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Not that bad, first storie :) took me a while but i got it in the end :D comment, rate or read whatever just cheak it out ^.^
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On May 12, 2010 XXBuTtOnS wrote:
On May 15, 2010 Golden97 wrote:
Thats Your First Story? You Write Like You've Written Many!
Amazing Story, i cant wait to see what happens
On May 16, 2010 kamilka257 wrote:
nice shots!
On May 18, 2010 barbara93 wrote:
cool...can't wait for more...
On Jun 1, 2010 Divinefelinep. wrote:
haha this story is cute cant wait to read the next chapter
On Jul 2, 2010 JeciMK wrote:
Can someone please tells me how can I upload more than 15 pages in a story. Thanks in advance