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Next Chapter of Prom Night,
Sorry it took me so long to add this.
Enjoy
Sorry it took me so long to add this.
Enjoy "Hey Leah, look at that house, wouldn't you love to live there? haha"
"Ryan, your not even funny. That place is creepy just keep driving."
"Oh, come on you know you want to come back here after prom to party. It looks empty. I could break a window to get in."
"Ryan, keep driving. Your are such a guy."
"Uh, I would if I could."
"What do you mean, if you could??"
To Leah's luck, Ryan's car suspisously broke down in front of the eerie abandoned household. "Wow good job Ryan. Messing things up again. I knew we shouldn't have let you drive. You probably broke your car on purpose so you can make me squirm It's like you enjoy my pain."
"Really? Break my car down on purpose? You think I would do that? I may be a goof off, but I'm not stupid."
"Whatever, I still think you planned it. I mean you didn't even dress up for prom. Senior Prom, the most important night of our high school career!" "It's just another dance. People dance the whole night then go to a party afterwards and have fun. I can do that any night, dance or no dance."
"Ughh, Ryan your impossible. Just fix your car."
While Leah walked off her anger Ryan went to go take a look at his car and the others discuss the situation they are stuck in. "This is a mess! We have to get to prom like now. I have to get that crown. I have been waiting to win since I was born- no I have been waiting to win since I was conceived. Tonight is my life. Angel, fix this! Your a guy, you know cars. Help Ryan, he looks hopeless."
"I'm sorry my love, I don't know cars. I apologize if I've let you down. But if we do not make it then I can assure you, you will always be my queen." "Well how sweet. However you won't annouce me your queen in front of several people. And you won't give me a pretty crown and give me the special dance of the night with all eyes on me. So, I'm sorry but I do not accept."
As little miss Prom Queen rallies on about how much getting to Prom is necassary for her, the cute couple of Kimberly and Carter comfort each other in the situation. "Do you think we will make it to prom?"
"I hope so, it all depends on how well Ryan is with cars and whether or not whats wrong with it requires tools and stuff."
"All I know is that we ended up in the worst possible spot to break down. There isn't another house for miles and this one is empty." "Well if we are stuck here tonight, and we do miss prom. I promise you I will throw you your own prom. You deserve a special night and I can't let Ryan's car problems ruin that."
"Oh, Carter your too sweet. (:" "Neh, I'm just in love with you and I'd do anything to make you happy." Off to the side was Aubrey, shivering in fear. "I don't trust this place, I don't trust it one bit."
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#1 On Jun 4, 2010 martoele wrote:
#2 On Jun 4, 2010 martoele wrote:
Oh.... and CONGRATULATIONS on having the story featured!
#3 On Jun 4, 2010 Mangio wrote:
how did the car just break down in front of the eerie house... i would be Aubrey too. Kimberly and Carter are the dream couple
they look so cute together, cant wait for more.
#4 On Jun 4, 2010 oldmember_Cezy wrote:
interesting story
#5 On Jun 4, 2010 YrS92 wrote:
Great chapter, can't wait for more
#6 On Jun 4, 2010 plyangel456 wrote:
Cute story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
#7 On Jun 8, 2010 tammy001 wrote:
luv it
#8 On Jun 25, 2010 mogan44 wrote:
This is getting good!
#9 On Jan 2, 2011 wrote:
great story thank you