Stories / Forgotten Redemption:Chap 3, part 1
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Hey everyone! Sorry this chapter took longer than usual to get out but it's the weekend now so YAY! Anyway, thanks for all the comments on the last chapter guys, sorry I didn't get to thank you all personally I was really busy and I didn't get enough time. Anyway, I hope you all like this chapter.

Hey everyone! Sorry this chapter took longer than usual to get out but it's the weekend now so YAY! Anyway, thanks for all the comments on the last chapter guys, sorry I didn't get to thank you all personally I was really busy and I didn't get enough time. Anyway, I hope you all like this chapter. 'Hm, nice day out'
 The door slid open "Hey" "Hey, Lil" Ryan smiled, she smiled back "What are you doing out?" "Just thought I'd go for a fly about." "Right, just remember to keep in the area. Anything else?" "Well," he began "Paul said he was going to tell HIM about Samantha..." Her smiled dropped "He's doubting she can keep the secret?! We should do something! Why didn't you try to convince him not to tell HIM?" "Hey, hey, hey, you know as well as I do that even if they promise to keep the secret that we have to let HIM know about it. If he somehow found out we would get punished for it. You know what he does, he can make us sick within ten seconds! She's better off without remebering us..." "So what, you saying you WANT her to get hypontized? You want her to become one of those drones? You want her to serve the Magician as some unknown servant? You want her to forget us and her whole life and her family?! You want her to-" "No, that's not what I mean! What I mean is, she was better off never finding us. She wouldn't have to be hypnotize to forget everything or find out about the curse. I, don't want to see her get hurt, I just don't..." She smiled "Don't go all lovey-dovey on me..." "Yeah I - hey, what the? Of course I'm not going lovey-dovey! I jus care about what happens to her" "Alright, whatever you say. So, you going for that fly about or not?" "Yeah...I'll be back soon." With that said Ryan ran towrds the edge of the veranda and within seconds was gone. 'Lovey-dovey' she thought 'Ryan and Samantha, sounds good...'
50 MINUTES LATER... I couldn't wait any longer. I wanted to see Lilly and Ryan. I managed to sneak out of the house with the emergency key. Holly tried to hide it but I know where she keeps all her things, in her clothes cupboard. Deep down I knew what I was doing was wrong, I was going against Holly's wishes. But I was going to listen to mums advise and keep going even if Holly didn't like me being out. I still couldn't over the fact that Lilly's whole family was cursed. I didn't really see the curse in this, I mean they all had different powers. Lilly's was she could turn into a plant, and make plants wilt and grow. Then again, it might be hard for her to get close to anyone, because her skin was touched by someone she would change into the green skinned plant person. I guess that would be pretty hard."Hey, Sam!" I turned to see Lilly at the corner of the house I grinned "Hi!" "Do you think you could close the door!" she shouted "Then come over here, I want to show you something!" With that she disappeared around the corner. I ran up the stairs closed the door and ran towards the corner. I stopped when I got there. I stared in awe at the small, glass greenhouse. I saw small colourful flowers near the edges and soil with small plants growing out of them. I should have known Lilly would have a greenhouse; she is a plant after all. I slowly entered, Lilly didn't seem to notice as I watched her squatted down to her flowers. As soon as I entered I felt as though all the worries from outside had been left out there. I felt so relaxed and at peace. "How are my babies today?" she said. I guessed she was talking to the plants. She seemed to really care about them; they looked so healthy and vibrant. She then went to the end of the row. Her smile dropped and she looked rather sad. In front of her were flowers that had wilted. She then stood up, closed her eyes and put her hand in front of her Suddenly, white beams of light shot from the ground into the air. Lilly stood perfectly still as the beams shot up. Her face was bathed in the glow of the beams. Then slowly, after a moment, the beams sunk down into the ground. I looked down at the flower patch. My eyes widen and I gasped. The flowers looked healthy and vibrant like the rest. It was like they near wilted at all. I looked back at Lilly who was now looking at me. She smiled "That's how I keep the plants healthy. If I want them to wilt, I use a different power. Pretty cool huh?" I walked up to her, feeling the wide grin on my face "That's incredible! And this greenhouse is so peaceful." "I guess it is. It's my little get away from the whole world and everything in it. I like to spend time with my babies. But anyway, moving right along, you want to meet my uncle Paul?" "Yes, of course I do!" I was really excited. I was going to meet her uncle; I wonder what his power was like?
 "I see...you cooking some pork chop for dinner, and...You'll enrolling into the local school tomorrow, the same one as Lilly and Ryan in fact..." Paul said his eyes breaking contact with mine. "So, that's going to all happen in the future?" I asked. He smiled "Yep. It can be a few seconds from now, it could be a few years later. But that school enrolling you’re going to do tomorrow, I can tell because you wrote down on the enrollment sheet it was the twenty eighth of August" Paul was a nice man, although from Lilly told me before I came into his 'reading room' he had a strange quirk and sense of humour. His power was that he could see the future just by looking into somebody's eyes. I remember when Lilly first told me her uncle could see into the future I didn't believe he could, but then when I found out about the curse and met him today I knew she was telling the truth. Everyone he met kept coming back after their first session; that's how he got so rich to buy this home and an LCD TV screen in the lounge room. "Samantha," Paul said knocking me out of my thoughts. He sounded serious now, I immediately became concerned. "Yes, Paul?" "I'm not sure if Lilly and Ryan have told you about this," he continued sounding even more serious "but for everyone who finds out about the curse we have to tell the Magician about them. So today I went over to tell him about you. He has to decide whether or not your get hypnotized. For people who know about the curse they have to be hypnotized to forget everything, including their name, who they were and basically everything. For you the Magician said..." (Next part should be out tomorrow! I know I’m EVIL! :P)

Forgotten Redemption:Chap 3, part 1

Feb 14, 2009 by Warrayfinson
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    18 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 15, 2009 alicia7tommy wrote:

    Nice job, I rated five\:\)

    On Feb 15, 2009 jennnnnie02 wrote:

    Definitely evil. Haha. Great job.(:

    On Feb 15, 2009 Quinnie wrote:

    \:mad\:      Damn, it was just getting exciting. Michelle

    On Feb 15, 2009 smiley00girl wrote:

    Omg what did he say? LoL....Can't wait for more! XD Oh and great part! :P

    On Feb 15, 2009 Fikcija wrote:

    Oh you just have to put such little parts of story and leave us hanging, don't you...
    By the way, it's better to get a bigger part of the story at once than such little bits. At least I think so. When there is so little it's difficult to really get into the story. It's like you start reading, gaining the interest and once you're really in it the story ends.

    On Feb 15, 2009 lisa9999 wrote:

    You just love to leave us hanging! LOL Great job! \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Feb 15, 2009 miller1220 wrote:

    Don't leave us all hanging here! Keep writing! I love this story! I MUST KNOW MORE!!!!!!

    On Feb 15, 2009 Little Cloud wrote:

    GRRRRRRRRRR!!! I hate you \:mad\:!!! LOL, just kidding \:D, but seriously, how can you leave us hanging there? Can't wait for the next part  \:\) \:D \;\) \:P \:cool\:

    On Feb 15, 2009 aakerhjelm wrote:

    you are doing it again. leaving us hanging there.\:\)

    On Feb 16, 2009 candy820 wrote:

    Great part. Waiting for the next one.

    On Feb 19, 2009 cep1247 wrote:

    So suspenceful. Love it!

    On Feb 24, 2009 VitaPrivata wrote:

    great story! \:cool\:

    On Mar 13, 2009 Rabold8 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: I'M BAAAAACK!!!!  I LOVE this story!  Great details, and I love how you have weaved all of the characters and their special powers so carfully into the story!  I'm moving on the the next part!!!  \:wub\: \:D

    On Mar 28, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    It's a charming story in an enchanted and umpredictable word. \:rah\:

    On Apr 6, 2009 mpatton wrote:

    Not fair to stop it like that.  I'm glad that the next chapter has been uploaded.  I'm going to go right to it.

    On Apr 6, 2009 omik79 wrote:

    OMG not fair :P

    On Apr 25, 2009 justvex wrote:

    \:o Hope she don't loose her memory. Thanks again great part

    On Jul 9, 2009 ondresim wrote:

    You are Evil!  But that's okay, I don't have to wait, since I'm reading this so late.

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