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Hallelujah! Finally I have time to make my new story. It doesn't mean that I now quit 'Our Little Secret' .. But I have alot of troubles with the finale of that one.
I'm sorry for the stupid cover of this story.. GHEHEH :D but please, ENJOY!
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24 Comment(s) posted so far
On Feb 7, 2009 candy820 wrote:
Great Start. Looks like they done something wrong.
On Feb 7, 2009 atangki wrote:
Looks interesting.
On Feb 7, 2009 smiley00girl wrote:
Great intro! Can't wait for more!!!
On Feb 7, 2009 DiddakoiGirl wrote:
Wow, if this is the intro I can't wait to see the rest!
Everything was perfect! 
5.0!
On Feb 7, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:
You capture my interest, good suspence, great shots.
On Feb 7, 2009 narniana wrote:
Awesome start,loved the screenshots and..can't wait for more!!!
On Feb 7, 2009 tykijones wrote:
question how did you get her to jump off the stairs? but i loved it so much cant wait for the next part
On Feb 7, 2009 stephanie1225 wrote:
Sounds like this is going to be a cool story
On Feb 7, 2009 gamrlrg wrote:
Great Intro! Sounds like it's gonna be great!!!
On Feb 7, 2009 jennnnnie02 wrote:
Ah. You're amazing. Only you would be able to make a nine page story this amazing. Let me know if you'd like to switch talent one of these days!
On Feb 8, 2009 SkylaneRose wrote:
Love the pictures ya did n.n
On Feb 8, 2009 debbie1 wrote:
great introduction cant wait for more
On Feb 8, 2009 milk_icecreama wrote:
Cool, although it's just an intro
The twins're so amazing. But I'm still looking forward to our little secret, when will you finish it?
anyway, I think this story will be the best replacement of our little secret
On Feb 8, 2009 Etnik13 wrote:
Great job!
On Feb 8, 2009 milk_icecreama wrote:
ah,forgot rating
, thanks for the cap, hope you remember it 
On Feb 8, 2009 misha1013 wrote:
great so far:P
On Feb 9, 2009 charray wrote:
Great job on this story
On Feb 9, 2009 shady411 wrote:
Great/ Interesting intro...waiting to read more!
On Feb 18, 2009 jtedit08 wrote:
cool, good shots but how did you get her to fall?
On Mar 11, 2009 mad4u19 wrote:
Nice intro
On Mar 13, 2009 stariray04 wrote:
cool!
On Apr 6, 2009 omik79 wrote:
Looks interesting...
looking forward to the next series
On May 27, 2009 Laurenmc143 wrote:
Pretty good, I'll be waiting for the rest. The shots went along with the story very nicely. Good work!
On Oct 31, 2009 Neko Sims wrote:
That was pretty cool!
I'm looking forward to the next series!