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Hi everyone!
This is my first story I ever made, but I had to warn you because English isn't my native language... so please don't be too harsh!
Enjoy!!!

Hi everyone!
This is my first story I ever made, but I had to warn you because English isn't my native language... so please don't be too harsh!
Enjoy!!! This is one of the nicest angels in heaven: Aria.
She is a really good person, she almost loves everything. And above all she loves God. And this is Lucifer, the devil's oldest son.
He loves nobody - just himself. He never feels something like "love", the only things he likes a little bit are his black horses.
He usually also doesn't care about his father. He just does what he want to do.
 But our story starts with Aria.
One day she heard that someone who prays ahead of the fountain in the garden at night will suddenly be in a secret place.
So she went at one night to try it. She always was a very curious angel, so it was no surprise she wanted to try it. She began to pray, but nothing happened. But suddenly some blue lightnings flashed out of the water! Aria was shoked by this flashes so much that so she had to knee. Even the pain was so big she couldn't cry. But then she was so weak that she passed out.
The word "help" died on her lipps. A grey cloud turned up and surrounded Aria and then they suddenly disappeared.
There was no cloud.
And no angel.
The garden was empty. Lucifer prayed, too. He prayed for his ancestors, but not because he was religious. He did it, because this moments were the only moments that allowed him to relax.
Then it began to rain.
He stood up. From one moment to another a flash hit one of the old trees.
"A bad omen." Lucifer thought. And like somenone would hear his thought, an angel appeared between the gravestones. He couldn't belive what he saw. The angel stood up and began to stutter: "Where...where am I? Who are you? W...what do I here?"
Aria looked around. Most of the things she saw were dark, grey or black. She realized that something really terrible had happened: She was in the hell. "Why do you ask me this things? YOU appeared here! DAMN! If God or my father notice that I have an angel in my castle a war will break out!" Lucifer shouted. "Go back where you came from!"
"But I can't." whispered Aria. "I don't know how I came here." Then a quiet noise began to get louder and louder.
"Someone is comming! Quick, go through the door and stay in the hall! Nobody is allowed to see you! Hurry up!" he ordered.
Aria just noded and run, opened the door and went into the castle. It was Manera, a lady who was for a visit in the castle.
"With who did you speak?" she wanted to know. "I heard you shouting."
"I didn't speak" Lucifer answered. "You have to get wrong." "Are you sure?"
"Yes I'm." "She noticed something", he thought. "And now I'm going to go to bed, it's late." he turned around and went to the big door. "You should do that, too!" In the hall, Aria was before to cry. Lucifer was furious with this stupid angel, but not so furious like was at her appearance.
"Follow me." he said and climbed the stairs. During he was doing it, he thought about what he could do with the angel. He couldn't kill her, because someone would miss her. So the only way to get rid of her was to send her back where she came from. Even he had to search a way for her. They went into a big room.
"My bedroom" said Lucifer. "The only room in the castle where nobody is allowed to go in. Here we can talk." And so they talked. Aria told him everything: Where she was, what happened and that she had no idea of comming back to heaven. Because the problem was that you just can go back from hell to heaven (or from heaven to hell) if you exactly know the way you came from and you take this way back. But there is also an other way: You can choose the way over the earth. But the air of the earth is like poison for devils and angels. No one chooses this way voluntary. They talked long and they decieded it would be the best for all to search a way back to heaven for Aria.
"Thank you so much, Lucifer." said Aria smiling. "Thank you so much."
This words let feel Lucifer an unknown great feeling, but he understood it after a moment. And because he was a man who always takes what he wants he kissed Aria.
He was so happy she didn't shrink from him and he began to foresee that he feels "love" the first time. "I can't believe it." Lucifer told Aria. "I've never heard from a devil who falls in love with someone, but to fall in love with an angel is nearly impossible!"
This words made Aria so happy like she was never before. She also had capital feelings for him which arised while they were talking. But she was too shy to told him that. "I never want to looser her. She's mine.", Lucifer thought.
And then they spent nearly the hole night in bed - together.
 At the next morning, Lucifer was waken up by someone who knocked at the door.
"What's going on? Who is there?" he wanted to know. "Lucifer! Here is Manera! There are some news from your father! It's really important!", she said.
"What happened?", Lucifer asked.
"You won't belive it! It's almost impossible, but there's the rumour that ..."
"...an angel fell from heaven in hell! But God thinks she was kidnapped by some devils! That could end with war!"
"NO!" shouted Lucifer. "THAT CAN'T BE TRUE!"

TO BE CONTINUED...

