had thought she had forgotton these.
George. Terry's older brother who tried to prevent Terry from becoming from a half vampire to a human. George had been a vampire and died because of his try. Finally Ashley could help Terry to become human. She suddenly noticed that Mr Allen had begun to talk about his grandchildren:
"The boy is 16 now, and the girl 9, but she has birthday in April."
"Like my Lilly." Ashley thought smiling. "And Liam is 16, too."
Her customer still spoke. "But unfortunately if have never seen them yet. But I'll meet them soon."
"That's nice!" Ashley meant. "We have a special offer for such cases at the moment. I show you some brochures!" she stood up and went to the shelves, there they were. But while she searched for the brochures she got a bad feeling because of William G.T. Allen.
It wasn't his look but the way of talking and moving that remembered her of George. But also of Terry.
Finally Ashley found the brochures but then she paused a second. Could G.T. stand for George Terry? She rejected this thoughtn fast. This would be a too big chance.
Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder. "I wondered if you would make out that I'm the father of your husband, but like it seems, you didn't noticed it, Ashley." William told her grinning. His hand closed more around her neck.
Ashley's heart began to beat faster and faster. First she was so surprised that she couldn't move even one finger, but now her rising fear gave her the control about her body back.
"Let me go!" she cried and pushed him away. She made one step back, but then there were the shelves and she couldn't step back anymore. "What do you want?" she asked with a shaky voice.
"I want a compensation for what you took away from me." William answered quietly but Ashley could hear huge rage and hate in his voice.
"What? I didn't took something away from you!" she replied; her fear was getting bigger and bigger.
"You stole my kids. And now I want a compensation."
Ashley's eyes dilated because of fright and horror. "You're kidding?" she wanted to know. But when she looked in his cold, yellow eyes, she knew that he wasn't.
"Oh my God..." Ashley whispered and then she ran so fast as she could out of her office. "Run if you want. But you have to run fast and far away if you don't want to loose everything." the vampire spoke into the empty room and his yellow eyes sparkled.
The hunt had begun and he was the hunter. In the meantime Liam had arrived with his girlfriend Rachel at home. He didn't want to introduce her to his family already, because they would make big fuss about it.
"Let's go upstairs, ok?" Liam said.
Rachel nodded smiling and both went to the stairs. Then both noticed Terry standing in the kitchen.
"There's my dad, hurry up and go upstairs, my room is the first on the right side!" Liam told her and Rachel went up. No second too late.
"Hi Liam!" welcomed Terry one moment his son after he had seen him. "How was school?"
"Like always. I'm not hungry, I'm going upstairs and relax a bit." Liam replied. "But I made pizza! Do you really don't want to eat a piece?" Terry asked. He couldn't believe it, it was the first time one of his meals didn't burn and his son didn't to taste it!
"No, I don't want. And I'm sure that it's burned, even just a bit. I go upstairs!" Liam repeated and climbed up the stairs to his room. After Liam had went upstairs, the house door banged and Terry's little daughter ran into his arms.
"Daddy! I'm back!" called Lilly.
"Hi honey" Terry welcomed her and gave her a long hug. "Do you want to eat something? I'm sure you're hungry! I made pizza, so do you want a piece?" "Yes, I want some! I'm hungry and this time it really doesn't smell burned so I eat a piece!" Lilly said happy. "Do you know what happened today?" she asked her dad.
"No, what?"
"Well..." she began and told him her school stories. Liam went into his room where Rachel had waited for him.
"Problems?" she wanted to know.
"No, why?" he said and sat down next to her. "It's just, that I think that my parents wouldn't like it if I would bring a girl at home." he tried to explain. He was a bit worried that she wouldn't understand it, because he really don't want to loose her, even they were a couple for some days. She was really important for him.
"Do you think they wouldn't like me?" Rachel asked Liam. "Would they think I'm not good enough for you?" "No, but there're a bit ... oldfashioned." Liam told her and layed his arm around her.
So they sat there for a while, talking and hugging. Then Rachel suddenly stood up.
"Do you know what we do?" she asked him a bit excited. "We go to me! I'm sure my parents would have nothing against the fact that I have a boyfriend!" "It would make me glad if you come home to me." she said again and pulled Liam up.
"Well, if you want it, I'm going to do it." Liam promised her.
