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The way back to heaven - Chapter 3

This is the third and final chapter of my "The way back to heaven" story. For those how don't know that English isn't my native language: Please forgive me my grammar mistakes :o)

The way back to heaven - Chapter 3

This is the third and final chapter of my "The way back to heaven" story. For those how don't know that English isn't my native language: Please forgive me my grammar mistakes :o) The fight between Lucifer and Manera begun. It was a balanced fight. Sometimes Manera could hit, sometimes Lucifer. "Oh no, why can't they stop?" Aria wondered desperately. "We could solve this problem without violence!" "Are you sure?" Ira wanted to know. "Look at him! He takes to it like a duck to water. His life is the life of violence, of dark and of the death. Maybe he treats you good, but he will never loose his bad and angry nature. Don't forget: He's the devil's son!" Aria looked at him, this man who said he had loved her. The fight still went on and an end didn't come into sight. "But people can change themselves!" she replied. "Don't you think so?"
"I think if you want to try it, it's a very big plan. I saw his destructive nature for many years and I don't think that anybody is able to change him."
This words shoked Aria. "But I shouldn't forget that he loves you." Ira said. "It's the very first time and maybe if you use your and his love, you could change him one day."
"Do you really think that?" Aria asked.
Ira nodded.
"I can't say how much strengh your words give to me." Aria told Ira. But the fight still went on. And now it was shown up that Lucifer hadn't use his full power at the beginning. He was getting stronger and stronger now. "Do you really think that you could defeat me?!" Manera shouted. She would never give up even her situation was the worst she ever had in a fight. She would fight until her death. "Yes, I think I can defeat you!" Lucifer said and he hit Manera with such a strengh on the head, that she lost her sword and she fell down. "That was it." Lucifer said. "Give up. You know I'm stronger than you."
"Why didn't you kill me?" Manera asked. "You had so many possibilities. Why didn't you take one?"
All noticed that the fire around Lucifer went out. "Because I want to change my life. I want to change me, for you, Aria. And that was a good beginning, I think." he looked to Aria. "Even there are some people who think I couldn't make it." Lucifer stared at Ira.
"I'm sorry for my words." she said. "But we should begin now, if you want to go back to heaven this night! The sun is going to rise and then I had to go back to my gravestone." Ira told them. Lucifer and Aria stood themselves on the place where Aria had arrived.
"Are you ready?" Ira asked. "Well, then let's start!"
And she began to pray. I didn't take much time and a big eddy appeared and then Lucifer and Aria disappeared ... ... and one second later they were in heaven. "We've made it!" Aria sai. "We are in heaven! I'm so happy!"
"Like me!" Lucifer replied.
In this moment the sun was rising.
"Aria! Where were you?" suddenly a voice shouted. It was Namor, Arias older brother.
"Where were you?" he asked again. "We searched after you one hole day and now you're here again but with this ... with this ... who is he? Please tell me he isn't from hell!" "Well ... it's a different to explain ..." Aria began.
"You don't need to be afraid." Namor calmed his sister. "Whatever happend, if there's a problem we will find a solution."
After this words Aria told him the hole story. " Well ... I will go to God and tell him your story." Namor said after he had heard what Aria and Lucifer had to say. "But I can't promise anything! Maybe you have to go back to hell Lucifer." Namor went to Lucifer.
"Do you really love my sister?" he wanted to know. "Say the truth if you want to stay here."
"I really love her." Lucifer told him. "I want to change me for her. She's everything I want and need."
"Good answer." Namor said satisfied. "I go to God now. Please wait here."
 After her brother left them alone, Aria embraced Lucifer.
"Now everything is going to come right."
And she was right. When Namor went back he told them that Lucifer was allowed to stay in heaven as long as Aria and Lucifer love themselves. After a year in heaven Lucifer proposed marriage to Aria and she said "Yes". They married on a beautiful day some weeks later. Two years later the little Aila was born. She had no wings, but the mother's skin and hair and the father's horns. She was a very cute girl and growed up fast. When she was old enough, Lucifer and Aria told her often how Lucifer came to heaven.
When her parents were so old that they couldn't care for themselves Aila took care for them. Aria and Lucifer lived together forever and neither of them regreted they had married.
And still after their peaceful death the people often talked about their way back to heaven. THE END

That was it! My first story! I hope you had so much fun reading it like I had making it! Please rate and give a comment so I can improve myself!

