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This is my story CRUSH part 1, I hope everyone likes it, I haven't written stories in a while. And story names are SO hard to think of, haha. Well, Enjoy(: Any questions just ask!
"Kasey?, KASEY!!" Loud screeches appeared to linger across my ears, Must of been my mother.
"Yes, Mom?" I replied, hesitantly, I can only imagine what she wanted now.
"I don't know how many times I have told you to STRAIGHTEN up your room!?" She yelled.
"W-What do you mean?.. Mom, we only moved here so many days ago, my room should be spotless?.." I could hear my sisters little giggles in the background of the yelling. She was up to something once again. I pointed an angry finger at my sister..
"It was Brittany!! She was in my room again! She does it on- " I told my mother.
" IT WAS NOT ME! " she yelled, her face quickly turning angry.
" Kasey, stop blaming your sister for YOUR faults. Now, Go clean your room! "
I got up and walked to my room, angry as usual, my sister always stealing things from my room as if she owns it. Always getting me into trouble.. I just finished my room, and changed into my PJ's, before I heard laughing outside my bedroom door.. I silently opened my bedroom door to find my sister, with some.. New boy?.. For some odd reason I'd found myself being very shy. He was cute! But I knew I couldn't talk to him, otherwise, Brittany would again tell mom I am trying to steal her friends, so I continued back to my room, trying to strain my brain to keep away from this boy. After a few hours of sitting in my room, The house got silent, They must've left. I finally decided I would stay away from this boy at all costs. Besides, I'm too young to like anybody! I got up, to finally leave my room, I couldn't ignore the sounds of my grumbling stomach much longer, And mom wasn't making dinner tonight, she left, for a date, she probably won't be back tonight.. I walked out of my room, and realized that I had gone too far. I was noticed.
"Oh! Jake, I almost forgot, This, Is my sister, Kasey." My sister blurted out.
" Ehh, Uhm, Hey?.. " I managed to let some odd sentence escape from my lips, and I smiled shyly..
" Hi.. " He glanced at me, his warm eyes locking onto mine, as if he were curious, and observing me.
" Well, I'm gonna go?.. I'll see you later..." I left my head gazing the ground, trying not to look back up at him. "Bye!" My little feet tapped as I quickly walked back to my room..
He seemed so curious as to why I was gazing the ground, and not looking at him. "Hey so.. Whats up with your sister?.." Jake questioned Brittany
" What do you mean?.. Has she said anything weird to you, cause, she is weird and all.." Brittany giggled at her own joke.
" No..No... She is just, so silent..? I-I mean, she doesn't like to hang out?.. "
Brittany laughed " Jake, Listen, she probably just doesn't like you. I mean usually she would've hung around..She just doesn't like you. " Brittany lied.
..That night my sister came into my room, and woke me up.
"You listen here, Kasey.. Don't talk to Jake!" she sounded scared
I blinked my eyes sleeplessly
"What are you talking about?..And what are you doing my room?.."
Brittany just rolled her eyes and scolded me
"You know exactly what I'm talking about! JAKE is MINE! I found him FIRST!"
"Brittany! First off, Jake isn't a TOY! You cant CLAIM him to be YOURS! Second, You shouldn't be so worried about me taking your 'boyfriend' I mean, I'm the ugly one, Right?" I giggled.. Knowing that she knew I was prettier than her, she was worried.
"Uuugh! Just SHUT UP!" She stormed out of my room, angrier than ever.
The very next day I got up, feeling pretty okay. I took a shower than ran out to get the mail. There was no Brittany in sight, I figured she was with 'JAKEE' hehe.
As I began to walk back to the Apartment, I noticed someone running up to me, Brittany?..
No..Jake! I had to think fast, I covered my face not realizing how stupid I looked.
"Uhh?.. Kasey?..." He looked confused.
I put my hand down and flashed him a fake smile.
"Well, Hey, Jake. What are YOU doing out here..Right...Now?.." I narrowed my eyes at him awaiting his answer.
"Uhh, The mail?.."
"...Oh!.. Ohhh! Sorry, Then I will let you get your... 'MAIL.' " I walked away quickly..
" Wait! "
I stopped, thinking to myself "Greeeat." I hesitated to keep moving, But turned.
"Yeah?.."
"Hey, I thought maybe you wanted to hang out...Or something?.." He seemed so SWEET! All I wanted was to go back home! But how could I say no?.. Next thing I know I'm sitting down with him talking.