"Really!? Oh, that's so kind from you!" she said and gave him a hug. Then she began to kiss his neck.
"Stop it, that tickels!" laughed Liam. "Stop it!"
After his words Rachel really stoped for a moment. "Well, if it just tickels, then it's alright." she said quietly. And then she bit into Liam's neck. First Liam hadn't realized what was happening, but then he pushed Rachel away from him.
"What did you do!?" he yelled angry. "Who are you!?"
"The question should be "what am I"." Rachel told him with a ironic voice. "It was me what you saw all all the time. You just couldn't see me this way, because I didn't want to show me you like this and because you didn't know that I'm a vampire."
"You're ... a vampire?" Liam asked disbelieving. He couldn't believe that. But as he lay a finger on his neck, he felt blood and it hurt unbelievable. Liam also felt that his body began to be cold, numb and weak out of his bite marks. "What did you do?" he wanted to ask again but his voice began to fail. His body felt so cold that he even could just think about this cold that he had no time to be scared.
"You shouldn't fight against it." Rachel told him and her voice sounded vicious. Then she knocked Liam back so he felt on the floor, without having the possibilty to move much.
Rachel saw the fear in his eyes. "You'll get used to it." she said looking down at him. "Sleep a bit and you'll see that you'll like it. Just trust me like you did before. Sleep a bit."
Liam felt that he lost his consciousness. Her voice suddenly seemed to be so ... drowsy ... maybe she was right and he really ... should sleep a bit ...
"Good boy." Rachel began to grin as she saw him falling asleep. In the meantime Ashley had arrived at home.
She was so confused and scary that she nearly had driven into another car.
She closed the door fast but didn't take time to lock the car.
"Go to Terry and tell him everything." the voice in her head seemed to cry louder and louder. "GO TO TERRY BEFORE IT'S TO LATE!" Ashley found Terry sitting realxed at the dining table and eating pizza. He was alone.
"Where're the kids?" she wondered. "Why aren't they here?" "Ashley!" Terry said suprised and stood up. "Why are you already here?" He noticed the strained exspression in her face and he knew that she was scared because of something. "You look so worried, what happened?" he asked softly. "What happened?" "Terry, where are the kids?" Ashley just replied.
She looked to the table. There were just two plates: An empty one and Terry's one. But shouldn't there be three?
"Where are the kids?" she repeated with shaking voice. "Well, Liam didn't want to eat something and went immediately upstairs, but Lilly still sat here with me before five minutes and then she went upstairs, too." Terry answered worried. "But why do you want to know this?" "Because you father was in my office!" Ashley told him excited. "He told me that he wanted a "compensation"! He said that I have stolen his kids! And he also talked about Liam and Lilly, he knew how old they are!"
"Wait a second!" Terry stopped her. "My FATHER was in YOUR office? How can you be sure, that it was my father? You've never seen him!" he couldn't believe what he had heard. "How did he look?" Terry wanted to know.
"Well, he had blond hair and was tall." Ashley remembered. "Also he was slim and" he took a deep breath "he had yellow eyes."
Terry was shoked. The yellow eyes fitted. The rest of the body had to say nothing, because he knew that his father could invade with his own soul in the body of a human and use it like his own one. And now, he was immune to things that would usually hurt or kill vampires like churches.
He didn't want to tell Ashley this. It would be too much for her. Suddenly Ashley sat down on the floor and began to cry, the fear was simply to big for her.
"I'm going to look after the kids, don't worry." Terry tried to calm her down, but the truth was that he didn't think that everything was all right.
It was too silent, he couldn't hear the loud music that usually came out of Liam's room. He went to the stairs quickly and climbed up the stairs.
Then he was at the last step, he suddenly heard the frightened voice of his daughter.
"Daddy!" Lilly screamed again.
Frightened she looked up to the pale man how had appeared in her room suddenly. She saw his long teeth and his yellow eyes that lay on her face, sizing her up. He also lifted her head a bit to have a better look.
Lilly felt like she would be a part of a exhibition. This man let her feel like a thing, not like a human. Terry stopped in front of his daugher's door as he saw what was going on.
He made out the yellow eyes and knew that it was his father.
"Oh." William said after he had noticed his son. "Well, I'll go now. Greet your parents. We'll see us soon again."
