Back
Forgotten Redemption: Chap 6, part 1
Published Apr 5, 2009


Written By

Warrayfinson

Storyteller
5840Views4.6Rating

Page 1 / 24

HI EVERYONE!!
I know once again it has been a long time but I'm back now and ready to upload this part of the story. Sorry I had to make it in parts again, but this chapter was a atad too big to upload at once. I'll try my best to upload the entire chapters as single chapters and not two parts. But anyway, thiank you to everyone who commented on the last part, I really appreicate your comments guys! I hope you like this part of chapter 6! Read on...

HI EVERYONE!!
I know once again it has been a long time but I'm back now and ready to upload this part of the story. Sorry I had to make it in parts again, but this chapter was a atad too big to upload at once. I'll try my best to upload the entire chapters as single chapters and not two parts. But anyway, thiank you to everyone who commented on the last part, I really appreicate your comments guys! I hope you like this part of chapter 6! Read on...
"She's becoming a threat," she said "Your plan is failing, master." She knew he was listening to her even if his back was turned to her. As much as she hated her job she couldn't quit it anytime soon. "No, my plan is going according to plan," he replied, his voice colder then usual "In fact it's going so well, I think I might celebrate. Shyama, did you give her the nightmare?" She felt her expression change to something of regret "I did, master." He smiled "Good... You can go now" Shyama turned around "Oh, and one more thing..." She turned back to him "Yes?" "Don't doubt me and my plans. I am the one in control here and I know what I am doing. Doubt me again one more time, and THEY'LL be punished!" That was the last thing she wanted for them... "Hey, you cheated!" "No I didn't, just accept the fact you lost!" "That does it I demand a re-match bird boy!" "Fine, but your only wasting you time..." Well, this was indeed an interesting afternoon. Lilly came up with the idea with instead of fighting each other, Dylan and Ryan would play an X-box game instead. I wasn't sure what it was but I think it was called Tekken 4. And in the background was Paul dancing very strangely like he was some tribal man. The music was somethign you would use to dance to the cha-cha with. I hadn't seen the Howarths for five days now, it was because I was at home cleaning. The house was a little out of order because I was arriving home late. I usually arrive home at seven o'clock, that was about an hour before Holly got home. Holly had met someone at a club and now she goes out later then usual. But that still doesn't give me the right to act the way I do. I should really be getting home earlier. I mean she is my aunty and if it weren't for her I wouldn't be living in her house.The least I could do to show her my gratitude was to clean and maintain the house. But then again, mum's advise was stuck in my head, and I knew that I couldn't go against mums; because in a way, her advise seemed to help me. Her advise always had a happy ending to it... "I told you, it was a waste of your time..." Ryan said with a sigh. Dylan made a strange growling sound in his throat. Lilly back at him with worry. He clentched his fist. Lilly's expression soothed and she turned her attention back to TV screen. Dylan was still fuming "Another re-match, or else..." Ryan looked up "No, I have other things to do instead of verus you!" "I have an idea!" We all looked to Lilly. She continued "We could have a re-match, but this time, we have a prize for the winner." "And what prize would this be?" Ryan asked with a raised eyebrow. "The prize can be...hmm...um, eh...a kiss on the cheek from Samantha!" HUH?! Did she just say what I thought she said? I...kiss...um, eh....DAH!! I was going to kiss one of these to guys on either side of me?! I...Oh God! I felt my cheeks darken and my face become very hot. "Okay, I'm up for that." I looked ot Ryan and a weird sound came out of my mouth. It sounded like I was partly choking but it sounded surprised. Did Ryan just say what I thought he said? I felt my cheeks burn and grow darker. "Fine, but I'm only in for it to beat you, bird boy!" Dylan said loudly. They picked new characters and started a new game. I looked to either sde of me seeing they had their eyes focused with determination in their eyes. A FEW MINUTES LATER...
"Yes!" Ryan yelled victoriously. Dylan slammed his fist into he controller "Damn it all!" Then I began ot panic; I was about to kiss Ryan on the cheek. Dah, help! Lilly stood up from the floor with a wicked grin on her face "Well, pucker on the cheek!" The music died down in the background and Paul stopped dancing as he watched me stand up. What was I panicking about, it was just a kiss on the cheek. It wasn't like I was kissing him on the lips or something, although I wonder...Dah, what the, where did that last bit come from?!
I stood up feeling that sitting down wasn't going to help, but my legs started to feel shaky. Ryan then stood up. So I slowly leaned foward towards his cheek. As I did Lilly and Paul were cheering and clapped. From the corner of my eye I could see that Paul was dancing and jumping around with excitment. I finally kissed Ryans warm cheek. Then Lily cheered louder and clapped. When I pulled back Ryan was grinning like crazy. "That has got to be the best prize I have ever won!" he said his grin widening. I felt my cheeks turn completely pink so I ducked my head as Ryan went over to Lilly. She started congradulating him like he'd won a trophy or something. I looked up just in time to see Dylan walk out of the room "Dylan..." I quietly called out. I felt a little guilty now. Didn't Dylan deserve something for his effort. I followed him into the hallway. I looked down the hallway to se he had stopped halfway down. I took a step to my left so I was in lined with him "Dylan, I,um...are you okay?" He turned around shaking slightly as he did "Why are you following?! Why do you care?! Are you mental or something?! You think you have problems with your aunt and your parents dead?! What is it with you?! "Stop following my everyone. Just stay away from you stupid girl!" I was speechless. I gasped when I felt tears rim my eyes. "I,um,I...I'm really sorry..." I felt my legs move under me and the next thing I knew I was running towards the front door. Behind me I heard footsteps coming form the lounge room. "Sam, are you...Samantha!" Lilly said with concern. "What did you do?" I heard Ryan say angrily. They must have heard the what was going on. "I'm sorry..." I whispered to myself pushing the sliding door aside. I ran outside with tears finally escaping. "Wait,I..." Dylan never finished his sentence as he saw her escape. She turned to Ryan. She noticed he was shaking slightly, that wasn't good. "Ryan, calm down" she whispered. Ryan turned around back to where Dylan stood. "Big mistake..." His voice seemed to remain calm and the vibrations in his body eased. Dylan spun around in a defencive position "You want so of this?!" he shout angrily. She walked out with a look of worry and concern still on her face. Once she was gone Dylan charged toward Ryan at full speed... "He nearly did it, Paul" she said quietly. Paul looked at her confused "Did I miss something?" "Well, Dylan got mad and stomped off, but then Sam went out to find him, I guess she was really worried. But he let all his anger out on Sam. Then, when she ran off Ryan and I came out. I turned to Ryan and he was...shaking. It nearly happened, Paul, he nearly did it..." Paul ducked his head pinching the bridge of his nose. "Dylan, why does he always have to cause such havoc? He really needs to learn to control his temper or else he'll regret it one day." Paul looked back up at Lilly, his face a mixture of anger and thought "One of these days I'll...I don't know." His expression then softened "As for Ryan don't worry about him. I know he can control himself. His Maledictioforma isn't that strong, he got lucky. Dylan, though, I have to say it's the only time I actually feel sorry for him..." Lilly nodded "Just be glad you weren't there when you saw it..." NEXT PART IS COMING SOON, ONCE AGAIN SORY FOR THE WAIT! THANKS FOR READING!!
Keep Creating and Siming!! ;)

