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Made in Heaven

part 4 it's for Shirley(thank you for the idea!)

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Made in Heaven

part 4 it's for Shirley(thank you for the idea!)

please rate and comment! This is David,he lives on his own and don't have any friends,the neighbours don't like him.He's peculiar they say and stay away from him ,but they don't know why he's like it,what had happend in the past. That was David with his family,he was so happy back then. He said they his angels,his everything! His love to them was endless. He went to the pub after work one day as it happend! He came home and it was to late,he watched in horror as the firefighter tryed to safe them.If only he hadn't gone to the stupid pub! It's my fault! he thought. He moved away in a differend town and burried there his love.He would spend hours there,in grief and guilt. He didn't care about the people talking about him,he didn't wanted to talk to them anyway. All that happend tree years ago and he still didn't go out! He got all he needed of the internet,he spent alot time in front of the computer. He said to himself that he wasn't allowed to have fun or to be happy! One early spring morning Angela knocked on his door.He answered it.
David: I don't buy anything!
He wanted to close the door as Angela past out and he could just catch her before she hit the ground. David carried her to the sofa and lay her on it. After she woke up,he gave her a glas of water.
Angela:Thank you,my name is Angela Heaven. I was runnig the hole night because I got chased by a stranger and I got lost now. David: I didn't see anyone except you! Are you hungry?
Angela: Yes, I'm hungry and I'm so tired.And I don't know where I m.
David: Well,my name is David and first of all we have some breakfast and then you can have a nap,what do you think? So they had some breakfast and talked a bit before Angela had a nap in his bed.She woke up in the afternoon and found David in front of the computer.He got up straight away as he noticed that she was awake. David: Hungry?
Angela: Yes!
David: Why dont you have a shower and I do us something to eat.
Angela: sounds great! At the dinner they talk a lot and he told her everything,she was great to talk to,he just had to tell her about his life.
Angela: Its not your fault ! You have to start to have a life again,you have to leave the past in peace,get on,your wife wouldn't want that you are that lonly and sad! Go and get yourself a job!
 David: Maybe,your right! But what should I do?
Angela: What did you do in the past?
David: I was a police officer but I don't want that anymore.
 Angela:Can you bring me home? It's getting late! I live in Simlane 5665.
David: I call a cap,if that is all right ?
Angela: Yes,sure. After Angela was gone,he wasn't able to sleep,he thought about what she said and how he felt. It was strange but he felt much better and stronger now.Was she sent from heaven? From his wife? He suddenly thought. No there aren't such things like angles,he said to himself. He got up and phoned his parents in law and they wasn't angry with him,like he thought, just concerned because he vanished and didn't gave them a call all these years. And his parents was the same,no one blamed him for what had happend.They were so happy to hear from him! That made him even stronger. He went to his computer and thought that if he write's all down, he might feel even better, so he started to write.He wrote nearly the hole night through. Angela came the next day, to see how he's going and she was happy to see that he was shaved and that his hair was cut,he looked great! David told her about his parents and parents in law and that he had started to write everything down. Angela: That is so great! You see, everything is going to be much better from now on! You only still need a job,David !
David: Yes,I know that.I had a look on the Internet already but I didn't find something.
Angela: You will find something eventually. After Angela had left,he went back to the computer to write some more. It was dark already but he still wasn't tired. It was like Angela had pushed some button on him,that released all his safed up energy from the last three years! Suddenly he noticed that it was light outside, so he looked up and saw a fire at the neighbour's house! He went straight there and in the house. He safed the old lady,who lived there all alone.He got her out of the house and to his bench,she was safe there and then he called the fire brigade. They took her to hospital and luckely she was alright.At the next day she came with her granddaughter to thank him!
Old lady:thank you so much! You safed me! I'm going to live with my son now, it's better because the house isn't safe to live in anymore.
David: I can keep the letters for you and give them to your granddaughter.
Old lady:that's sweet of you,thank you! Angela heard about it in the news and rushed to David. He looked great.
David:Hi,Angela! I found a job as a fire fighter and you know I think it's great,I think that is what I want to do, I'm happy,you know.
Angela was happy for him but to be sure,he was alright, she came around from time to time. Sometimes she meet the neighbours or Anne( she's the granddaughter) and then she tell's them what happend three years ago and that he started a new life now.
Anne: You know, I like David a lot, are you his girlfriend?
Angela: No, he's all yours! I'm just an Angel on it's way! That was easy! she thought, all the neighbours like him now, well he's a hero saveing the Lady and I think Anne could be his future lover or even more ! That's great,isn't it,Gott? I'm moving on, alright? She just wanted to say bye to David and Anne, as she saw them looking happy together and so in love, she better don't disturb them, she thought, so she left just a note saying bye! Thank you for reading,rating and commenting!
A big thank you to the CC-makers! Your great!
A special thank you for Shirley, for the idea!
If I don't get any more idea's from anyone else then the next one will be the last, but its a sweet end, anyway!

Made in Heaven Part 4

Jul 4, 2008 by maxi king
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    18 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jul 5, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    really good chapter! thanks for sharing! \:rah\:

    On Jul 5, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    I liked this part too! Thanks for posting it, it was fun reading. \:\) I just have one question, how can you enable the rating on the storys? Because mine you can't rate, unfortunately. \:\(

    On Jul 5, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:cool\: \:cool\: \:cool\:

    On Jul 5, 2008 babygrl12345 wrote:

    Very nice! \:D

    On Jul 5, 2008 qvisn wrote:

    You made a great story from a little idea. I liked it a lot, thank you for writing for us.\:wub\:

    On Jul 6, 2008 finsgirlie wrote:

    very cute chapter nice job!

    On Jul 6, 2008 Thera_M wrote:

    Ooh uit seems on the last screenshots that Angelas heart was broken bit, wasnt it ? \:\(
    Nice story!!!

    On Jul 6, 2008 Earcat wrote:

    wonderful! another great chapter

    On Jul 7, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    Wonderful job! -plyangel456- \:D

    On Jul 7, 2008 vicarious37 wrote:

    Another great story\:\) Looking forward to reading more.

    On Jul 8, 2008 Bury me deep inside your heart wrote:

    That was nice\:rah\:

    On Jul 9, 2008 Herzen & Blasen wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Jul 10, 2008 Dolcefiorebabii wrote:

    well i love all of these stories, but its just weird seeing how like Angela and David had a real relationship; like i know you may've needed it for the things in the story, but watch how you take pictures, because you can see how it affects the things in the story; not being rude, i love these stories, honestly!!!! just a heads up

    On Jul 10, 2008 Dolcefiorebabii wrote:

    \:D

    On Sep 30, 2008 jelloonsprings wrote:

    Poor SimAngela getting her crush broken \:\(

    lol
    This was another lovely chapter!

    On Jan 25, 2009 squeakers wrote:

    \:wub\: Another lovely chapter, I just love how Angela goes around helping people, you have such an awesome gift for storytelling, keep them coming, and I'll keep reading them!!!! Now on to the next chapter!!!!!\:wub\:

    On Apr 13, 2009 wrote:

    Great chapter again. Love them all \:wub\: You are great at telling stories and the screens are always the best

    On Jan 4, 2010 topaz27 wrote:

    Awesome, I love all these stories so much \:rah\: \:wub\:

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