Lilly pushed his hand away and one moment later the vampire was missing.
Terry opened the door fast and went into the room. "Are you alright, Lilly?" he asked worried.
"That man is bad!" Lilly cried and clinged immediately on her dad. "He said he would took me with him but I told him that I don't want that!"
Terry began to realize what was going on: His father really wanted to steal his kids as a kind of compensation for his dead brother George and him.
"Lilly go upstairs and wait for me with your mum, I'll go and get Liam." He opened the door of Liam's room and went in. But there was nobody. The room was empty.
"Oh my God." whispered Terry and anger began to raise in him. Anger that replaced his fear.
He ran downstairs. But downstairs there weren't neither Ashley nor Lilly, but he saw them outside running away and so he followed them.
"Ashley, Lilly! Where are you going?" he shouted without getting an answer. "Wait!"
He followed them and finally he understood where they were going to.
It was the curch. "There they go."
William and Rachel stood in the garden, watching through the windows how the family ran away.
"Well, now I have the boy. You can go Rachel." William suddenly meant. "Thanks for your help, but I don't need you anymore."
"What? You can't be serious!" Rachel replied. "You told me that I can have the boy or the girl after we're done! And now you say that you don't need me anymore!" she get angry. "I want to revenge me on this family, too! They are responsible for the death of George! He was my cousin!" "You can't make that!" she told him again and his amused face made her even more furiouser.
"You know that you aren't able to go into churches and it's clear that they are going to one in the moment. You'll die in one, the aura of one of these buildings sucks all your strenght out of you." William said with a composed smile in my face. "I can go into one, because this is the body of a human, it protects me against this aura." "In reality, I just want that you're fine." he continued and his voice seems so ironic like a voice can be. "So get you gone." "But you told me that I can have one of the kids for me!" Rachel replied again. She couldn't believe it but William was the highest family member so she had the duty to obey him...but she didn't want to!
"Get you gone!" William repeated again. His voice sounded cold. Rachel was so angry like she was never before in her life, but then she decided to disappear. William was dangerous if he was angry.
The vampire watched her vanish and was confident. Everything turned out like he thought, the girl would be too annoying later. It was better for him without her. He turned around to the boy, who leaned against a white stature, and went to him. He still slept, but he could see at the new marks on his face that Rachel had done good work by biting him. If Liam would wake up, he would has forgotten everything from his previous life. He would be totally under the control of the person he would see at first. Like a newborn chick he would follow this person and do everything what the person would tell him.
William kneed next to him and woke him up. "Can you hear me?" he asked Liam whose look was glassy. It seemed like he would look through everything without seeing anything.
"I can hear you." Liam said with a totally unemotional voice.
"Good." William meant. "Come, we go to pick up you little sister."
"My little sister? I have a sister?" Liam wanted to know.
"Yes you have" the vampire said. "She was taken along by some guys without her approval."
"Okay." Liam meant. He tried to remember of a little sister, but he couldn't. His head was like a big hole. In the meantime Terry, Ashley and Lilly had arived at the church.
"Stop Ashley!" Terry told her. "Why did you run hither?" "Isn't a church the best place for hiding from vampires?" Ashley asked her husband. She thought she had done the best thing!
"Yes it would be the best place, but my father uses the body of a human that protects him against the aura of a church!" Terry told her and began to explaine her the rest.
After he had finished Ashley asked him nervouse: "So he can go in churches?"
"Yes" Terry said "he can." In front of the church's door, William already stood with Liam.
Liam was a bit confused. The man told him that he should say nothing when they would go in, but why should he go with then? Also as this man told him that his little sister would be called Lilly, he suddenly had the thought that he had forgotten something important. He wanted to dig in his memories, but he had no one.
"Let's go in." William said and opened the door. William opened the door loudly and both walked in.
Terry, Lilly and Ashley were so suprised that Terry's father had arrived to early and that Liam went behind him. "Liam!" Lilly began to cry. "Go away from this bad man! Go away!" She couldn't understand why her brother stood voluntary next to the pale man, who had said so awful things to her.
All three noticed shoked the dark marks in Liam's face.
"He looks similar like you did, Terry." Ashley said scared.
"What did you do, father." Terry asked angry. "What the hell did you do?" "That wasn't me, it was Rachel." William said grinning. "Maybe you remember her, she's your cousin."