"So, Kasey, Why don't you hang out with, your sister and I?.."
"Well, If you didn't know, Me and my sister aren't exactly..'friends.' "
"..Ohhh. Because she told me-" I cut him off
"Let me guess, That I don't like you?.. Or I think you smell, Or something stupid?.."
"Yeah..She said you didn't like me...?" He smiled, almost as if he believed her.
I sighed "Figures..She always does this to me."
"Oh. Well. Its okay. I didn't believe her."
I finally realized that I had been talking to him for too long already.
"Oh! Well I must go! I have things to do!"
"..Wait!... Kasey!?"
I ran quickly across the concrete, hearing him close behind me.
"I must go! Sorry!!" "Kasey! Watch out!" He yelled
I quickly glanced up only to smash straight into the wall. Dropping hard to the floor my hands hit the hard concrete, as my head followed...
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32 Comment(s) posted so far
On Dec 7, 2009 Mikaylee wrote:
Hopefully Everyone Likes this! (: , Part two should be coming tomorrow. (:
On Dec 10, 2009 Soragirlamy wrote:
That was a great start. I was having trouble figuring out whether they're kids or not--that's how grown up they look. Can't wait for part two!
On Dec 10, 2009 staceface2009p wrote:
aww this is such a sweet little story, you're off to a very good start. Can't wait for Part 2.
On Dec 10, 2009 omik79 wrote:
OUCH! That had to hurt! Great start! Cant wait to read more....
On Dec 10, 2009 vampirekizzez wrote:
lol i luv it great chapter!! cant wait to read more!!
On Dec 10, 2009 nomienu wrote:
cute..great start!
On Dec 10, 2009 Janciic wrote:
Nice story.
On Dec 10, 2009 hejbojs123 wrote:
Niice
On Dec 10, 2009 alienman wrote:
its cute, i guess britany will have her deserts...cant wait for the next xp
On Dec 10, 2009 martoele wrote:
Good start! Continue this way...
- Margo
On Dec 10, 2009 madkitty13 wrote:
Ow! Sounds like something I would do!
On Dec 10, 2009 pinkglitter11 wrote:
so cute awwww
i think im in love with this!
On Dec 11, 2009 Ktanaqui wrote:
Wow. Amazing. I loved it. 5/5
There isn't any issues that I can pick up on. Awesome job.
On Dec 11, 2009 bre4eva wrote:
On Dec 11, 2009 rubystone77 wrote:
Good story!
On Dec 11, 2009 candy820 wrote:
Kasey is so cute. Great start
On Dec 11, 2009 Golden97 wrote:
Good Chapter
Cant wait for chapter 2 
On Dec 12, 2009 Simfanatic wrote:
WAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?!? I WANNA KNOW!!!
On Dec 12, 2009 xxheartlessxx12 wrote:
Sweet, cute story!!!!! I'm so eager for the next chapter!!!! I hope you'll write more!
On Dec 12, 2009 blossom6676 wrote:
thats so cute! i hope Kasey ends op with him, not the evil twin sis! cant wait for the next part!! hurry
On Dec 12, 2009 Parisleaf wrote:
Great Start!
Can't wait for the next part!! 
On Dec 13, 2009 irene_busy wrote:
Nice story, great start
On Dec 18, 2009 kattsand wrote:
I really liked this! Your way of writing is just the way I want it to be, easy and comfortable
On Dec 21, 2009 simsfreak10555 wrote:
Ahh... Siblingly love.....:P
On Jan 12, 2010 martoele wrote:
Hey, I noticed that I read and commented your story already. Well, never mind; now you have some more kudos. Lol.
On Feb 5, 2010 charray wrote:
Great story
5.0 
On Feb 7, 2010 Chloézzta wrote:
Great story and i was just wondering if i could Carry on your story
On Feb 24, 2010 artsysimaddict wrote:
Wonderful! I loved it! When's part 2 coming out? Poor Kasey....her sister's meanish. Very good dialogue, and good ideas. Yay!
On Mar 1, 2010 LilJo wrote:
sooo cute (: cannot wait for next part
On Apr 10, 2010 jonas_fan12345 wrote:
please make prt 2 i have waited soooooooooooooo long
On Apr 10, 2010 jonas_fan12345 wrote:
when r u making prt 2?
On Jun 3, 2010 angelamavreas wrote:
when is part 2??? plz soon!!!!
but great start