Firstly, I'd like to take the time to thank everyone who read or commented on the first part of this story! I'm so glad you're liking it! ... Anyway, here's part two- and don't forgetto visit my profile!
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On Feb 28, 2009 gamrlrg wrote:
I really like your stories!! I just wish that they were a little bit longer!
On Feb 28, 2009 Warrayfinson wrote:
Yay, part 2! I love dinosaurs, I have these figures of them somewhere, I lost them a long time ago!
Anway, great work again, hoping to see more soon! 5.0! 
Keep Creating!!
On Feb 28, 2009 NoNameAtAll wrote:
Wow this is good AMAZING I love the detail to the story and the emotion it is very intreging, love it, can wait for more!!!
5.0
On Feb 28, 2009 Nox Noctis Dea wrote:
Loved the first part and I love this too! post more soon!
On Feb 28, 2009 candy820 wrote:
Awesome !!!! Once again.
On Feb 28, 2009 candy820 wrote:
Awesome !!!! Once again.
On Feb 28, 2009 DiddakoiGirl wrote:
Just as great as the first! I love that your sims look like real people, and not like models. I wish I could let myself make sims like that!
On Feb 28, 2009 Ariana31Player wrote:
Great follow up!!!
On Feb 28, 2009 eshuff wrote:
Extraordinary writing. Mature, polished and affecting without resorting to pathos or the usual worn-out plots. Absolutely astonishing!
On Mar 1, 2009 fredbrenny wrote:
Thank you for the story, It makes me want to read on, so I can't wait for the next part!
On Mar 1, 2009 damnanoir wrote:
love it! really interesting. waiting for the next part ^^
rated:FIVE!!!!!!
On Mar 1, 2009 jarlet wrote:
enthralling tale! can't wait for more!thanks for sharing!
On Mar 2, 2009 aburke wrote:
I love this! keep creating because we all have to know more.
On Mar 2, 2009 paotreta wrote:
I loved it!! What happened to James'mother??
On Mar 3, 2009 Little Cloud wrote:
I liked it, but what happened to James' mother?
On Mar 4, 2009 VitaPrivata wrote:
Great story!!
On Mar 5, 2009 Murphy75 wrote:
Okay, now I can't wait until the next chapter to see what happened???
On Mar 6, 2009 Midnight222 wrote:
Great story but who had been at the front door at the end of the 1st chapter? Does it have something to do with Jame's mum?
Really well written!
On Apr 10, 2009 shady411 wrote:
Once again awesome job done on part 2!