Other Stories

Add a Comment

Please report any offensive comments so we can remove them. Use of bad language, unsuitable links or flaming may result in deletion of your account.

Add Smilie
Please log in to post comments

21 Comment(s) so far


Load more Comments New Comments are displayed at the bottom.

#12martaerikaApr 6, 2009

nice

#13EvaaDJApr 6, 2009

I just love ittt \:wub\:  You have great ideas! Keep continuing!!

#14jennnnnie02Apr 6, 2009

His what?! Ah! I love this story. It's like the best one ever.(: Waiting for the next one!

#15charrayApr 6, 2009

Awesome part \:rah\:  Great job as always \:\)

#16QGApr 7, 2009

what almost happened? who got what dream, who are those two people in the beginning??? WHat? it's too damn short! you raised so many questions! *hooked*\:rah\: I love it! haha

#17Aurora_UApr 7, 2009

I really like your stories, all of them \:D
Hurry up with the next one!

#18SuperStar94Apr 9, 2009

Ooooh very interesting! I look forward to the next part \:wub\:

#19QuinnieApr 10, 2009

Edge of the seat drama. Can't wait for the next chapter. Have a great Easter and stay safe. Michelle

#20fabrizioammolloApr 22, 2009

I can tastethe magical plot...

#21justvexApr 26, 2009

\:wub\: Poor Sam only trying to help. Love it fantastic chapter.\:rah\:

Ad-blocker plugin detected

We have detected that you are using an Ad-blocker plugin. This means our main source of income to cover bandwidth costs is blocked when you are using our free service. We would ask that you whitelist us and allow ads to show.

Anyone using an Ad-blocker plugin will be forced to wait 30 seconds instead of 10 on the "please wait" page.


VIP Membership

For as little as $3.50 per month you can become a VIP member. This lets you use our service free of all ads and unlocks access to our popular Download Basket and Quick Download features.

Become a VIP member now
Proceed to download

Log in to TSR



Sign in with Facebook

Not a Member yet?

Click here to Register now

Close This Window

Close This Window

Please wait - loading...