Ghostly vision. 1
Published Nov 18, 2009

Written By



Page 1 / 0

No description written...

Other Stories

Add a Comment

Please report any offensive comments so we can remove them. Use of bad language, unsuitable links or flaming may result in deletion of your account.

Add Smilie
Please log in to post comments

24 Comment(s) so far

Load more Comments New Comments are displayed at the bottom.

#15StoryNov 21, 2009

That was great. \:wub\: Wonder what happened at the end?

#16Little SeerNov 21, 2009

Good story.  Kept clicking for the next bit.  Very interesting.  Cheers \:\)

#17charrayNov 22, 2009

Great job on this story \:\)  5.0 \:rah\:

#18martoeleVIPNov 22, 2009

Hey luckyoyo. Congratulations. I don't mind the first long text, it explained a lot so in my opinion it's usefull. A 5.0 for you. I will stay tuned for the next chapters...

#19tonya99rnNov 23, 2009

A great start!! Can't wait for the next part!! You did a wonderful job of writing this! Great ending!! Hope you post the next part soon!!\:\)

#20DragonQueenNov 27, 2009

\:rah\:  Fantastic screenshots and a great story!  \:wub\: it!  I look forward to reading the rest!  \:D

#21EnthroxDec 2, 2009

Amazing. Loved it. Great job!

#22topaz27Dec 4, 2009

Wow, wonderful story, can't wait to read the next chapter now \:rah\: \:wub\:

#23mogan44May 5, 2010

Great story, the boy ghost reminds me of a Dr. Who episode " Are you my mummy?" .  Excited to read on!

#24Dec 23, 2010

great story

Ad-blocker plugin detected

We have detected that you are using an Ad-blocker plugin. This means our main source of income to cover bandwidth costs is blocked when you are using our free service. We would ask that you whitelist us and allow ads to show.

Anyone using an Ad-blocker plugin will be forced to wait 30 seconds instead of 10 on the "please wait" page.

VIP Membership

For as little as $3.50 per month you can become a VIP member. This lets you use our service free of all ads and unlocks access to our popular Download Basket and Quick Download features.

Become a VIP member now
Proceed to download

Log in to TSR

Sign in with Facebook

Not a Member yet?

Click here to Register now

Please wait - loading...