The Golden Child -- (2)

| Hide | Delete #13 On Oct 7, 2011 fruitopia wrote:

I believe that I may know who the goldedn child is, but I am going to keep that 2 myself, I have to see how the story develops.  James good riidence to you.  
Great chapter, enoyed reading waiting for more.

| Hide | Delete #14 On Oct 7, 2011 spitzmagic wrote:

Awesome chapter...loved the screens and this is so entertaining. I think I would have stayed on the bike with the captain.

| Hide | Delete #15 On Oct 8, 2011 Catiarp wrote:

I knew I wasn't wrong! If the «Golden Child» really is Xavier, then I'm right! Yeah! Uh, right...    Awesome chapter, anyways! I'm dying to see how Xavier is going to save his butt from this mess 

| Hide | Delete #16 On Oct 8, 2011 urm0m wrote:

Aww James is a gentleman!

| Hide | Delete #17 On Oct 16, 2011 Shokky wrote:

A brilliant story!
Thank you!

| Hide | Delete #18 On Oct 20, 2011 RatRaceRob wrote:

Xavier is just... awesome LOL ... along with Rear Admiral Howard (love the "You FOOL!" in #6; he is so not wrong about that)... and will the budding romance between Trish and Captain Killinger be squashed like a bug beneath the plummeting meteor ?!  I'm sure we'll all know the answer long before Xavier's dad does...

| Hide | Delete #19 On Oct 26, 2011 Ben72006 wrote:

Love this story as well

| Hide | Delete #20 On Oct 29, 2011 xhaii wrote:

great story! i love the bubbles lol! hooray for xavier xD..

| Hide | Delete #21 On Nov 4, 2011 lillypad625 wrote:

love it! xavier is too funny

| Hide | Delete #22 On Nov 9, 2011 BuffSumm wrote:

Cooooool... just can't write much - need to read the 3rd part Thank you