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Hi everyone!

This is chapter 2 of my first story. Please remember that English isn't my native language so please forgive me my grammar mistakes (o:

Enjoy!!!

Hi everyone!

This is chapter 2 of my first story. Please remember that English isn't my native language so please forgive me my grammar mistakes (o:

Enjoy!!!

 After Lufier and Aria had heard that everyone knew that Aria wasn't in heaven anymore Aria was desperate."Oh no! Why do they know that I'm in hell?" she wondered. "Why?" "We have to do something, Aria." Lucifer said and pushed the tapestry to the side. A hidden door came out.
"Come, we're going to my library, maybe we found there something that helps us." "Be careful climbing down the stairs." he said.
They climbed down some old, black stairs that hadn't any banisters. It was very dark, just sometimes some candles lightened the stairs. They came in a large room with a little lake and a big tree into it.
"What are we searching for?" Aria asked.
"We search for the book that describes the history of the castle. We had to released with our prayers an old connection between heaven and hell which sent you to here. Maybe there's somenthing written about in this book."
They went on searching.
"I have it. But it's sapereted into two books, you have to read one, too." Lucifer told Aria.
So they started reading the books. The time went by and they searched for hours, then Lucifer suddenly closed the book.
"I found it."
And he began to explain. "The creators of the connection were the sisters Ria, Ari and Ira. Their father was a devil and their mother an angel; they were triplets." explained Lucifer. "And because of their parents who weren't from the same race, they all had very different looks. After their birth they were sepperaded: The girls Ria and Ari, who had a darker skin, came to hell, the "white" Ira to heaven." "They knew from each other and then they had grown up, Ria and Ari often talked about the possibilities how they could contact Ira. They weren't allowed to send messages, so they had to think about secretly." "But then Ria's boyfriend was promoted and now allowed to send messages, so Ria asked him to give her sister in heaven a small parcel with letters from Ria and Ari. Her boyfriend gave it to Ira." "After some time, Ari had an idea: They could build up an portal with their magic energy. If two of the sisters would open the portal, one in heaven, one in hell, with their energy, the third one could use it and visit the sister.
Ria liked this idea, too and so they told it Ira. The triplets decided to try it.
Ira chose the garden of the palace where she lived and her two sisters the graveyard as fixed points for the portal." "And then, after they had some unsuccessful tries, the first time the triples could see each other. They found out that the portal works the best if they used their magic energy with prayers. And so they used the portal very often to see eachother till they died." After Lucifer had finished Aria asked:"But this means we need someone in heaven who helps us! And we have nobody!" she looked desperte.
"Don't worry", Lucifer tried to calm her. "I'm sure we find a way!"
But the truth was he had no idea how they could find one.
"Maybe I could help you." a voice suddenly said behind them. They turned around and saw - a ghost.
 "How are you?" Lucifer asked. He belived that he knew the answer, but it was nearly impossible...that this ghost... "I'm Ira, one of the sisters you who built up the portal." The ghost glided to Aria. "And I will help you to go back to heaven." "REALLY? You would do that for me? That would be so kind! But ... how do you want to do that? We need a person in heaven who prays so the portal is open..." "My sisters died in heaven and I'm sure they felt like me that someone had used our portal. And then they feel my prayers, they're going to pray, too, so you can use the portal." said the ghost.
"Why do you belive that they will feel the prayers?", Aria wanted to know.
"We are triplets, we are more connected than you could ever image. They're going to feel it." she just said. "Good." Lucifer said. "Then let's go now." They went to the graveyard.
"Aria", Lucifer said. "I thought about this a long time, but ... I wanted to ask you if you want that I go with you to heaven. I would give up all, if ... well ... if you want it." he looked very nervous. Aria smiled with her hole face. "Of course I want that you go with me. I would be so happy about that. I'm sure not everyone in heaven would like this decision, but nothing is stronger than love. They wouldn't be abel to do something against it." But then they heard that the door was opend by someone.
They turned around. It was Manera.
She had a long sword in her hand.
"Do you really think it would let you go, Lucifer?" she asked and a vicious smile appreared on her face. "I don't care about this little angel, but YOU won't leave the hell. You're devil's son. You're his successor." Lucifer was getting furious.
"You knew it from the beginning! Right?" he asked.
"Yes!" Mamerea laughed. "Did you really think I'm just here to visit you? Your father sent me to control you. He doesn't trust you and not do I. He ordered me to guarantee you don't make any problems. So YOU will stay HERE." "Do YOU think that YOU can stop me? You should know you aren't able do defeat me with this little toothpick in your hand. " Lucifer angry replied.
"How knows? Maybe you underestimate me." Manera said. "But if you don't want to fight against me...I could understand it...it would be embarrassing to loose a fight while the mistress is watching." "Go behind me Aria." Lucifer told Aria.
Flames began to burn around him and a sword appreared in his hand.
"If you want to loose against me, Manera, I accept the challenge. But let's do it fast so Aria and I still can go to heaven this night!" After his words Manera rushed to Lucifer. The fight began...


TO BE CONTINUED...