The way back to heaven - Chapter I

Apr 1, 2007 by sweetcharming
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    41 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Apr 1, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:

    Never mind the language, you really made amazing sets and incredible characters, the demons are a must see.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 1, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:\) Brilliant screenshots, wonderful characters. A great first story.

    On Apr 1, 2007 saralou.davies wrote:

    The language wasn't bad at all, I can't wait to read the sequal.

    On Apr 1, 2007 Alyosha wrote:

    nice sets and costumes! \:D

    On Apr 1, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Apr 1, 2007 lexique wrote:

    ooooooooooooooh, i want the next part now! hurry up hurry up! 5.0

    On Apr 1, 2007 Deanna73070 wrote:

    Great story!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 1, 2007 rons_pigwidgeon wrote:

    Ooo, this is very interesting! I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens to the star-crossed lovers.

    On Apr 1, 2007 binky13 wrote:

    Nice story and the screenshots are amazing.\:D

    On Apr 1, 2007 LilyoftheValleyICE wrote:

    Absolutely gorgeous pictures! The scenery was really wonderful \:\) I love this story too, what a great idea! I can't wait to see what happens next. Pretty good job on your English too, not bad. Will be looking out for more \:wub\:

    On Apr 1, 2007 muaxxx2004 wrote:

    OMG, GREAT STORY, pls next chapter\:rah\:

    On Apr 2, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:

    WOW!! this is stunning!!\:rah\:

    On Apr 2, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:

    wow, nice. Next chapter asap plz!!!\:rah\: \:wub\: \:D

    On Apr 2, 2007 slime wrote:

    GOOD STORY WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 5 POINTS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 2, 2007 elvizog wrote:

    \:wub\: Never mind the language: your story is very amazing. I'm waiting for the chapter 2 \:rah\:

    On Apr 2, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:

    I understood it perfectly! Really good idea can't wait to see what happens next!\:D \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 2, 2007 chardonnayonedge wrote:

    What a wonderful story! I am asolutely amazed! Everything is perfect!\:D Can't wait for part two!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 2, 2007 R.Quest wrote:

    Great story and even more amazing given that English is not your natural born language.. I know a bit of Spanish, but I doubt I could write a story in Spanish much less have it be understandable.. great job, great sets and the characters were interesting too\:rah\:

    On Apr 2, 2007 wickedgalaxia wrote:

    Great job! \:rah\:

    On Apr 2, 2007 airdrie wrote:

    English may not be your first language, but you've done a great job portraying your story. Keep up the good work!

    On Apr 2, 2007 wrote:

    Very nice story! \:D That was perfect for your first one! Great job! \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 4, 2007 dogz wrote:

    i \:wub\: your story even though english isn't your native language, the story was great\:rah\:

    On Apr 4, 2007 wrote:

    Good idea to make the angel and the devil fall in love!\:wub\:

    On Apr 5, 2007 cornelia757 wrote:

    really cool characters! i liked that story!\:rah\:

    On Apr 5, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    WOW, that was amazing. I can't wait for part 2!! \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 10, 2007 lilqueennbri wrote:

    Great begginning story.

    On Apr 15, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    I loved it! good job \:D

    On Apr 30, 2007 ukiyo wrote:

    Love it! Your sims are beautiful and the scenery is fantastic! Thanks for sharing it. \:D

    On May 8, 2007 wrote:

    totally love the scenery and the actors
    great work!
    I'm thankful that I discovered your story so late, now I don't have to wait for the next chapter \:\)

    On Jun 21, 2007 Downtimegirl91 wrote:

    fantastic idea\:D

    On Jun 23, 2007 dianova wrote:

    Great set, great screenshots, great characters, awesome story!!! Forget the language I love it! \:wub\: \:D \:wub\:

    On Jul 3, 2007 spooneroon wrote:

    great story!!!! 4.5

    On Jul 4, 2007 wrote:

    Wow, great story! I can't believe English isn't your first language, you did a wonderful job!

    On Jul 9, 2007 wrote:

    What a great story! \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Aug 14, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    Nice start \:D

    On Aug 15, 2007 Zayury wrote:

    \:wub\: \:rah\: Terrific story! Your screenshots are AMAZING! I loved the "special effects" and all the poses! Your characters look fantastic! Great story! \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 12, 2007 elopge wrote:

    How unique and lovely! *goes to read next part*

    On Nov 20, 2007 Ajoya wrote:

    Very Amazing. You have great creativity! I've never heard of a story like this one.! EXCELLENT job!\:D

    On Nov 26, 2007 sunny33 wrote:

    very good!!\:rah\:

    On Dec 16, 2007 Katriona! wrote:

    A great first story\:wub\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\: great story!\:wub\:

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