"But how...?" Ashley wanted to know.
"She bite him. That's all. And now, he does everything what I want. He's like a marionette. I pull on the strings and he does what he should do." he answered.
Liam could hear different voices. And he thought that he knew them also he couldn't class them. Also the faces of the three persons in front of him...he knew that he had known them. "But what do you want? Also if you have our childrens you won't get yours back!" Ashley tried to change William's mind. "No one has the fault at George's death, it was an accident! And you lost Terry before me, because you killed his mother because she was a human. So why did I stole your kids?" Suddenly William just looked like an old man.
He said nothing at first but then he told her quietly:"You understand nothing." and after this sentence he began to shout:"If you weren't appeared this all would had happened!" Lilly couldn't bore anymore and began to cry.
Her big brother who had been always so lovely to her didn't seem to know her.
The pale, awful man who screamed.
And her parents, who seemed to be totally anxious and worried.
She ran to Liam. "Wake up, Liam!" she told him to do. "It's me, Lilly! Your sister!" She hugged him so strong as she could. But Liam didn't moved.
Liam began to understand that this little girl must be his sister. Her arms that hugged him, her voice and her whole figure told him that they were very familiar.
"Please come back! Brother!" Lilly told him again.
Didn't the man say that his sister was taken over without her approval? But she seemed to want to be with this people. Liam looked up and noticed that the people, who were standing in front of him, looked at him worried.
"This is a bad man, Liam." Lilly said and hugged him again. "He's bad and he said awful things to me. Please come back, we love you however."
This words caused big feelings in Liam and suddenly he began to remember. The worried man in front of him was his father, the woman his mother. And the little girl was really his sister. "Lilly." he whispered. Memories broke in about him and flooded his mind.
William had watched the scene, because he had thought it would be easier to get the girl, if it 's closer too him and Liam. But now, this girl broke the seal that controled Liam.
Liam's marks began to dissapear. "You stupid little girl!" he yelled. He couldn't believe that this girl broke everything with a simple "we love you". That couldn't be.
"Leave her alone!" Liam told him and stepped betwen his grandfather and his sister. "Let her go and let me go." and then he took Lilly's hand and hurried with her to their parents. Ashley and Terry, who had seen everything totally worried and scared, were unbelievabled happy that their kids were alright. "I told it George and I'll tell it you: Leave us alone!" Terry told his father. After he knew that everyone of his kids was alright, he could let his feeling out. He underpressed them, because he didn't want that something happened with his children.
Suddenly the door was opened and Rachel went slowly inside.
"Rachel what are you doing here?" William wanted to know surprised. He saw that the church's aura already weakened her. She began to breathe in shorter intervals, because the air in the church was like poison for her.
Rachel took a deep breath. "Leave them alone." she said.
"What?" William replied.
"Look at them." Rachel asked him to do quietly.
William didn't understand her. Why did she change her mind?
"I observed them through the window, they are, what we can call a family." she added. She began to feel weak now and ran out of the church again. Outside she could breath normally and get back her strengh she lost in the church.
"Please leave them alone. They don't belong to us. You'll never get your sons back and nobody can replace them." she thought. She had understand, what it means to be a part of family. She hadn't such a thing like a family, she was a young vampire and so she stood very down in the hierarchy of the vampires', who had no space for a family. She had to obey nearly every other vampire.
But this family was different. In this family "love" ruled. William looked at the family, like Rachel had asked him to do.
And he felt suddenly unbelievabled lonely.
He saw a family that cared about itself, that took care that everyone was alright. Even now.
He began to realize that he couldn't break this strong relationship between them. Lilly could bring back Liam to the reality with a simple "we love you". Nobody had ever said these words to him.
Slowly he turned around and straited to the door.
He didn't turn around. Outside he stared at the grey sky and he felt the raindrops falling on his skin. He knew that he couldn't turn back the time, he wouldn't get his sons back. He lost.
Finally.
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Thanks for reading "Terry and Ashley - The continuation"! I hope you liked it!
As always a huge THANK YOU for the great creators those works I used!
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43 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jul 3, 2007 Becca182 wrote:
This is story is absoltely great! You did an awsome job
On Jul 3, 2007 andrea_sfwi wrote:
Very excited, nicely done.