The way back to heaven - Chapter II

Apr 6, 2007 by sweetcharming
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    45 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Apr 6, 2007 Nyell wrote:

    Great story! Creative and interesting! I can't wait till chapter 3!\:\)

    On Apr 6, 2007 chardonnayonedge wrote:

    \:rah\: Great job! \:rah\: Keep it up!!!!

    On Apr 6, 2007 sassysinks wrote:

    So creative, and I love the screenshots and costumes! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    On Apr 6, 2007 saralou.davies wrote:

    Another great edition to the story. Can't wait to see what happens next. \;\)

    On Apr 6, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Apr 6, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:

    I am not sure how you got them to fight and look extremely real but it is perfectly done, as always the character design and the setting is perfect. Never mind the english, your flaws are minor ones and it is perfectly understandable, as you read more english you will get the hang of it

    On Apr 6, 2007 wrote:

    yay!!!!!!!!!!!!

    On Apr 6, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:\) A brilliant continuation to your first chapter, wonderful special effects. Great story.

    On Apr 6, 2007 muaxxx2004 wrote:

    Excellent, I want to see more

    On Apr 6, 2007 lexique wrote:

    wicked!!!!!!!!

    On Apr 6, 2007 R.Quest wrote:

    Fantastic great shots/ story line and costumes.. I can not wait for more..

    On Apr 6, 2007 Alyosha wrote:

    I had so much fun reading the story that I do not mind those grammatical mistakes! Besides, your mistakes aren't that bad at all, and it is understandable! Keep up the great work! \:D

    On Apr 6, 2007 sandybvv wrote:

    \:rah\: i really want to know what will happen next!! good job!!

    On Apr 6, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:

    Incredible story! 5.0!\:rah\:

    On Apr 6, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:

    I love your stories. Can't wait for the next one!

    On Apr 7, 2007 binky13 wrote:

    Wonderful and creative story, can't wait for the next part! \:D

    On Apr 7, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:

    one word...wow!!! \:rah\: \:D

    On Apr 7, 2007 wrote:

    \:D Absolutly Beautiful! Everything is great and your english is uderstandable. I'm looking forward for more, and please don't keep us waiting for long. Good Job

    On Apr 7, 2007 slime wrote:

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO VERY GOOD 5 POINTS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 7, 2007 wrote:

    I cant wait for part 3 !!!\:D \:D \:D 5.0!!!

    On Apr 7, 2007 LilyoftheValleyICE wrote:

    This part was really exciting and it's such a good story! As you read and write more, I'm sure you'll improve your english even more, though, it isn't bad at all! Great job! And beautiful pictures, as always. I'm looking forward to the next part \:wub\:

    On Apr 8, 2007 wrote:

    I love the cosmtumes and the way Ari, Ria, and Ira are all made up of the same letters!\:rah\:

    On Apr 8, 2007 Fizzy9 wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Apr 8, 2007 wickedgalaxia wrote:

    Great job! I look forward to the next part \:D
    \:rah\:

    On Apr 8, 2007 wrote:

    Nice Job!!!!! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 9, 2007 btmctm wrote:

    Not bad at all!\:D

    On Apr 9, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:

    Very different concept, Costumes are great, so are your shots!\:\)

    On Apr 15, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    very nice job! \;\)

    On Apr 30, 2007 ukiyo wrote:

    Love your stories! Fantastic scenery, beautiful sims, and I can't wait to read the next part! \:D

    On May 4, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\: very lovely story. you do have a very good talent and am looking foreward to chapter 3, what happened to chapter 1?\:rah\: \:\)

    On May 8, 2007 wrote:

    great ending!
    can't wait until the next chapter!
    I love the triplets clothes, where did you find them?

    On May 30, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:

    Can't believe I missed this! DUH! Love the storyline and CC and costumes, wonderful!\:\)

    On Jun 24, 2007 dianova wrote:

    \:D It gets better! Sweet!!! \:wub\:

    On Jul 3, 2007 spooneroon wrote:

    another great story!!!!\:rah\: 4.5

    On Jul 4, 2007 wrote:

    Eeep, another great one! I love Lucifer's clothes (and skin!)

    On Jul 9, 2007 wrote:

    wow, I love this one, too! Thank you for sharing!

    On Aug 14, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    OOOOOOOOOo! Exciting! \:D

    On Aug 15, 2007 Zayury wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: AWESOME, FANTASTIC, AMAZING!!! The story line is wonderful, and your screenshots are out of this world!! I love the way you decorated the location of each scene! The special effects are FABULOUS!! I have no problem understanding your English! You are an amazingly talented storyteller with superb photo taking skills!! I love your story and can't wait for more!! \:wub\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 12, 2007 elopge wrote:

    This is so interesting!!! *goes to the next chapter*

    On Nov 20, 2007 Ajoya wrote:

    What an amazing story. You do a very well job. I just can't believe that I missed this story all this time. I'm only sad that the "Dark" ones had to go to hell. \:confused\: Not fair. Anyhow, keep up the awesome writing. 5 points Hun.\;\)

    On Dec 15, 2007 wrote:

    5.0 \:\)

    On Dec 15, 2007 Kenvjo wrote:

    very good! very creative!\:rah\:

    On Dec 16, 2007 Kenvjo wrote:

    good story \:\)

    On Dec 16, 2007 Katriona! wrote:

    So creative\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\: great,love it!\:wub\:

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