*Credits: Customs contens can be found under TSR, MTS2, InSIMenator.net, simsinparis.net and Forwardmotion's homepage.
A big THANK YOU to all creators for their great work!*

The way back to heaven - Chapter III

Apr 13, 2007 by sweetcharming
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    On Apr 13, 2007 slime wrote:

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO VERY GOOD 5 POINTS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 13, 2007 wrote:

    A really good ending!\:rah\:

    On Apr 13, 2007 oXBabyGurlXo wrote:

    wat a lovely n romantic story\:wub\:

    On Apr 13, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:

    SPOILER WARNING: I loved it, specially the concept of angels and demons having mortal lifetimes and growing old, the little girl wholooks like an angel with red eyes and horns which is bizarre and strangely cute is lovely too. As I always comment, the character skins are always amazing. Don't mind the language issues, the narration flowed very well. Congratulations on your first series and loved the ending, of how their relationship becomes memorable.

    On Apr 14, 2007 R.Quest wrote:

    Your characters are goregous, really loved the skins.. I think I know who the creator was.... I am sorry the story ended... but it was a good first story,, thanks for sharing.. and hope to see more from you ...You are a very creative.\:rah\:

    On Apr 14, 2007 muaxxx2004 wrote:

    EXCELLENT\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 14, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    Very excellent story!!!! \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:rah\: 5-points!!! \:rah\:

    On Apr 14, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:

    Woot woot!!!! me likey!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: 5.0!

    On Apr 14, 2007 lilqueennbri wrote:

    Great job.\:D

    On Apr 14, 2007 Alyosha wrote:

    Great! \:\) Keep it up! \;\)

    On Apr 14, 2007 wrote:

    awesome\:D 5.0

    On Apr 14, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:

    Excellent! \:D

    On Apr 15, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    It was such a lovely story!
    great job!
    I loved the pictures and the people.
    \:D

    On Apr 15, 2007 greeksim wrote:

    Great!...\:rah\:

    On Apr 15, 2007 amd11 wrote:

    you should make more stories like that........luved them!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    On Apr 15, 2007 amd11 wrote:

    sorry forgot 2 rate 5.0!\:rah\:

    On Apr 15, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:

    WOW I loved all three parts, great use of custom content, and your english is very good \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Apr 15, 2007 DIDA wrote:

    \:eek\: that was great!!!!!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: 5.0!!!!!!!=)

    On Apr 15, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:

    Lovely story!

    On Apr 16, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:

    Fantastic ending and beautiful story! I can't wait to see what you come up with next\:\)

    On Apr 18, 2007 Nyell wrote:

    Wow! Fantastic! I loved every part, and the end is great! 5.0!\:D

    On Apr 18, 2007 Nyell wrote:

    Sorry, forgot to rate\:P

    On Apr 18, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:\) A very creative first story, well told.

    On Apr 22, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:

    Nicely done, wonderfully told....great use of CC!\:D

    On Apr 30, 2007 ukiyo wrote:

    Fantastic story! Many thanks for sharing it! Their kid is adorable. \:D

    On May 4, 2007 wrote:

    very good story... was a pleasure reading the chpters flowed well \:rah\: \:rah\: \:\)

    On May 8, 2007 wrote:

    wonderful romantic story \:wub\:
    good chapter lenght and everything!
    thanks for a positive start of the day\:\)

    On May 9, 2007 K@ wrote:

    Amazing photos and gripping story! Thanks \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 16, 2007 Katriona! wrote:

    I would like to write more and more good coments for your fantastic story but my english are so so bad\:puke\: I jast read your first story and i get more impressed\:wub\: I don't know ware to begin... I just adore your good work\:wub\: There is samething i like to ask. How can it be posible for me to do anything like that? Can you please give me same instractions for biginers like me?

    On Jun 24, 2007 dianova wrote:

    On Jul 3, 2007 spooneroon wrote:

    that was a FANTASTIC story!!!! \:rah\: 4.5

    On Jul 4, 2007 wrote:

    Great work! I love the last shot, haha.

    On Jul 9, 2007 wrote:

    Great end! \:wub\:

    On Jul 26, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:

    Great for a first story! I saw a few mistakes, but as English is not your first language, it doseb't matter. 5/5!\:D

    On Aug 14, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    That was a good and peaceful ending ^^

    On Aug 15, 2007 Zayury wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: Fabulous ending to a fabulous story!! \:rah\: The entire story line was wonderful, you drew us close to the main characters and the ending was very romantic and sweet! The skintones you used were gorgeous, especially for the ghost Ira! Again, your action sequences and special effects were AMAZING! AWESOME STORY!! \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 12, 2007 elopge wrote:

    Aww! A Great ending! \:rah\:

    On Sep 18, 2007 sango1357 wrote:

    omg i loved the story it was awsome!\:rah\:
    i cant wait to read more of urs and soon i hope i could get some of mine up......oh wellz peace \:D

    On Nov 20, 2007 Ajoya wrote:

    *Breathless*\:P

    On Nov 26, 2007 sunny33 wrote:

    ohh really good!\:D !

    On Dec 16, 2007 Katriona! wrote:

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO VERY GOOD 5 POINTS\:wub\:

    On May 2, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Jul 16, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:cool\: you done a very great first story!very well done!\:rah\:

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