On Jul 3, 2007 atangki wrote:
I want more! Please make more! Oh please do! Great story! I didn't expect a continuation!
On Jul 3, 2007 S.Cains wrote:
An amazing finale. Thanks for the wonderful stories, I am amazed how you managed to fit so much in! Glad the family is Ok.
On Jul 3, 2007 moonlicious wrote:
Beautiful story !
On Jul 3, 2007 shamansky wrote:
On Jul 3, 2007 toczka wrote:
I love it!
On Jul 3, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:
FANTASTIC
5 points 
On Jul 3, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:
ps - I love how you put the pictures
On Jul 3, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
This is an amazing story! I am glad you did a continuation of The Half-Breed story.
.... Wish there was more.... 
On Jul 3, 2007 DevilsOtherGF wrote:
On Jul 3, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
On Jul 3, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
You know that I LOVE all your stories, but this was definitly the best
Your English has improved, enormously. I was A M A Z I N G 
It was just WOW. I am soOoOo glad that you decided to do this. I can't wait to hear more from you!!!! 
On Jul 3, 2007 Salt n pepa wrote:
i love thiz story
On Jul 3, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
/Oops!!! I didn't mean I was amazing!!! I meant IT was amazing, oh, and I forgot to rate!!!
On Jul 3, 2007 Kadan wrote:
WOW
loved the ending!
On Jul 3, 2007 itachigirl wrote:
fantistic job!
5.0
On Jul 3, 2007 SeasonsRDaBomb wrote:
wow ur stories r amazing u should make more
On Jul 4, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:
AAH! This story was completely amazing! great job
On Jul 4, 2007 seniel wrote:
On Jul 4, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:
Wow wonderful story, great job!
Do you think you could tell me where you got Lilly's & Liam's hair from 
Its awesome I wonder how you got Lilly to hug Terry like that, its very cut
On Jul 4, 2007 muaxxx2004 wrote:
Excellent... is a great story, I love the effects, were very good. I also like the make up, where you get it?
On Jul 4, 2007 wrote:
Wow, wonderful. And her name was Ashley Olsen, hahaha.
On Jul 4, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
For English not being your native language, you did very well! I am a sucker (no pun intended) for any type of vampire story, and I was glad you see the finale of your tale, well done!!
On Jul 5, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
Great! Loved it, glad you continued it!
On Jul 5, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice story. Thanks for sharing.
On Jul 5, 2007 Lailey01 wrote:
Awesome work! I feel sad for George, he has no family - I don't know what I'd do without my family, I'm so lucky! Will he ever get back together with them, become their real grandpa? 5 from me!
On Jul 5, 2007 wrote:
Well done!
On Jul 7, 2007 fallenangelohio wrote:
Great story and not sappy or stupid! Loved the storyline and the screenshots. You have a talent for this, hope to see more.
On Jul 9, 2007 wrote:
Great story! I love your works!
On Jul 9, 2007 wrote:
Uuups, forgot to rate ...
On Jul 26, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
great stuff! I hope you make another story soon! Another 5/5, like I give all of your stories!
On Aug 14, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
It was really good ^^
On Aug 15, 2007 Zayury wrote:
On Aug 16, 2007 Sk8Iowa wrote:
I meant to comment this story yesterday when I read it, but I was at work and suddenly had to leave.
So I just wanted to make sure I came back and told you that I thought this part was great. 
I'm glad you did a recap on their lives, although I didn't know you had wrote this until yesterday. 
I loved it, and I'm going to read your other story later tonight and I give this story a 5.0. 
On Aug 16, 2007 Sk8Iowa wrote:
Aaaaannnnndddd, I forgot to rate it. :P
On Aug 17, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:
On Sep 13, 2007 Nyell wrote:
Another one amazing story! Your shots are great and the characters are very interesting
Keep up!
On Dec 1, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
I was so mad at William and Rachel for a while, but in the end I felt so bad for them... You really made a worthy follow-up and personally I thought it was a bit deeper emotionally especially at the end. I love your stories and keep up your great work!
On Dec 16, 2007 Kenvjo wrote:
good story - thanks for sharing
On Apr 27, 2008 crystal_89 wrote:
Graet STory!
On Jun 9, 2008 -mackenzie- wrote:
great story
5.0
On Aug 15, 2008 Christoph11 wrote:
i love it!