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Based on a true story....



(Not really :D) I hope you enjoy!!!!! Comment what you like and what you don't like.

Before you get into the story. you should listen to the song "I was here" by Beyonce. You'll further understand the story

Based on a true story....



(Not really :D) I hope you enjoy!!!!! Comment what you like and what you don't like.

Before you get into the story. you should listen to the song "I was here" by Beyonce. You'll further understand the story Braydon and Olivia were a happy, loving couple. If they had problems they'd solve them right away. Nothing stood between the two. One day, Braydon decided to treat Olivia to dinner considering she'd just got a promotion at her job. As they stood on the beach, Braydon told her how much he loved her and how much he wanted to be with her. "Olivia, I'm standing here with the most beautiful girl in the world. I never ever thought I'd meet someone like you. I love you," he explained to her. She smiled.
 He told her that they were going to have dinner on the beach. Not that same beach they were standing on but another one that had a clear view of stars. She was very excited. "Braydon, I've never had a dinner on the beach before," she said really happy. "Well today is your lucky day," Braydon told her. They left the beach in the backyard and headed towards the car. The two of them were both very hungry. Before they left, Olivia hugged Braydon real tight. It was a hug that lasted about 30 seconds. While hugging, she whispered something in his ear. "Braydon, I'll love you forever. You make me happy everyday. I'll never find someone like you. Please never leave me. Promise me you'll be with me forever. Until death do us part, even after that!" Braydon whispered back in her ear. "I promise." The two headed off to Braydon's second private beach he owned that was only an hour away. Braydon came from a really wealthy family. Olivia was very lucky to have met such a man. She wanted to hold on forever. And that's what she had planned to do. When the two arrived, Olivia screamed out, "I'll race you to the beach." She took off, then Braydon followed. They ran up a long sidewalk. Braydon began to run out of breathe but Olivia had enough stamina to make it. It was a beautiful night and the two new they'd have the time of their lives. Nothing to fancy. "You're lucky you ran track in college, or else I would've beat you," Braydon said then began to laugh. She hugged him tight and laughed along to. They sat down and began their dinner on the beach. It was the most romantic night for the soon to be wedded couple. A night they'd never forget. The two slow danced as the song, I Was Here by Beyonce played. That, for some reason, was Olivia's favorite song. It was weird that it had played when it turned on, but she didn't put it past her. She just kept dancing, holding on to the one she loved. After the song ended, the two decided it was getting late and they should drive home. They did. Of course, this time Braydon had to beat her up the hill to the car. Olivia claimed she let him win. "Thanks so much for tonight. I had an amazing time. We definitley have to do that again before the wedding. The food was just right!," Olivia thanks Braydon. Braydon leaned in for a little kiss that turned into a romantic kissing session. Olivia had forgoten she was driving. A small black car started to pull out of its driveway. Olivia hadn't noticed it until they stopped kissing. BAM! She'd ran right into the front of the car. . . . Olivia, now killed in the crash, floated up to heaven. Braydon was left with a bloody body and Olivia was left with the memories. She wanted to come back to earth so bad but her spirit kept drifting away. She grabbed and grabbed for life but death overtook her. She faught and faught and managed to catch on to a little bit of it. All good souls go to heaven, but Olivia wasn't ready. She wanted to be with Braydon....Forever. She wanted to make sure he met no new woman. She wanted him to remember her. So she stayed. A soul... a ghost... a stalker. She never wanted to be FADED.

Faded

Aug 15, 2011 by booker167
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    4 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 16, 2011 macandiredd wrote:

    WOW! That was beautiful, I listen to the song on youtube while reading!!!!!!!

    On Aug 18, 2011 urm0m wrote:

    Aww so sad!

    On Aug 18, 2011 booker167 wrote:

    Thank you! Should I make a number two

    On Aug 24, 2011 RavenRave95 wrote:

    Pretty good stuff. Encore Encore.

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