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Hi, This is my first story so far so please be nice.
This is a story about my mother, I just felt that my mother is always taking care of me, so i made a story about all mothers in the world.
I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT.
A poem about mothers
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27 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jan 5, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Jan 5, 2008 Zela wrote:
For a first story, it is great. The pictures are so clear! I loved the brother bit.
I hope you make more stories! 
-~- Zela
On Jan 5, 2008 qvisn wrote:
Good first try, lovely idea, we nearly all love our mothers. your screenshots are good, no plumbbobs showing and quite close up. The walls are up on your house, thats what we like to see, you done better than me on my first try, my pics were bad. well done, 5.0 for your efforts.
On Jan 5, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:
That was so sweet, you are a great daughter! I liked the funny bit in the end, typical brother, huh?! Looking forward to seeing more from you!
On Jan 5, 2008 wrote:
It's nice!! It's really sweet of you making this kind of thing.
On Jan 5, 2008 plushies_lovergg wrote:
Such a sweet story! And nice pictures too! Great job, so kind!
On Jan 5, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:
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On Jan 5, 2008 kecr101 wrote:
On Jan 5, 2008 jero22 wrote:
really nice story
On Jan 5, 2008 itachigirl wrote:
On Jan 5, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
Great first story!
On Jan 5, 2008 SpaciKathy wrote:
very lovely
On Jan 5, 2008 finsgirlie wrote:
that was very cute, i love your sims they are so pretty!!
On Jan 6, 2008 Babiliciousgal1 wrote:
beautiful and cute.
great job!!!
On Jan 6, 2008 BoodaMae wrote:
aww, So cute!
On Jan 6, 2008 wrote:
it was nice.
Your screenshots were amazing, so clear you must have a great computer er something!! 
On Jan 6, 2008 spicylove wrote:
the story was really good and the shots are awsome great over all story cant wait to read more
On Jan 6, 2008 AshGreg wrote:
cool story cant wait to see the next one
On Jan 6, 2008 Bury me deep inside your heart wrote:
Awww this poem is so sweet
Nice first try
On Jan 6, 2008 Aleeza wrote:
This is really sweet
Very good first story
On Jan 6, 2008 leifofdel wrote:
So sweet!
it!
On Jan 7, 2008 1ayotola1 wrote:
Aww..so cute
On Jan 8, 2008 seelindarun wrote:
Awwww, what a sweet poem!
Lovely, clear pictures, too. Awesome job! 
On Jan 10, 2008 .:Mary:. wrote:
Awwww. It's great
Lmao @John 
On Jan 11, 2008 Shannen124 wrote:
I loved it.
. Even though Im not a mother, and dont plan to be for at least 6 more years.
On Jan 21, 2008 cptnemo6 wrote:
very cool story
On Feb 28, 2008 civetinja wrote:
Thanks for sharing !