If you haven't read the earlier parts yet or need a refresher here's the story so far:
Because the narrator Jake Jarvis suffers from writer's block, he had recently moved to Sparklewood. His daily deliveries of buns and milk appear to be stolen each morning. During one night he notices a large shadow running from his garden. He is drawn to lights at the house of his neighbour Mrs. Roosebud, but upon entering he is thrown out by her.
While checking facts for a new story at the library Jake learns that his house is built on a so-called fairy ground. The previous inhabitant left because of odd accidents long ago. A second effort to befriend his neighbour Mrs. Rosebud fails miserably. The next night he lays in wait for the milk thief, but misses him. The same night sees him getting back to writing again, although he develops some suspicions about his motivations.
The police doesn't take him seriously after he had revealed he's a writer and suspects fairies to be at work. Frustrated he cancels all orders. In the afternoon a Mr. Miller visits him and urges him to move out because of impending fairy activities, but Jake doesn't take him serious. In the early morning the police officier Pauline Harker wakes him up, because she had secretly (but in vain) watched for the milk thief. After a shared breakfast they agree to declare the case as unsolved, but closed.
In the early afternoon he discovers someone has destroyed the tires of his car. Next to his car he finds a large banknote. A few hours later he is arrested because he seemingly tried to pay for the new tires with counterfeit money. He is brought to the police station where he is questioned for several hours.
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#6 On Nov 15, 2010 fredbrenny wrote:
...ooops... should be questions there...
#7 On Nov 15, 2010 Ben72006 wrote:
Great story and I am hope things get better for him.
#8 On Nov 15, 2010 YrS92 wrote:
Yay, it's featured
I loved this update but that Jake... Seriously, he should go out and do something instead of just asking questions
But then, I suppose his character wouldn't be as entertaining as it is now
Brilliant job there Flatter
#9 On Nov 16, 2010 spitzmagic wrote:
((((Flatter)))) I love it, congrats on this featured chapter...I just knew she would come to his rescue...
I love screen 17 it was if he was actually leaning on the counter with his elbow...drinking his coffee...love the way you write, pulls the reader right into the story...
#10 On Nov 16, 2010 ShelleyB wrote:
#11 On Nov 17, 2010 Mangio wrote:
Congrats on having it featured, i'm glad Miss Haker was there to save him in time
Is it really the fairies doing? I wonder if Miss Haker will be more than a friend, can't wait for more
Well written and shot too
#12 On Nov 18, 2010 fabrizioammollo wrote:
Great pictures and a wonderful story! I enjoy the most Jake thinking and fears: you give him such a depth!
#13 On Nov 21, 2010 RatRaceRob wrote:
Alas, our Jake is as much a victim of his own internal worries as he is of tormenting faeries! I am reminded in this chapter of Jake's original reason for coming to Sparklewood-- his worries over the dread writer's block... he better get out of his head and into the faerie-proof bunker soon, lol, and take that cute-hat-wearing Miss Harker in there with him
... but seriously, a thought-provoking chapter, peeking deep into our stumbling hero's brain again... I so did imagine him wringing his hands at that window in #21 as he stood there questioning his motives for not meeting his publisher
... very well-written chapter, I can only wonder (and worry!!!) over what will shake up poor Jake next! And of course... a much-deserved congratulations for your feature
#14 On Dec 8, 2010 SimplySarah wrote:
They were all nice i liked them. thank you for your sims being dessed in decent clothes.
#15 On Dec 9, 2010 jaywhitt wrote: