Stories / Hearts aren't pretty.
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Mercy Lee laid lazily on the couch her hulking body pushed up around her and her floppy under arms together, her hands under her head pressed together. Behind her was the depressed sigh of her modeling fiancee Drewsofer, and she slowly sat up to great him. "..Hi.."

Mercy Lee laid lazily on the couch her hulking body pushed up around her and her floppy under arms together, her hands under her head pressed together. Behind her was the depressed sigh of her modeling fiancee Drewsofer, and she slowly sat up to great him. "..Hi.." "Mercy you have to stop this. Ever since you were deployed, you've been lazing around!" He ranted, and Mercy stared at him in blank shock. He'd never gone out so angrily at her; because they loved each other so dearly. "What happened to my beautiful, sexy, girlfriend?" "I will change. I'm on a diet!" Mercy murmured covering her face then giving him a hopeful look, one for acceptance a look she'd mastered. "Mercy, it's not the weight. You gave up on feeling good about yourself, and now.." He sighed and got up. "I am going to make dinner."
 Drewsofer gave a hopeful look to his fiancee, the once extravagantly skinny, sultry and shimmery model he'd fallen in a forbidden romance with. But now she was unemployed, lazy, and didn't make an effort to make their future wedding work. In fact he wasn't sure she'd told anyone about the engagement they'd had nine months back. Back when she cared. Walking to the skinny bathroom, Mercy tried not to cry but keep her face high. Was it really that bad? Was she really done caring about herself? Trying to think back to what she'd done this week… it was all sleeping. Looking in the mirror, really looking, she began to ponder. Was this what her fiancee saw everyday? She didn't want him to see this… this hulking creature she'd become. Tears sprung to her eyes and she dabbed them with the back of her fist not wanting to mess up the make up she put on; but when she removed her hand she saw no smudge marks. When was the last time she actually wore makeup? Beep. Beep. Beep. "S-Samanth..tha? I need you to c-come over. I want to look like I used to, l-like you." "Be there in a second, love." Samantha Harper grinned and shut her phone. She'd been best friends with Mercy since they both started modeling at the same agency. Of course, Mercy's career blossomed, but Samantha's didn't. But… now they could be friends. Or, she could get her back. THAAANNKKKKSSSS A YUUUUU for reading(: this is a very serious story, and it's more about a women trying to get back the hands on romance she used to have with her fiancee. not as much about the bestfriend trying to ruin her friend's life; ahha. just a friendly warning. COMMENT PLEASE DONT LIKE, JUUUUST COMMENT (: yuk yuk yuk.

Hearts aren't pretty.

Feb 5, 2012 by DooderBee
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    6 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 6, 2012 annarose16 wrote:

    I really like this; I'm excited to read more. \:\)\:rah\:

    On Feb 6, 2012 ohsnapitselsa wrote:

    ILOVETHIS \:wub\: PLEASEWRITEMORENOW! 

    On Feb 6, 2012 snowsnow2133 wrote:

    ooh, interesting plot ^__^ im interested already! \:D

    On Feb 6, 2012 starsky524 wrote:

    Nice story!
     

    On Feb 6, 2012 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Interesting beginning!

    On Feb 21, 2012 Mangio wrote:

    Intriguing beginning.. such a wonderful start \:rah\: Please continue \;\) \:wub\:

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